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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: -Premeena-
hes our hero man he ought to kiss her like that 😆😆
keep waiting...!!😛

i'm holding on by a string...i was so excite to see that you had updated again...now i feel spoiled and can't help it...i need more....plus you just killed me with the precap...how can i wait and still be a live....just tell me how many pages i have to fill up....😆

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-Premeena-

@-Premeena-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: undisclosed

i'm holding on by a string...i was so excite to see that you had updated again...now i feel spoiled and can't help it...i need more....plus you just killed me with the precap...how can i wait and still be a live....just tell me how many pages i have to fill up....😆

LOL lets say it reaches 15??😆

sorry m just in a crazy mood ryt now..!! will definetly update it tomorrow though.. 😉

i feel like putting a gap for a while so you might even see it on friday u know 😆😆

anyway lets see what i feel like doing

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Sakshi

@SakshiGarg

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

omg zamee....... u r such a cliffhanger.......😆

plzzzz give us the next update soon..... otherwise we r gonna die out of our own imagination🤣

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Niharika

@NaughtyNihu

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

🤗 🤗 🤗omg dat was fab zameee!!! gosh am so ahppy you write this or else i would miss such a masterpiece!!!

the fav part was the way you described maan....
. Maan- fresh from the shower with his hair still damp. Dressed in snug-fitting jeans with sexy bare feet and a crisp clean shirt with the sleeves pushed back to reveal his powerful forearms.👏

continue soon plsss!!!☺️plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Awesome update

Loved it

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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Riddma

@Riddma

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Hey thank you so much for the link oh plz don't torture us the current tracks doing that lol but I like your torture not the current tracks lol any ways UPDATE SOOOONNNN PLZ [B][/B][I][/I]

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: -Premeena-

OMG that was a huuuugggeeee cooommmmeeennnttt and you soo deserved a repy for that one..!!!!!!thanx soo much loveee.

🤗

so now the characters are sketched so they do deserve some fun *ahem* cough* time on their own LOOOOLLL 😆

m sure youre gonna love the next three updates.. 😆

thanx againnnnn 😃😃

YOUR WELCOME😳...but your story is just so fantastic that i cant help but have a long comment...

FUN😉...I see what you are thinking. I dont mind some fun, actually...

3 UPDATES😲...How long are they gonna have fun😆....

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known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

wonderful update love it pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm

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namitasin

@namitasin

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Lvd all parts ,enjoyd alot thanks for pm.

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: -Premeena-
LOL lets say it reaches 15??😆
sorry m just in a crazy mood ryt now..!! will definetly update it tomorrow though.. 😉

i feel like putting a gap for a while so you might even see it on friday u know 😆😆

anyway lets see what i feel like doing 😛

to page 15 it is then..