the voyage next part link pg 16 1/04

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

wonderful part............wow!!! what a yatch

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

awesome part. loved it.
precap is nice and interesting.

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basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

aah u updated again. thank u sooooooooooo much for that.

it was as usual an awesum update.

poor geet she still has doubts about her self appearance.

can u plz fix her face??? i know the story is about to accept eachother with flaws but once they do can u plzzzz fix her😍

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undisclosed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...i'm dead again....maan just starts kissing her out of nowhere...i love that...the precap is just...😳....

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zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

well waiting for the next part 😳

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

omg...fabulous update....

loved it...

maan is so unpredictable....but i think that is for geet only...

she is getting her confidence back.....

looking at everything with a professional look...

love it...

waiting for the next part....update soon....

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

part 2
awesome one..................
Maan is a teaser.....................

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

part 3
OMG fantastic...................
awesome.......................
and absolutely cant wait for the next part..................
cont soon dear............................

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

omg.....fantabulous updates.........cannot wait please update soon and pm wen u update. u r a wonderful writer........... 😊

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

awesome!

loved it!

thnx 4 the pms!

i m mature enough 2 read the next part!😳

continue sooN!

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