OS: There You'll Be - Page 6

P.S. where's my pm reply!?!?

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so you've left me speechless! truly speechless.....well not as bad as zkh actually (lol..u'll understand what i mean if u've read my pm) but damnn girl...it felt soo good to see/read jaz api back in action! you know as filmy as it sounds...i could imagine man sort of being up in the sky looking down on geet and smiling at her antics. the black and white pictures that you talked about reminded me of the one he actually has....naturally smiling...it's in the spoilers thread somewhere...LOL! so what i really lovedd about this os were the visuals...not that you directly gave any, but i could clearly imagine each and every scene! i loved the setting.....very modern. i lovedd the college reference...showed that they met, fell in love, got married..lol...i know its may sound like a lame thing to love, but you know i'm a sucker for details :P i also loved how he died saving someone else's life. and i also loved their lifestyle....i mean..an apartment for two, a party for friends, good occupations (okay so the word "good" here sounds soo pathetic...and i'm sorry but i couldn't think of anything else to say).

now the voice mail! woww.....i was thinking about that actually....that she's still paying for an extra phone line...and then i'm like okay i'm over analysing this, its an os and that too a sad one, i doubt such little things matter.....but as always you cleared my confusion...LOL. but one more thing...the flowers will only be coming for one year? what bout after that?..okay i know i'm sorry....what a stupid thing to mention after such a sad os! sorry babes!

okay so noww.....here's what i started thinking..what about a similar story.....or entirely different, from maan's perspective? don't get too over excited, i'm still not too fond of your fetish for sad stories :P but still...and yes i have read your os without my mishti or something like that.....but like....that wasn't as detailed as this one.....so what say? or or or....i also remember reading one of your peppy oneshots (sorry hun can't remember the name at all!) so how about we head back on that track?! LOL...c'mon yaar api...the show seems to be getting more jovial these days, so why not ur os....i'm sure u can come up with something totally cute and funny for maaneet!

oh and finally.....i'm gonna go check out homecoming....not that i didn't want to before...but now that it's done and i'm missing you very badly...im gonna attempt reading it all in one go tonite! wish me luck! and yes i do have school 2moro.....but dw....i got this ;)

takee caree sweets!

loveee

ur Sammy Bacha

P.S. hmm....don't think this one was as long as my old comments....but dw...i'm slowly getting back into the swing of things ;P

When i read it first time... and he wasn't taking the call... i was sure something was wrong... and knowing ur penchant for sad stories... i was keeping my fingers crossed but then came the punch with that one line!

Indeed it takes a moment for the life to alter... a soulful couple separated by death yet when did love ever had boundaries to confine the warmth, care and comfort that emancipitate fromt he sheer emotion... it runs beyond the passages of life and death! coz when the souls are connected separation of any kind is temporary!

Maan's death was painful... there she was ordering pizza for dinner and never would have she imagined in her wildest dream that things were going to alter permanently for this lifetime... isolation... lonely and grief... it engulfed her and me too as a reader when i couldn't stop the tears to flow from my eyes... she holding onto his memories that voice to carry on... coz that was all that was left for her to drew strength and carry on... she atleast had hope in the form of her baby... so sad however Maan never got to know abt this happiness of his life...

it was heart wrenching to see her in such grief... my heart went out for her... when she sat there on the porch staring into nothingness when all her dreams shattered with him!

It was a beautiful read Jaz... thanks a loads

you made me cry AGAIN....

i was okay in the beginning thinking that maan was just okay and busy and that Geet and Maan are having a normal day...Boy was i wrong!!!

She comes home and saves the anniversary message cause it was him congratulating them.....

and she calls him EVERY DAY just to listento his voice...I am serious i couldnt even see the words on the screen..I was CRYING like a baby....

and the story behind his death was heart wrenching....i couldnt read on but i had to...

and Geet just pretending as if he is living with them...and the boquet of flowers....No words..NO words...

A child, that maan will never see, never love...and Geet crying herself to sleep every night, how much worse can it get

Killing her self, but the baby along, she knew that he will always be there, with her....that is LOVE....the bad side is the hurt and pain will ALWAYS be there...

I want to hate this OS for making me cry like a little baby,,but IT WAS TOO GOOD....