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saanjh rathore

@saanjh11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

My love for you is like water,
Falling countless…
The beating of my heart,
For you is so heavy and soundless,
The feeling of being in your arm is so
Precious and endless.

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Bibi K-Villa

@lovetheserial

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

👏Fabulous poem👍🏼. So tells the story of Maan and Geet.❤️

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Chelsha

@Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Absoluv
Lovely poem dear...perfect for MAANEET...luved it ...👍🏼

When i first read this poem i felt 'wow, it goes well along with our Maaneet.'
But when i wanted to share it, i wasnt sure how many friends would agree with it.
But when 'Absoluv' says 'its perfect for Maaneet' its a conformation for me.
So thanks for commenting and loving it dear.
😊

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Bibi K-Villa

@lovetheserial

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

My love for you is like water,
Falling countless…
The beating of my heart,
For you is so heavy and soundless,
The feeling of being in your arm is so
Precious and endless.

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Sanjh:

Really touching too👏. Today I hear Maans heart rhythmically ❤️beating, echoing this poem for Geet.😛

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Chelsha

@Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sanjh1234
My love for you is like water,
Falling countless…
The beating of my heart,
For you is so heavy and soundless,
The feeling of being in your arm is so
Precious and endless.

Wow Sanjh,
What a lovely poem yaar.
Maaneets love for each other made you a great poet and me your poem lover.
Thanks for the
beautiful poem dear.
😊

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

A special world for you and me.
maan and geet don't need any one else to be complete
A special bond one cannot see.

they can feel eachother's presence even when they are apart
It wraps us up in its cocoon.

they can't even attempt to walk away from the other
And holds us fiercely in its womb.

they are held to together despite by a powerful force
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold.

their love is of great value
Gently nestling us to the fold.

their love is also very delicate
Like silken thread it holds us fast.

though beautiful, there love has resilience
Bonds like this are meant to last.

there love is defenitely eternal
And though at times a thread may break

yes, they are sometimes forced apart from the other

a new one forms in its wake.

the distance does not last for long
To bind us closer and keep us strong.

their new new bond will be stronger than ever
In a special world where we belong.

and they'll continue to just only need eachother.....i loved this poem...it was super sweat!

Edited by undisclosed - 14 years ago

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Chelsha

@Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lovetheserial
👏 Fabulous poem👍🏼. So tells the story of Maan and Geet.❤️

Thank you dear.
Yes, it sounds as if its written only for Maan and Geet. 😊

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Chelsha

@Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: lovetheserial

Sanjh:<

Really touching too👏. Today I hear Maans heart rhythmically ❤️beating, echoing this poem for Geet.😛

Your description is also fantabulous dear.

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Chelsha

@Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

@undisclosed
Silvi dear,
My poetic queen,
Am i ever able to find any appropriate word to praise
Your poetic talents?!!! Never dear. Every single word i write to appreciate you falls short failing to reach my goal.
We call 'the great poetess Sarojini Naidu as the Nightingale of India.'
You are the Nightingale of Indian forum our Maaneet has given us dear.
Your poetic lines always touch me- like a drizzle in summer,
Like the soft waves of the sea, like a gentle breeze in spring.
........
I just said that the poem is perfect for Maaneet.
But you beautifully related every single word with our Maan and Geet.
That too in your own poetic way.
Love you silvi.
Love you so much. ❤️