The Detective, The Punching Bag and The Lost Key!

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while attentions are well diverted...there is still a detective who has not given up...though his mind does give up often...and in all this the snake has become the punching bag...the object of the families rage...and the escape goat for our beloved couple...but all is fare in love and war...oh but our forgetful detective finaly remembered that he solved the mistery a long way back...and finaly has the evidence to prove it...stored safely away he goes to get the judge and his jury...but upon his return he finds that his evidence had been tampered with...and all though he is correct regarding the names of who he had originaly locked up...there was a certain change in appearance for one of them...case dismissed..

ahh...but yet there is still the case of the lost key...our beast sneaks back into our songs chambers...and since their love shines bright enough...he does away with the lights...a little role play and the mood is set for a coming together of bodies and souls...with every push there comes a pull and eventualy a drop...one on top of the other our song and beast surrender to gravity...words as sweet as honey...an inviting smile and gazes that hipnotize...and in one quick second...the case of the missing key is solved...the owner of the key to his heart is quick to come to her senses...but our beast can't have enough and refuses to part...thow when he finaly does...who should have spotted him but the forgetful detective..yet again on the case...
*btw have you all commented on DD's fanpage today?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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..our beast sneaks back into our songs chambers...and since their love shines bright enough...he does away with the lights...a little role play and the mood is set for a coming together of bodies and souls...with every push there comes a pull and eventualy a drop...one on top of the other our song and beast surrender to gravity...

Very well-articulated Teacher👏👏👏.
The heat is building up and I foresee an explosion soon, maybe on the night of KC, Maaneet will seal their lips with some
S
erious Romance to quench our thirst
😍😍

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Credit goes to Shinus for these wonderful pictures:
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Beautifully written...But she has key why she didnt give earlier...Are they waiting for bed fall...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuls11

Beautifully written...But she has key why she didnt give earlier...Are they waiting for bed fall...😆



Arey she herself wanted to spend time with maan😳
Agar pehley dedey ti to maan aur naughty kaisey hota?😉
When she got too shy then she brought it out..par thora aur rukh jaati na..geet bhi na..lol😉😆

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Originally posted by: kuls11

Beautifully written...But she has key why she didnt give earlier...Are they waiting for bed fall...😆

i wonder where she got the key from😆 ...i think she didn't want to give it at all...but as things were getting steamy she decided to give it to him..😉
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Arey she herself wanted to spend time with maan😳
Agar pehley dedey ti to maan aur naughty kaisey hota?😉
When she got too shy then she brought it out..par thora aur rukh jaati na..geet bhi na..lol😉😆

ha ha i was thinking the same thing...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_harshad



Arey she herself wanted to spend time with maan😳
Agar pehley dedey ti to maan aur naughty kaisey hota?😉
When she got too shy then she brought it out..par thora aur rukh jaati na..geet bhi na..lol😉😆



To stupid Phool ne baad main kyoon diruk jaati na ...jab maan fultoo mood main tha ek kiss ho hee lene diya hota ...kya hamra baal safed hone ka wait ker rahi hai kiss ke liye...Hmare sabra ka imthahaan le rahe hai yeh maneet😆


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i wonder where she got the key from😆 ...i think she didn't want to give it at all...but as things were getting steamy she decided to give it to him..😉


Sylia
Exactly highly stupid first get audience and MAAN hopes high...😆😆😆 That aaj to kiss ho jayega...for you in egliash today MAAN will get kiss and audience too...than put ice cold water on hopes...

NOT FAIR GEET>>>>>>>>>>>YOU CANT TAKE REVENGE WITH AUDIENCE and MAAN...not fair😭


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Posted: 14 years ago
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and since their love shines bright enough.😆

Sergeant...lovely description of today Maaneet moments(i really love the way u write👏)...she returned the key becuz she doesn't want her magical night with Maan to be in a rush rush..hush hush..way..and her circus family walking in at the wrong moment...already mammu...is not giving up..at every single noise he is on his James Bond mission...


so imagine..if he hear some other noises(like the bed breaking or the soundtrack that Geet will be making) ...he will break the door..and walk in😆...so Geet is smart...Maan has to puppy her for a while
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Sylia
Exactly highly stupid first get audience and MAAN hopes high...😆😆😆 That aaj to kiss ho jayega...for you in egliash today MAAN will get kiss and audience too...than put ice cold water on hopes...

NOT FAIR GEET>>>>>>>>>>>YOU CANT TAKE REVENGE WITH AUDIENCE and MAAN...not fair😭


yes, she is taking revenge for all those who didn't support her while she was angry at maan😆...maan leaned in for the kiss twice...but i guess geet knew that if she didn't stop him...they were going to start something they couldn't finish😉

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