OS: TORN AGAIN(Part 2 pg 10)

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

very touching and lovely heart wrenching OS dear...thanks for the pm...

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

spellbound . plz do continue.

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

sob siob sob...

cant decide its tears for the beautiful past or the harsh present..

u were just wow babay!!

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

aash: Thnnks darling...next time no making u cry..pakka..happy wala.. but give me some time

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

frnd...

ur updates were

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Cute... n dear...

4 ur ...n also .........👏👏👍🏼

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4 PM me...😊.

keep updating dear...

..4 ur future work.😃..

dear lots of n ...🤗

always dear...

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

beautiful...the body without her soul...

but the thought is really scary to lose the person u love most

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Arwenish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Shreya... 😭whats that... both Maan n baby gone...😭

but its a brllinat piece of writing... while reading i felt chills running through my body... but you killed Maan and baby too...😭

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

I am sry for that arwenish..but i didnt want the baby to come..coz i didnt know how will she live without HIM..did u read the sec part..

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Arwenish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Shreya... me read part 2 just now... how lonely Geet is...😔... and now me is feeling lonely... and going to eat some kheer...😛

But both these parts are brilliant... me never read anything like this before... your style of writing is amazing and spell binding...

I just cant stand this much sorrow... me meet few Shaheeds families during my internship... and majority were young widows with little babies and their husbands died just after year or 2 or 3 after their marriages... seeing them and now reading your story i ve yet again realized that how helpless men is when death comes and separate two soul mates n partners...😒

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Thnks arwenish..this is the saddist one i have written..baaki are all happy ones..sacchi..all lovey dovey too..bus kabhi kabhi i go mad and write such sad stuff..

and to live without a person whom u depned upon for ur saansein too...is killing..thst all i wanted to say in this OS..and i think some got it across too...