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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Zamee 🤗......lovely updates......the story is getting so interesting......waiting to see where this voyage ends ......plz continue ....thank u for the PM....TC 😊



Thank You
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Hey Nice part!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maaneet, both are equally adamant,
and hamesha works with tedha method....................
They were adorable................
I am happy for Geet, as she got a chance to build her confidence , that too with the immense support of her Childhoon fav friend................😊
Precap was dangerous.................😳
oh well i guess i just have to fast forward it coz you guys are not interested right??
"well i dont agree...............no need to fast forward..............
let us know the details of thoughts slowly and clearly..............."Take it easy............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: PurplePetal

OMG...2 updates....Well i did miss out on the first one...

but hey. I got to read TWO updates in a row!!!!! YAY

The first one: Maan has his ways with words. Not that geet isnt stubborn and all..but man Maan can have his way. forcibly and willingly...
And Geet is so trying to keep the distance but i doesnt seem to work out with Maan being the prize...Interior Designer...She actually thinks that will work...

The Second One: OMFG....that room in a yacht...You have got to be kidding me. I totally want a yacht like that. When i get rich....my dream...It seems to beautiful and extravagant...I LOVED your description..and tub that can fill 4 people...I wonder what is on her mind...

And maan at the door from a SHOWER and still WET...i literally died...and Maan sexy feet...That was to funny and cute....
and the sudden KISS....and maan's remark..OMG...he is such a...(you know the word)....
And Geet was late on his comment...

and Next update is going to contain some hot and sexy things. i see...
Cant Wait...Please update soon....this precap is killer....

FABULOUS updates...TO GOOD.....LOVED IT...

OMG that was a huuuugggeeee cooommmmeeennnttt and you soo deserved a repy for that one..!!!!!!thanx soo much loveee.

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
so now the characters are sketched so they do deserve some fun *ahem* cough* time on their own LOOOOLLL 😆
m sure youre gonna love the next three updates.. 😆
thanx againnnnn 😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hey Nice part!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maaneet, both are equally adamant,
and hamesha works with tedha method....................
They were adorable................
I am happy for Geet, as she got a chance to build her confidence , that too with the immense support of her Childhoon fav friend................😊
Precap was dangerous.................😳
oh well i guess i just have to fast forward it coz you guys are not interested right??
"well i dont agree...............no need to fast forward..............
let us know the details of thoughts slowly and clearly..............."Take it easy............

hahahahaha 😆😆 i cant help but laugh at your comments... yes darling i wont fast forward and show whatever they do with EXPLICIT DETAIL 😆😆
KEEP COMMENTTING AND YOU MIGHT SEE AN UPDATE SOOONER 😃😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awesome!

loved it!
thnx 4 the pms!
i m mature enough 2 read the next part!😳
continue sooN!

LOOOLLL 😆 thanx babes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

omg...fabulous update....

loved it...
maan is so unpredictable....but i think that is for geet only...
she is getting her confidence back.....
looking at everything with a professional look...
love it...
waiting for the next part....update soon....

yes she is infact getting her confidence backk... thanks to our hero 😉
thanx babe..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

aah u updated again. thank u sooooooooooo much for that.

it was as usual an awesum update.
poor geet she still has doubts about her self appearance.
can u plz fix her face??? i know the story is about to accept eachother with flaws but once they do can u plzzzz fix her😍

ahh u welcome babe..!!
yeah she does doubt it but it ll all go away soon... infact the eye patch is a very important part of the story, itll be gone but you need to wait and see how 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: undisclosed

aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...i'm dead again....maan just starts kissing her out of nowhere...i love that...the precap is just...😳....

hes our hero man he ought to kiss her like that 😆😆
keep waiting...!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
so that's that hmmm... good update and the best part is geet's designer side is coming up slowly and she is processing things and all the'activities' in a very serious and distinct angle... weather its the tangy orange combo or the ahem ahem bathroom shower scenes..hehehe..
its all good to read and wud surely like to read more of it... liking it loving it and ofcourse into it!!! do write more and keep it up deary!!!

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