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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Omggggg...I have tears in my eyes..I wanna hate u but I can't because even this sad story was written so beautifully...seriously..I loved it despite the tears I had...oddly I was teary eyed yet smiling at the same time...
Off I go to read home coming and ek paal..I know they have happy endings....

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

^ jaani...you dont need to tell guli...she agrees with me!! i come first!! even jiju knows it! ha ha...we already have the deal set up...when she's pregnant...i will be FIRST to know...not Jiju...hell...im gonna accompany her to the docs office!! ha ha...my mother is horrified that i tag along with them everywhere...im like no Maa...its Jiju who tags along! ha ha

JAZ

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

sigh... back ur sadist mode 😆 .. but I loved it ... awesomely written

love

Sana

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

OMG i was so excited at first reading it..
but then got the shock after reading he was dead 😲😭
ohhh thats so sad but still touching 😭
you are an amazing writer 🤗

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Jaz..soch lokki kya kahenge...socho socho...besharam...Lets imagine wht ur mom will be like.."Yeh aaj kal ke bacche bhi ajeeb hain..samajhthe nahi hain ki ab woh parayi ho gayi hai..use jaane de..par nahi yeh toh un dono ko akela chodti nahi hai.."🤣

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Jaz 🤗.........lovely and sad OS......another awesome work of yours.......have no words left......u deserve this 👏and this 👍🏼 .....plz continue writing.......thank u for everything.....really appreciate your effort......TC. 😊

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

beautifully written .my heart is thumping with accelerating pace .so, much of pain but yes with a peace that geet is not alone but still .............................................................................not able to write anything .