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Posted: 14 years ago
feeling sorry for geet!...how she was waiting for maan throughtout her pregnancy!....i really feel like crying!
continue soon!
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SEE I FORGOT TO COMMENT ON ACTUAL UPDATE AGAIN: SORRY 😳

geet missing maan during her pregnancy😭...... but still try to keep herself happy for their love which was growing inside her
........ i dont know what else to say....... other than never seen anyone love someone like this before:

" She looked cute...really cute... like a doll, most beautiful moments of her life sadly she was dead within, she was forcing herself to be happy just for the little life of his within. Though her life was long lost.. in the silent cries that she let all the lonely night without him." 😭 😭 😭

i hate u maan for causing geet so much pain....... leaving her to deal with everything all by herself...... u had ur family with u...... but she ........she had no one but a angel growing inside her.....she had no one with whom she could share their angel first kick......n... the joy she felt........ she talk about u..... ur love.....how would she have felt buying things for week instead of day.......her heart would have cried every second.......but still pretended to be happy for sake of their child........ without any complain.......WILL geet ever say something to maan? i doubt it but i want her to at-least tell him how much she miss him in all this years.....he should know every bit of info about geet in all this years

geet was scare ........leaving MK in school....... she felt little emotions when maan said MK will be alrite.....n.......hug him....she thought he was here for their daughter......n...felt happy...... wasn't this what she was waiting for??.......but i guess her wait for him is not over yet😭

a brilliant update......... the pain we feel of geet is... bc........u write so well.........all i can say is.....⭐️👏⭐️UR AMAZING WRITER⭐️👏⭐️............ please keep writing

one quick question : what does IPS stand for??😆

Edited by komlika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika

SEE I FORGOT TO COMMENT ON ACTUAL UPDATE AGAIN: SORRY 😳

geet missing maan during her pregnancy😭...... but still try to keep herself happy for their love which was growing inside her
........ i dont know what else to say....... other than never seen anyone love someone like this before:

" She looked cute...really cute... like a doll, most beautiful moments of her life sadly she was dead within, she was forcing herself to be happy just for the little life of his within. Though her life was long lost.. in the silent cries that she let all the lonely night without him." 😭 😭 😭

i hate u maan for causing geet so much pain....... leaving her to deal with everything all by herself...... u had ur family with u...... but she ........she had no one but a angel growing inside her.....she had no one with whom she could share their angel first kick......n... the joy she felt........ she talk about u..... ur love.....how would she have felt buying things for week instead of day.......her heart would have cried every second.......but still pretended to be happy for sake of their child........ without any complain.......WILL geet ever say something to maan? i doubt it but i want her to at-least tell him how much she miss him in all this years.....he should know every bit of info about geet in all this years

geet was scare ........leaving MK in school....... she felt little emotions when maan said MK will be alrite.....n.......hug him....she thought he was here for their daughter......n...felt happy...... wasn't this what she was waiting for??.......but i guess her wait for him is not over yet😭

a brilliant update......... the pain we feel of geet is... bc........u write so well.........all i can say is.....⭐️👏⭐️UR AMAZING WRITER⭐️👏⭐️............ please keep writing

one quick question : what does IPS stand for??😆



INDIAN POLICE SERVICE.. :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohh Thnks mama....I feel stupid now 😆 ...for not knowing tht
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Posted: 14 years ago

Mini TM gang and rest...Good Morning 😊

Just reading your Mini TM posts will comment one by one 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika

Mk signal adi to come where she n maan is

But adi doesn't move''' poor adi is scared now'''what have he done''.y is she looking at me like she will eat me alive'''.nahi ''.i have 400 crores deal to finalize''. Adi self talk- - adi tum stupid hai'.. agar zinda hi nahi rahega.....toh what deal r u talking about'''dekha nahi maan sir bhi iss bacchi se darte hai'.. waise dekhne main kitni pyari hai n bilkul cute si angel''. Par uska gussewala expression toh maan sir se bhi daravna hai''.ab mera kya hoga''.meri shadi ka kya hoga'' bichari pinky''akhri wish toh woh ask karegi na'.'''.

Looking at adi not moving''..MK look at maan''.. he knew what she want him to do

Maan'adi

Adi'still standing lost

Maan- - almost yelling ''..adi''(this bring adi back to reality)'.come here

Adi walks toward MK and Maan''..praying silently for his safety

adi reach near MK n maan....n....stares at maan give him wht have he done look....... maan looks at MK n wait for her to explored on adi.........n.......smiles inward........ab adi tum gaye....
MK-- bc of u da.....da.....lll........aa......te
adi-- didnt understand a word...n...looks at maan for help
maan- - yeah sweetheart........bc of this uncle i was late.......smiling n making innocent face
adi-- shock to hear ......... msk putting his blame on him.......as he himself was late
MK- - so its u
adi-- had no choice but to node his head yes
MK-- who is he....da...da
adi- - baccha he is adi uncle....he work at office
MK- - (look back at adi....... examine him from top to bottom.....making adi feel all nervous .....adi look like he was standing infront of judge waiting for his death sentence to be announce)....... uuu.........rrrrrr........ffffffired?
adi n maan-- what


New Part: 😉

maan n adi dint expect this coming
adi-- ffffffffff.....fired.................. gave his famous laugh (girls imagine adi laughing 😆)
maan look at adi n back to MK
adi- - sssssss.........sir ?
maan gave him assuring noded him tht he will try
maan look at MK......n.......she turns her face other side
maan- - sweet heart.........u know what....... u did right thing
adi (thinking yeh kya keh rahe hai maan sir) 😲
MK-- she looks at maan from corner of her eyes
maan-- accha kiya jo......adi uncle ko fired kiya
adi-- did he just agree with this nanhi pari😲........ nahi yeh toh choti maan singh khurana hai........maan sir had lost it .........its offical now........what is wrong with him?
😕


🤣Yah...Aadi and MK have a match...STAMMERING...Adi ka idiotic smile...Mazaa Agaya🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

Geet look at maan who looks irritated and said something .He is looking like kid whose sleep disturbed or some one wake him up before the completing the sleep. geet smiles to see the kid in maan. She take the phone and seen an unknown no, she take the call and from other side some one said darling where r u?

Geet shocked and angry on that caller and just cut the call. Here maan pull her more closely and again falls on sleep.

Here geet is still thinking about the call. She slowly turns and freed herself and goes from there.

Here after some time , maan wake up and search geet in the bed but bed is empty.

Maan get up and think may be she got angry on me. It's my fault but '. His thinks stop when he saw geet come and said some one call u in ur cell.

Maan :-hmmmm.

Maan get up and said tumne saara luggage pack kar liya,

Geet:-ummm.

Maan:- hope aaj aur curfew nehi hain so, mein jake muskan ke school se ghum ke aata hoon,

Geet turns and asked kyuon, kya hua?

Maan:-oh principal asked for some donations so.

Geet:-ummm.

Gr8 one...you said that its Sameera right...How dare she calls Maan and that too DARLING😡😡
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geets reflex were too strong...so she grabbed that person ...n the next thing he knew was that he was down on the floor...
geet -- who the....
she stops seeing maan on the floor....
geet -- aap...
maan thinks or rather pens this down in his mind...never to hold geet from behind...otherwise the next time he will be in the hospital only...
geet somewhere knew that it was maan..his touch...but with davis going on in her mind...n maan n mk nowhere to be seen...so she not prepared to listen to anything...
maan -- ouch...
mk just then came running towards him...n said...
mk -- da...da..mama..maa...ra....n then she starts kissing him...
maan smiles n feels relaxed...
geet when sees maan like this felt happy as she was somewhere sensing his pain...which still gave her pain...but seeing their daughter with him...n the way they were bonding..it just made her day...she felt a little contended....like it was the moment she was waiting for....
mk ignoring her n talking only to maan...
mk -- mk ...gus...ssaaa....maama....ka..t.ttiii....dada...ko...maa...ra...
maan is amused as to what is going on...he is still unable to grasp what mk is saying but by her action of saying katti to geet ...he understood what she was hinting at....
geet -- mk..comon...lets go...
mk holding on to maan n not leaving...
mk -- no..no...no..na..naa.....
maan -- its ok geet...n shows her his hand to make a gesture like he will talk to her....
maan -- mk...ce..mama se gussa nahi hote...c mama has come to take u...
mk-- still holding tightly....== nannaa...na...
maan could c the tiredness in geets eyes...
maan -- c mama is tired...aap gud girl ho naa...so plz go with mama...
mk lets go of maan n starts crying...
mk -- no1...loves....mk....not...mama..not .da....da....
mk now goes inside one of the rooms of the outhouse n lies on the bed crying...
geet -- uff...dekha ab aapne kya kar diya...
maan confused ki ab kya kiya....
maan -- maine....??
geet goes behind mk ...
geet -- mk...mk...
maan als goes behind her...
they get rooted in their steps when they see where mk is...

when both of them reach the door of the room...they r shocked...they see that mk has destroyed evrything in the room...the whole room looked like a mess...every vase, sowpiece, curtains, bedshhet...all were in a mess....
just then a small smile touched both of their lips./....as they remembered their first day of marriage in london...where geet had destoyed everything in their flat...
but the smile disappeared as soon as they saw each other...
both of their eyes seemed to be filled with pain...n they could see it clearly....
their chain of thought s broke as they heard mk...
mk -- with hands on her waist-- like her parents-- mk....angry... n ma..mammm.....da...da....smiling...
she saw them smiling n stopped right away to confront them....
geet -- mk ..what is this?? what have u done to the room..??
maan -- geet ...y r u yelling...bacchi hi to hai...
mk runs to maan n holds him...he takes her up in his arm....
geet -- bigado...aur spoil karo ise...
maan -- wo to maine tumhe bhi kiya tha...
he immediately shut his mouth realizing what he just said...
Good One....Refreshing memories 👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Next:-

Maan:-jaan meri baat toh suno.

Geet:- kyuon sunu, aap sunte ho, mana kya kitne baar, aap agar oh log aapko pareshan kare toh,

Maan:-oh log kuch nehi kar payenge.

Geet:- aap jante hain, oh ha mein kaise bhool gayi the great msk who knws everything right,

Maan rubbed his temple and think hey bhawgan iye kya hain, mein kaise smajhau, iha 8 min over ho gaya

Agar 10mins ke matlab 2 min bache hain na jau mk ke paas toh ebti jaan legi mere, iha ma uha beti. Great,

Geet:-kya soch rehe hain , mein aapse baat akr rehi hoon.

Maan;-umm,

Geet:- waise aap se toh baat akrna bekar hain,

But geet stop to see mk there and said dekhiye, jaise baap , waise beti.

Geet to mk:- dada ne kya kaha, room mein rehene ko par aap iha kyuon aaye.

Mk runs and hug maan from his waist and said ma'ma'phi..rse' guss..a.gu..ssa'.

Maan take her in his arms and said mama is up sate now, say sorry to mama now.

Mk hold her ears and say sorry mama'.

Geet look at her daughter and her hubby and give them smile and said it's ok.

After lunch they take car and reached air port for flight.

After flight reached at delhi ari port , press hold msk and d asked him about his marriage when maan said it's my personal thing . we r married for 9 yrs and we have a daughter it's enough for u all to know ,

Guard send them away, then maan guarded geet in one hand and another hand carried mk .

Mk is little nervous and hugged her dada tightly.

Here handa family seen it on tv and happy.

Maan's family seen it and fume in anger.

Annie:-I told u dadi , this girl will come to destroy everything again, and daughter from where she came

Dadi:-I don't know that day the wa I found them it's shame and now.

Dev :- dadi, annie pls calm down and I trust bro and geet, if bro said they r married for 9 yrs then it's true and that little girl is their daughter.

Annie:-I don't trust it. May be some one'.

Dev shouts and said annnie, don't forget u r here just cause of bro and geet, don't forget bro give u the name back and take u here, don't forget it's geet who convince dadi ma. Don't forget it's geet who make agree bro to ur marriage with arjun.

Annie:-so.

Dev:- annie.

Suddenly they heard car's sound.

Dadi:- tell them they will not come here.

Dev shook his head in disappointment.

MAaneet and mr standing near the door when dadi told it.

Maan:- thanks dadi for to take me the next decision .

Maan:-I'll not enter ur km sure. But my wife and daughter have full rights to sty here . thn he turns and said dev come to meet me at outhouse I'm staying there tonight, then we will move from here.

Dev nodded and give a disappointment look to dadi and annie.

Here, geet hurt again to see dadi's word, it's opne her old wound when she feels maan squeezed her waist and said jaan, this time I'm with u, u r not alone to face anything. We will face each and everything together.

Geet look maan and try to believe everything again.


next part tomorrow

Wonderful update till now...Huh this Annie B***H😡😡...How dare she talks about Geet like that😡😡😡.....Grrrrrr
Anyways...nice updates and good going👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

morning tea good morning tea

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