The Sun and The Moon

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

like the sun he greets her...to her total surprise...what a sight to behold...the sun and the moon colide...should they be cought...the universe would come to a crash...so she warns him to leave...but the beast rather see the stars in her eyes...he dips her since she no longer falls in his arms...with parted lips...he attempts to form a seal...but the song stamps a kiss with her hand instead...ah but the beast will not take no for an answer..and the condition is that...by sunrise tomorrow she should give him a gift... he wants the sun and the moon to form a total eclips...

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Zaara

@zaaratq

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

Sargeant, awesomely written.. Beautiful.. 👏

i loved the episode.. I like it that you have compared maaneet to sun and moon.. I loved the dip.. The way maan gazing at geet was so lovely, it showed how much love he had on her.. And her reaction was so cute.. Like when she woke up, she too gazed at him lovingly before realising that maan was there..

the sun and the moon, the two extreme opposites.. Yet they combine and become one soul.. They are the every saviour of our earth.. Likewise maaneet are two extreme opposites.. Yet they are two heart that became one soul... And they are the soul of geet hui sabse parayi.. Sun and moon-maan as hot as the sun, and geet as beautiful as the moon.. I dono if you had take it this way, but me have taken this pov.. And its very apt for them..

the sun shining in the morning is definitely a good sight to watch.. And seeing stars in her eyes and he dipped her with her parting lips-- sargeant, hats off! Its obvious moment of true passion and yearning for each other.. The need to kiss have been beautifully written by your golden words again.. Love you sargeant..

thank you sargeant, i must say you are rocking in your own way with your skills..

here is your medal-- ⭐️

Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

u have a unique way of presenting...ur r inspiring me with ur words

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Zaara

@zaaratq

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

@banglores-- yes dear, our sargeant have golden hands and brain.. Thats why we get golden words from her..

@sargeant-- sargeant i have edited my post..^^ edited it twice.. Now go check.. Love ya sargeant! You are my superstar!! Btw sargeant, i cant like you.. But you know i LOVE you! 🤗

Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Me waiting for the eclipse too! 😉

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24414

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

Very well-articulated once again👏👏👏

Me too waiting for the total eclipse😍

Author: Trina Quinn

You're like the sunshine you brighten my day
With everything you do and all that you say
I'm like the moon so dark and cold,
Without you in my arms to hold.

Like the sun and the moon we're so far apart
But you're always with me here in my heart
When I see you, I glow when you shine on me
Like the sun on the moon across mountain and sea.

But when we're together and I kiss your lips
It's so wonderfully special like a total eclipse
As we drift apart slowly on me, your light glows
Like the space between us my love for you grows.

I am hoping on KC night, we get the kiss,
come on Maaneet, pick up from here😍

Edited by Maaneet-is-best - 14 years ago

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by undisclosed

Originally posted by zaara25

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Wow u too are simply superb in the way u write...I have no words either to complement u two or to add to what u both have written...just one thing I wanna say is that I always enjoy reading what u all write and appreciate the time and effort u all put into making this forum enjoyable...that goes for ALL the other members also who write for us...as well as for those who make the lovely VMs and post all the awesome pictures and news items for us...thanx a lot...

👍🏼 👏 🤗

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sush1

@sush1

Explorer

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Posted: 14 years ago

What a beautiful way you have with words. Absolutely brilliant. I do make it a point to read your post whenever I visit GF.

Keep it up.👏👏👏👏👏

Btw, by any chance did you meet Geets CVs, or dialogue writers, it seems as if you have got Barry disease, since you have also started sprouting sun moon and stars. I hope it is not contagious. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣