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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

ahh...you know me sooo well!! ha ha...*muah*

JAZ

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

i'm quietly wiping the tears frm the corner of my eyes so that my son who is sitting near me wudn't notice his mom crying over a story!! ur style is so natural and unique!! looking out for more ....

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saloni

@angelina_2005

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hey lovely and an emotional part....

thanks for d pm

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saloni

@angelina_2005

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

hey loved this emotional one shot...

hey apologize for the double post

Edited by angelina_2005 - 14 years ago

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

u made me cry..............i know i hv to be mad @ u for killing maan but the way u hv expressed her feelings and love fr maan was awesome..............

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

hey dear U r amazing.. itz so beautiful and emotional.. am speechless.. luved it..

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

I swear I'm never reading your Os's again.... cross my heart and hope to die😳...

that gutted and wrenched and squeezed the life out of me... I kinda had an inkling from the beginning but the way you went into the description... I.. I might just start bawling even thinking about it..

I hate to say this but-- thats brilliantly written...😔 god! Theres something massive lodged in my throat right now.. painful and choking..

Edited by ninand - 14 years ago

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

^^ hey...itni bhi buri nahin hoon yaar...even i write happy one shots...every once in a blue moon...but it does happen...he he

JAZ

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

lovely.....👏

n emotional...😭

somewhere while reading i knew maan was dead...the way she was talking n everything....

but i thought mayb i'm wrong....jaz wud not write such things.....

but i was so wrong....😡

next time u decide to write a sad OS...plz give a warning...

so that i might try to skip it...

itne lovely FF ke baad itna sad OS....

if i knew this was sad i might have read it first n then the epilogues...

uuhhhh....

Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

JAz i am pakka gonna kill u...can u stop making me cry girl...i cried when i read homecoming and now this one too..baby wht did i ever do to u...i dont even write sad stuff anymore...why do u..

BUT it was really beautiful...I never liked PS i love u..but i loved this..every bit of it..thnku darling..

and Guli u seriously need to get this woman checked..she is behind breaking ur new marriage..look wht she is writing in the note..