OS: A Moment So Slow ~ MG ~

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

It was so beautiful....I had tears at the end of it .....I pray that nobody has to go through this ever in their lives.....

Edited by LuvScooby - 14 years ago

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Isha

@JilyPotter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: jnawaz
i LOVED how you started your OS the way i start and end many...requesting the lovely readers to not kill me...ha ha 😆😆😆...

haw...no maan 😲😲😲 woh kahaan gaye? i loved how you penned down Geets emotions before the flashback...really well done 👏👏👏...pls tell me the secret of Geet's...how did she manage to get a man...driving a mercedes while still in college...nevermind how she got MSK! 😳😳😳 share the wealth jaani...share the wealth...😛...yeh maan toh bada besharam hai...ek toh...he's an HOUR late...oh h*ll no!! and then he's talking about cindy...marne ka shok hai kya 😉😉...OMG!!! he brought her to the grand canyon...omg...isnt that place awesome!! but sooo scary...i never could close to the edge...even with the railings...ha ha...the proposal was soooo cute!! heart warming...awww!!! ⭐️⭐️...lmao at the whole "this is my side" thing 🤣 thats something i've never read before...good one!! the whole baby thing....thats too cute..."why dont you go get one"...ha ha 🤣...and she lost the baby...omg 😭....what happened to him...accident or something...omg...how could you KILL them BOTH!! thats just cruel!! even curler than me! 😭😭...

but...awesome...loved it
JAZ

Yup, I did exactly like you. I too value my life. 😆

Our Maan is already rich😉.....Geet is a charmer😆

The Grand Canyon is truly beautiful, i was scared the first time to but than got use to it, but i dont let my little bro anywhere near the edges, even if it has railings....

'This is my side', was a spur of the moment...

and yes it was an accident, i think i should of clarified on that. Oops.

Looking back, i see that i was crueler than you OMG😲......

IDK y i killed the baby, i just had to. It didnt seem to fit...😕

But thank for loving it😳....

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

beautiful one

but sad i know every story doenst need happy ending my dear where is the update i miss reading thank yuuuuuuuuu so muchhhhhhhhhhhh

thanks pm

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minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

hey nice os....!
plz add me to ur pm list and do pm me whenever u update it next tym

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

An emotional one . Awesome dear.

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

a very sad and emotional one.................

right not all story has a happy ending.............a

the ones that r emotional like thisstays in ur heart forever..............

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Awwww....so sad 😭 but still very well written👏

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Laila

@lailapnj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Good one but made me cry......................

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Ilovemsk

@Ilovemsk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

this was actually amazing,,,

so sad.....beautifullly written

my face was sticking to screen heart beat went low....lol

awesome...if u write ANYTHING pm me :)

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kathie_berns

@kathie_berns

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Beautiful.. I have no words to describe how emotional i felt readin your work... The pain and loneliness experienced by geet was brought out beautifully....

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