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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
your saying we shouldn't kill u when u killed our maan how dare u lolzzzzzzzz!!!!!! just kidding but pretty sad.😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow it remind me the movie p.s i love yu i dont know if yu watched emotional but super brilliant love it thank yu thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
i hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
t hate u
i hate u
i hate u..............
u made me cry first thing in the morning.............😭
i cant even kill as there will be no one to write then~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was an emotional roller coaster ride! OMG I had tears after reading this OS. I had to pause before I wrote this comment.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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K jazzy I would kill ya but no since u listen to me and wrote another OS for us love u for that yaar it was beautifully written very emotional keep writing love u r writing.

Love Ya '
see u tomorrow
Raman
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

It was so beautifully written.👏

Personally I don't like sad ending stories as life is full of tensions already. But its reality.

When I started reading, half of 1st post gave me an inkling of something fishy. When Geet notified everything in Maan's phone, I knew it he's dead. 😭 But story was so intriguing that I could not stop in between. It was awesome job.

Geet had final gift 4rom Maan, that was lovely.

Loved it ⭐️👍🏼

PS. Next time I don't want sad ending. write a happy maneet story

Edited by serenelove - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
emotional one!
i m still crying!😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Gawd i hate myself.....😭😭 Jaz u did it again....awesome OS nevertheless
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
that was just sad. really, really sad. I think I started suspecting the truth on that third call that went to maan's voicemail, but it was still heartbreaking reading the rest of it. I really, really wish that you would have warning labels on these stories! I really, really don't like sad stories. 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ms. Jas...I really like that! No one's ever called me that before. Lol, in the middle of my ranting God (ehm Babaji) forbid that I dont say thank you so I'll thank you right now. Thank you SO SO SO SO SO MUCH :D Its such an amazing feeling to have your name up there in the dedications :D Its different for vms (not that i dont like it :P) but its a completely different feeling for a piece of writing. Shoot, i said thank you. I want to say it again - THANK YOU JAZ...please dont beat me up. *shielding one's self*
Jokes apart, here we go with my list thing:
- I love the Geet waking up late thing. So subtle but its something we (well I) go through every day :) I can so imagine that happening to Geet if this was her real story. Lol
- "Geet immediately got to work." Again, so subtle but fits Geet exactly. When she has so much work to do, she would get started right away and make sure she finishes it and does a good job. I love these little things :)
- Mrs. Khurana...sigh...that she is. That she is. See what I mean about the little things?
- Lol all the stuff she ordered...reminded me so much of the Dhaba scene. :D And so you want the usual? HAHA
- Pinky and Adi!! awwwww
- ...
- ...
-😭😭😭 ARGH why is there no emoticon where there is a bucket underneath and its full of tears. You know Im not one of those people that can ever guess whats going to happen so when that part came (YOU know which part!) I kinda sat there in shock and then I started crying. Is it really that hard to write a story where hes not dead, or "cheating" or gone off to war? Im just kidding, you know I love you. And I love whatever you write. Not just because it was written by you but because you are seriously talented. Look! You made me cry, I had to feel some emotion in the story for that to happen, right?
- "You better miss me." 😭 You have no idea how much...
- What really makes me cry is the fact that he risked his own life to save that girl. Its not just some bomb in a plane story or a regular car crash but my gosh, he saved a CHILD's life. Who has barely seen anything in the world yet...what a man.
- "Tears fell from Geet's eyes as she still remembered sitting on the sidewalk, numb, while a white sheet covered Maan's lifeless body. With his body lay all of the dreams they'd dreamt together. With his body lay both their futures, both their happiness and both their hopes. When he had stopped living, so had everything else. When his soul had left his body, so had everything else."
WHY WHY WHY?! Do you do this to me?!
- Those last 2 paragraphs, my gosh. I've never seen anything so beautifully written, so filled with emotion. Forget OS's and FF's but any story, poem or book. My gosh. It still makes you want to cry. You know, I think ite fairly simple to make someone smile. You can make someone smile through simple gestures (like getting flowers in this story :P) but Jaz, it takes a lot to make someone cry. So you must really be something if you can make someone feel a story to that extent. To such a deep extent. You know what I mean?
You know what, I do love you therefore I wont kill you. As always, I'm amazed at how much I can hate you and love you at the same time. Now I have to get myself a tissue and keep reminding myself that this OS is not real.

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