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Posted: 14 years ago

before bashing me-----this is only my view seriously no offense to fans since i too loved geet.

points were i felt wrong was--

1.on saturday they showed few narration part frankly i loved it but today i felt diagloges and narration was soo chessy i had too yon a bit were maan says moon,stars,flowers were poetic but i felt it was over done few places it looked fiction like the rays of the sun dia'gls was too much.

2.geet knows maan loves her instad of saying that how much he loves her he would have cleared her doubt's that maan couldn't forgive dev and hated the reason in which geet forgave dev that hurted him the most so in anger and hurt inside he said those things.

3.gurti's acting was good no doubt about that but part 2----little bit gc acting was little overboarded were he says if he knew she will part away from him there the emotional and face expression was missing instead he nerrated stylishly that didn't go well with the scene.

but other parts were mindblowing and what do i say about dd what a brillant actress she is loved her work each bit of her expression was a feast to watch .

4.whole setup was good few places lights were irritating and i think romance part is been repeated duppata pulling shoulder pulling ,holding the face ,coming behind wispering near the ears,moving the hair .i think either the makers are limited to these scenes or the actors are limited to these scenes only that's leading to 🥱yonnn moments and scene by scene seen that before nothing new🥱.they need not give us passionate scenes but atleast give us something which we never scene.

5.i think nissar and swati were best in giving romantic scenes were each scenes were crisp not like we see now today few places it fell flat few places.

6. narration should have been conviencing because the fight was at the peak conviencing part from maan would have be at its peak but it was a poetic and fiction one not real .

7. if u want the reason why i am saying if u see old scenes u will make out why i said these .

they had few diaglo's poetic once but shot and sweet yet conviencing.

8.new maker wants to bring the magic back but i think repeating old scenes giving ur touch will not help .new things always helps.but giving new family was a good thing like lucky his part i always like to see more even pammi.

9.few diagl's plus song sequence with old clipping would have helped the scene to look really good.

10.last part hug was good

-----so these points its only my view only concerned for geet nothing else

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Iman

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Posted: 14 years ago

Well this is your opinion, but i don't agree i really loved the acting, the scenes, the dialogues and everything. Jahan tak scenes repeat hone ki baat hai i agree, i don't like that either, but honestly i didn't feel that scenes were repeated today at all. But yes i would've liked more romance😳!!!

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Jazmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

i thought today was just awesome...GC did a fabulous job as did DD...like they usually do...the letter narration is one of the best and most unique scenes i've seen...hats off to not on the actors but the entire team of GHSP

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 14 years ago

i know i will b e bashed but truly speaking except hug ,maaneet didnot toiuched my heart and neither i had goosebump . first time i had this experience maneet did not gave me any feeling . it is only my pov ,.no offence . but today i am little bit disappointed.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1
i know i will b e bashed but truly speaking except hug ,maaneet didnot toiuched my heart and neither i had goosebump . first time i had this experience maneet did not gave me any feeling . it is only my pov ,.no offence . but today i am little bit disaapoinnted.

see i thought i was the one for the first time magic was lost few scene i skipped nice to know u too felt like that.

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EBasso

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Posted: 14 years ago

Today's episode did not touch me at all..

Best episode? It wasn't even mediocre!!! It fell FAR below expectations and hopes and wishes! Koi in logo ko samjhaao bhaio aur behno, ki sirf romance se life nahi chalti!!! URRG!! What a mockery made of DIVINE LOVE!

Summary: In today's episode we saw cinematic brilliance with a lot of cinematic liberties. The episode was beautiful. The ambiance was magnificent. The effect was mesmerizing. The words of the letter were awe-inspiring. The voice modulation of Maan while narrating the words was irresistible. The pigeons added to the overall effect. The actors look simply gorgeous. The pain in Geet's eyes along with her love, the inner battle, the feeling of loss against herself, care, devotion, concern for her love, was all too evident in her expressive eyes, her "chor" eyes. So then, why didn't I feel the magic, the romance, the connection?

Chalo, I'll go through the trouble of narrating the whole episode and what I felt at each scene, in the hope that I can get my point across clearly!

Cut to Scene 1:

Repeat scene from last week, Geet running fiercely and falling on the ground in agony: very effective, very moving.

MSK sneaking up from behind her: sizzling hot, dreamy and romantic.

The zoom in on the eyes and lips: way too played out and uncalled for in this situation.

Cut to Scene 2:

Maan starts narrating the letter.

Geet, yeh khat naa to tumse maafi maangne ke liye likha hai, aur naahi tumhe apne saath le jaane ki guzaarish karne ke liye: WHAT A BRILLIANT START TO THE LETTER!! SO UNEXPECTED!!! HOPES ARE NOW ESCALATED!!

Yeh khat, ek aakhri baar likha hai sirf tumhe yeh batane ke liye, ki main tumse, kitna pyar karta hoon Geet: OKAY WHAT? THAT'S WHAT YOU STARTED OUT WITH MAAN? I LOVE YOU? OKAY FINE, I GIVE YOU THE BENEFIT OF THE DOUBT MSK, BECAUSE THAT'S ALL I HAVE BEEN HEARING YOU SAY FOR SOO LONG. LET'S HOPE THE NEXT LINES ACTUALLY TALK ABOUT THE UNDERLYING ISSUE HERE. YOU CLOSING YOUR EYES WHILE SAYING "kitna pyar karta hoon" WAS VERY IMPACTFUL, SO I SHALL LET THIS ONE GO.

Yeh bataane ke liye, ki maan ki zindgi mein Geet ki kya jagaah hai: CHALO GETTIGN WARMED UP. GOOD GOOD, KEEP GOING!

Tumhare bina meri zindgi adhoori hai Geet. Haan Geet. Agar tum meri zindgi mein nahi rahogi, toh zindgi koi maayne nahi hai Geet. Haan: WHAT? HAVEN'T WE HEARD THIS BEFORE? IN A MUCH BETTER SITUATION? I AM NOW GETTING THIS EERIE FEELING THAT THIS LETTER IS GOING TO TURN OUT TO BE A COMPOSITE OF ALL THE CLASSIC LINES MSK HAS EVER SAID TO GEET. NOT LIKING IT SO FAR.

Cut to Scene 3:

Geet, maine is jahaan ki saari khoobsoorat cheezo mein, sirf tumhe hi dekha hai. Har baat, har zarre mein sirf tumhara hi to zikr hota hai Geet. Chand se chandni ke bare mein poocho, toh tumhara hi zikr karta hai. Phool se khushboo ke bare mein phoocho, to tumhari mehek, mere sine mein sama jaati hai Geet. Geet, bas ek baar phir se, meri zindgi ko apni saanso se mehka do Geet: REALLY? NO SERIOUSLY? MAIN SHAAYAR TO NAHI, MAGAR AI GEET, JAB SE BHAAGI, TU MUJH SE DOOR, MUJH KO, SAB KUCH AA GAYA!!! SHAYARI, GOL GAPPA, KUSHTI, DRIVERY KUCH BHI KARNE KO TAIYAR HAI HAMARE BUSINESS TYCOON MAAN SINGH KHURANA! AISI BAATE MAAN KO SIKHAAI KISNE? WHAT HAPPENED TO THE CONFESSION? AREN'T THEY GOING THROUGH A MISUNDERSTANDING? AGAR MEIN APNE PATI SE GUSSA HOTI YA BAHOT HURT HOTI, TOH USKI CHIKNI CHUPDI BAATO SE MERA DIL PHISAL JAATA KYA? NOT ME, NOT WITHOUT GETTING A FULL UP EXPLANATION FROM BOTH SIDES, OF THE ACTUAL PROBLEM! 😡😡😡

Maan in Geet's lap: SURREAL! UNIQUE! BEAUTIFUL!

Geet, dil toh karta hai jaise mein tumhe, Sooraj, chaand, aur phoolo ki nazron se door hataa ke, apne sine mein choopa loon. Aur jee bhar kar tumhe pyar karta rahoon: TALKING ABOUT PYAR KARING, AGAIN! OKAY FINE, ME CHUP BILKUL CHUP. MAAN KO HI BOLTE REHNE DETE HAI!

Maan wiping Geet's tears: Eh, effective enough! Not breathtaking but not too bad!

Geet, jab mein tumhari aankho mein aansoo dekhta hoon na, to aisa lagta hai jaise mera dil, katra katra hokar in aansuon mein beh jaayega: HAAYE, NOW THIS WAS ORIGINAL. NEVER HEARD THIS BEFORE. THIS FELT LIKE IT CAME TOTALLY FROM THE HEART. THIS FELT LIKE IT BELONGED. IT RELATED TO THE SITUATION. LOVED THIS AS ONE OF THE VERY FEW GREAT DIALOGUES OF TODAY'S EPISODE. WOW! OVERPOWERING LIKE THE OLD DAYS. JUST LOVELY! I AM OVERLY EMPHESIZING THIS ONE DIALOGUE BECAUSE IT'S A NEW CLASSIC OF GEET THAT WILL PROBABLY JUST GET BURIED IN THE REST OF THE OVERLY MELODRAMATIC DIALOGUES OF TODAY. UNFORTUNATE!

Cut to Scene 4:

Pigeons on the shoulder: AMUSING YET PLEASING TO THE EYES!

Geet, agar mujhe pata hota, ki tumhara haath mere haatho ki pahonch se, kaafi door chala jaayega, toh mein tumhara haath pal bhar ke liye bhi nahi chodta. Par kudrat ko bhi kya manzoor tha, yeh kisse pata. Aur bas, tum mujh se door chali gayi: BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BARRY! HATS OFF. IF THIS WAS INTERMINGLED IN A HEART TO HEART CONFESSION, THE IMPACT OF THIS LINE WOULD HAVE BEEN OUT UNEARTHLY! BUT HERE, IT CREATED NO RIPPLES!

Cut to Scene 5:

Geet taking the letter from his feet, Maan coming very close to her, and then brushing her hair with his fingers: UNIQUE POSITIONING AND BEAUTIFUL CINEMATOGRAPHY. CREATIVITY AT ITS BEST. BUT THE ORANGE BALLS HAVE GOT TO GO.

Agar mere dil ko is baat ka zaraa bhi ehsaas hota Geet, ki tumhara chehra, mere dil se door ho jaayega, toh mein tumhe sine se laga kar, puri zindgi guzaar leta. Saans bhi itne hole se leta, ki hamaare darmiyan faasle na hote: BARRY JI LAGTA HAI AAP KO MAAN KE SINE SE BAHOT PYAR HAI, SO FAR 3 DIALOGUES MADE USE OF HIS SINA LOL! JOKES APART, BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN DIALOGUE BARRY, JUST SIMPLE BLISS. HOWEVER, IT FAILED IN CHOOING OUR "SINA" BECAUSE THIS CONFESSION IS MISSING A VERY VITAL PIECE. THE ACTUAL PROBLEM THAT STARTED THIS WHOLE ORDEAL IN THE FIRST PLACE!!!!

Cut to Scene 6:

HUG WAS REFRESHING. HIS EYES STILL KILL. HE ACTUALLY KISSED HER EAR! ALL WINNERS! BUT WAY TOO MUCH ZOOM IN ON THEIR LIPS LOL! IT'S LIKE EVEN THE GEET TEAM MEMBERS ARE NOW SERIOUSLY CRAVING A KISS. 😆

Agar mujhe khwab mein bhi yeh mehsoos hua hota, ki tumhara yeh chehra, meri nazron se door jo jaayega, to mein zindgi bhar in palko ko, jhapakne nahi deta Geet. Umra bhar ke liye apni neend ko khareed leta Geet. Aur tumhe, apni nigaho ke saamne bithaye rakhta: REALLY? ISN'T THAT KIND OF PUSHING IT? AH WHATEVER!😡

DUPATTA SCENE - NOT REQUIRED, DID NOT CREATE THE NEEDED MAGIC HERE.

Mera pyar, meri zindgi, meri khushi, Mera Wajood! Sab kuch tumse hai Geet. Jeene ki wajaah tum ho Geet. Geet Maan ke bina kuch nahi. Aur Geet ke bina Maan kuch nahi. Bas! Ek hi tamanna hai Geet. Tumhe waapas pane ki. Agar aisa nahi hua na Geet, toh yeh Maan zinda nahi rahega! Mujhe meri jannat lauta do Geet. Meri Mishty Lauta do: NICELY WRITTEN BARRY, AND I HATE TO SOUND LIKE A BROKEN RECORD, BUT HAD HE SAID THE WHOLE DIALOGUE ABOVE, RIGHT AFTER THEY DISCUSSED THE ACTUAL ISSUE, IT WOULD HAVE CREATED SOOO MUCH IMPACT! THE LAST LINE WAS VERY SENSITIVELY WRITTEN. WOULD HAVE LOVED IT HAD IT BEEN PICTURIZED AFTER A PAINFUL AND HEART TWISTING MUTUAL CONFESSION. LIKE THE FIRST CONFESSION WHERE THEY PUT ALL THEIR ISSUES ON THE TABLE. WOH BHI AAP HI NE LIKHA THA NA BARRY?

Cut to Scene 7:

Maan!!!! FINALLY GEET'S SILENCE IS BROKEN! SO FRUSTRATING TO SEE THAT SHE GOT NOTHING TO SAY IN THE ENTIRE EPISODE! SOOO FRUSTRATINGGG!!! DO CVs AND THE GEET TEAM EVER LISTEN TO THEIR FANS? HAVE THEY STOPPED HEARING OUR SCREAMS? DO THEY CARE?

Mein zindgi bhar tumhara intezaar karta rahoonga Geet. Magar tumhare bagair, mein ghar waapas nahi lautunga. Har pal, har jagaah, har samay, bas tumhara intezaar karta rahoonga. Aaaj se nahi, balki abhi se. Mein abhi yeh zindgi tumhare intezaar ke naam karta hoon. Mein peeche wali kothi mein tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon Geet. Mera yeh intezaar ab meri zindgi ke saath hi khatm hoga, ya tumhare aane se. Faisla tumhare haath mein hai.

-Tumhara Maan.

HMM! NICELY WRITTEN AGAIN! GOOD WAY TO SWEETLY THREATEN HER! WITTY JUST LIKE MSK. SWEET JUST LIKE HIS UNDYING LOVE FOR HER. BUT THIS WOULD HAVE WORKED HAD HE SAID IT AFTER HE HEARD HER REFUSE TO GO WITH HIM DURING A DEBATE ABOUT THE ACTUAL MU.

Cut to Scene 8:

EVERYONE ELSE IN THE EPISODE FELT LIKE A NUISANSE TODAY! LUCKY'S ONE AND ONLY DIALOGUE ABOUT GAYAB GAYAB KHEL RAHE HAI, BROUGHT A CHUCKLE! TEJI'S CONCERN ABOUT HER DOING SOMETHING ILL TO HERSELF WAS WELL THOUGHT OUT. OTHER THAN THAT, IT WAS MERELY A FILLER.

Cut to Scene 9:

FINALLY, A NEW KIND OF HUG. HAD BEEN WAITING FOR THIS KIND OF PASSION FOR A WHILE. LOVED THE HUG. FELT HER PAIN. FELT HIS BEKARARI. ALTHOUGH THE WHOLE EPISODE DIDN'T MOVE ME. AND I HATED THE FACT THAT GEET GOT TO SAY ABSOLUTELY NOTHING. I WAS ABLE TO PUT IT ALL ASIDE AND ENJOY THIS HUG.

PRECAP DOES NOT LOOK PROMISING!

GEET CONTINUES TO DISAPPOINT!

Edited by dtri - 14 years ago

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ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

I agree with some points... the narration could have been kept simple, and flowing without too much movement and yes, in the second part, Maans tone does not gell with the tone of the letter or its theme.. its a bit too brusque and fast..

In fact the whole setup, the back -walk , the pigeon , the decorated veranda weren't needed..

had they carried on with the simple way they did on saturday, it would have been more magical..

but todays part also had its moments.. when he lay in her lap, the tug at her dupatta(so natural that she would imagine 'maan' and quintessential-maan-gestures) .., the tension in the last few sentences(the last scene) in the letter was typical Maan, and Geet could feel the strong tug of his will...

As for the contents of the letter.. no, both knew why Geet was hurt so no explanations were needed.. Geet knew he spoke in anger and Maan knew all there was to know from dev, so no .. even the apology wasn't required now..

all that Maan needed to assert was that Geet was indeed an integral part of his identity... the very identity that he had discredited with his words.. all that was needed was for Geet to have the confidence again in their love, in knowing that he does not despise her, in fact he defines himself through her.. thats all the reassurance she needs. and the letter gave her that and more😍❤️

The CV's did let go a little too much with a couple of lines, but I have come to associate quaint , antiquated romantic lines with Maan Singh Khurana by now, so I kinda like them... they have his essence through and through..

the other scenes... like the coming close, the half kiss, .. the something-missing-in-them feeling I attribute to weird camera angles.. even too much focus on lips (that took away from the dialogues) it was not needed.. and lastly these are not the scenes where they shud experiment with new music.. todays bg score was hard on the ears and jarring to the flow of narration..

oh but.. simply loved the last hug, the expressions, the pace, the HUG..😍 that scene again kinda made up for anything

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Taiyo

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Posted: 14 years ago

The dialogues were over the top poetic. 😆 Found them darn silly ... 😆😆😆

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Parinita Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

I respect all of yours' views and opinions but to me today's episode was mixture of emotions, pain and respect towards each other.

Maan's expressions and body moves were excellent today. The time he said that"this letter is not to force you to come with me, but tell you how much I love you', he closes his eyes and the scene was one of the best scenes ever.

According to Maan this was the last time to convince her, so justifies the length of the event. And he tried to put all his effort to attract her towards him and he was confident that he would be successful. That's how he is, never gives up.

I know there was overdose of everything but I think Maan and Geet deserve that much to show their everlasting love which was never lost.😛

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Lyla Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I only agree with ur one point where u say they showed too much camera on lips..me too find it rather irritating..it doesnt look good actually..but other than dat everything was perfect!!

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