OS: There You'll Be - Page 8

OMG!!😲 humi!! aaj friendship day hai aur tune hume rula diya!! 😭but damn it ...the vm was flawless!!👏 im happy shedding these tears...if anyone has a problem they can talk to me...and aaj aagar meri chittar parade bhi hojayeh naa...tho koi baath nahin...bring it on!! OMG OMG OMG!! i cant tell you how much i just love this!! just...LOVE IT!!!😳 the part where you used the old scenes to go with the new story you made...Darji saying she has to loose suhag ki nishani!! omg...*jaz dead*!!! the scenes...the dialogues...the song...everything!!👏 i swear by Babaji!! i had chills running through my body!!! dont get me started on the scene with geet taking all her suhag ki nishani off and then the white suit...OMG!!😲 that was bloody brilliant!!! 1:52 to 2:01...the way you had the black and white flashes behind the colored scene~!! ⭐️omg...TO DIE FOR!!! and the ending...how you did geet in color but maan in black and white!! omg...and the dialogue!!😭 OMG OMG OMG!! here is where i began bawling!!! 🥺 perfect vm yaar!! just...perfect!!! i am going to watch this over and over and over and over again!! humi!! I LOVE YOU!!!! thanks so much for such a painfully beautiful vm!!! and thanks for dedicating it to me!! eeps!!! *hug*🤗

JAZ

Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

Why do I have a bad feeling about this one shot or am I just too used to you pulling something on us all the time?! Huh?!?! I really hope this one shot is not going in the direction I'm thinking its going :( I'll be reallyyy sad if it does'and if it doesn't, I'm never going to tell you where I thought it was going'.ufff!! What do you think, I'm going to give you another bahana to make us cry??!! NO!!!!!!!! im reading this laughing cuz you guessed absolutely right!! ha ah...you know me too well!! 😉...most people didnt see it coming...cuz they just figured Maan was busy or something...but i knew my twins would figure it out before too long!! 😉

OHHH FISHHH!!! I KNEWWW ITTT!!!! NOOO!!! I AM SOOO CUTYYY WITH YOU!!!! Never neverrr going to forgive you :( :( lol...I LOVE YOU!!! 🤗

Tears fell from Geet's eyes as she still remembered sitting on the sidewalk, numb, while a white sheet covered Maan's lifeless body. With his body lay all of the dreams they'd dreamt together. With his body lay both their futures, both their happiness and both their hopes. When he had stopped living, so had everything else. When his soul had left his body, so had everything else. - :( I don't like you Jaz!! I really don't!!! WHYYY do you do this?!!!?!??! ILU ILU ILU!!! gaana gaoun for you!? 😛

That is why she called his phone so many times throughout the day ' simply to hear his voice. That is why she still paid for a phone line that was no longer used ' simply to hear his voice. That is also why she listened to that anniversary message daily after coming home. She still had his voice with her ' I knew it!!! This was the toughest part to read'Geet pretending like he's still here with her! This was also my favorite part of the One shot'Geet trying to live a normal life, as if he's here, in the present with her'but why wouldn't he be'he's here in the form of their child'you wrote this sooo well JAZZZ!!!1 Ufff!! WHY AM I BEING NICE YOU YOU!?!?! I should be throwing belans and tamatar at youuu!!! But ufff, I also kinda love you'so I can't help it :( he he...it was all about the voice...that kept him with her on some level!! i had been listening to that song one day and the idea just came to me...about how such trivial things mean so much when the person is gone...like in the movie PS I Love You 😭

The tears because she missed her Maan ' she missed his touch, she missed his love. The smile because she knew he was still with her ' because she carried his child in her womb. The smile because she knew that for the rest of her life, no matter what happened his child would be with her. The smile because she knew for the rest of her life, he would be with her. ' The ONLY reason we are even WILLING to forgive you for killing Maan is because of this paragraph!!!!! ONLY and ONLY because this paragraph is BEYOND fabulous and beautiful! You are forgiven, Okay Jaz?! But if you EVER, and I mean EVER do this to us again, then we're just going to HAVE to kill you!!! lol..phir toh i think i should run...he he...😛

Originally posted by: shine_bright

I have never cried while reading ANY kind of story in my life ..

NEVER.

This story ...made me cry!

&& ii write this with tears in my eyes...

This was beautiful ...mainly cauz you really connected with me ...

Amazing job.

I wish ii could give you like the HUGEST hug ever!

&& ii keep reading after the part where he dies && cry more every time.

This is So-Beautiful <3

Keep up the spectacular job :)

Titanic didn't even make me cry!

THIS DID!

YOU ARE AMAZING GIRL!

-Janhvi❤️

aww...dont cry...but...i guess im happy that i made you cry...and omg...how could you not cry in titanic...i was bawling like a baby!! but them im very emotional...kya karoon..but im happy that you enjoyed it and that i was able to portray the emotions i wanted to...😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

aww...dont cry...but...i guess im happy that i made you cry...and omg...how could you not cry in titanic...i was bawling like a baby!! but them im very emotional...kya karoon..but im happy that you enjoyed it and that i was able to portray the emotions i wanted to...😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: shine_bright

ahahahah!

okaay, so ii tried crying :P

The first ever Romantic Movie to make me cry was Anjaana Anjaani ..

&& the first EVER movie to make me cry was (don't laugh) Koi Mil Gaya, when Jaado was leaving -___-

Yees. I am still a baachiii..

lool!

🤣...seriously...Jadoo leaving!! lmfao!! but shh...me too!! 😉

JAZ