The Detective, The Punching Bag and The Lost Key! - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuls11

Beautifully written...But she has key why she didnt give earlier...Are they waiting for bed fall...😆

Oh holding on to the key was a very well thought about decision I'm sure, she did want him to have an excuse to come back to the bedroom, but I wish she let him kiss her but guess she wanted it to happen when they would not be interrupted 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well written yar...
geet kya yar...
Thori dair baad key de daiti...
Posted: 14 years ago
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'Sigh' and 'sigh'. 😍
First 'sigh' for the amazing Maaneet scene which has made us all go a little crazy. The second 'sigh' is for you Sylvia for the marvelous way you wrote about Maaneet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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btw have you all commented on DD's fanpage yet?

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