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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19
oo dear im a real fan of ur writng simply love it dear
simply no words 2 explain u write it so perfectly explain it so beautifully that its completely justified
no loopholes use of words every expresiion they du it so well n u write it more well i havent seen it yet bt now reading this dont even feel 2 see i my self can imagine

thank you so much Muskaan ..i'm touched & really have no words to tell you how much it means to me

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Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

I always felt that more than what Maan n Geet says in words their facial expressions give out the hidden feelings of their hearts. To feel
them by ur heart is easy. But bringing them out in words is not that easy. But you have a special talent for that n ur way of interpretation n ur usage of the language just makes me to look you up in admiration.
Ur burnt up sky just burnt me up to cinders as i too felt what Maan n Geet felt by ur beautiful portrayal.
Thank u so much dear for such a lovely .......[plz fill in the blank on behalf of me dear as i cant just call it a post n u've such an amazing poetic knowledge]

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dewdropred

@dewdropred

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: nanditasingh

Firstly Hima u read me wrong.

read it again...i said & meant - Geet did not trust Maan with the truth - its what to me is Maan's thought..Not Geet's.

What will Maan think when he learns that she kept something from him.

And by Binding to Dev - well given that picture he knows not of Dadi's involvement in whatever that is kept from him..so to him he is not party to the truth that Geet & Dev share.

u are speaking from Geet's perspective were as I wrote from Maan's the lines u mentioned.......

nandu ...
& U urself said it dear ...in red .... that i was viewing from geet's perspective ...... while u were viewing it from maan's perspective .....

may b it's my fault but i always try to read any thing from both perspectives ....

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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: dewdropred

nandu ... & U urself said it dear ...in red .... that i was viewing from geet's perspective ...... while u were viewing it from maan's perspective .....

may b it's my fault but i always try to read any thing from both perspectives ....

But you contradicted your own word dear...u said you disagreed to me coz u read it from Geet's perspective ....

I wrote from both their perspective - equally divided

I had to write this part from Maan's perspective coz here he was the silent party, one who had no access to the total truth but was approached to face it from both at home & outside,

It was not Geet's moment of truth but his..he was to learn it to react to it..face it for the first time - adjust to it that its Dev's blood now in his veins.

anyways thank you so much for reading & responding.

Edited by nanditasingh - 14 years ago

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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

@Mallu - Yet again we at odds i see..not that i hate it, its always a pleasure to read a perspective different from yours . I respect your pov ...but i fail to agree with it as you see now coming to the points you mentioned

I will be Quoting U along as i reply -

Originally posted by: Mllu.N
i think maan hates dev for what he did to geet any person would hate but last night he went wild and egoistic , he told once to geet that he has gone against his loved ones for his principles so it was also against his principles that geet seeks help from dev to save his life maan's ego was hurt

yes Maan hates Dev only coz of what he did to Geet & Maan went wild with fury coz his trust in her was hurt. He was trying to shield her from Dev thinking that it will coz her pain ..even when Geet silently supported Dadi to keep dev at KM then too he dint blame her but his helplessness at not being able to keep her past at bay from her, he dared to hurt Dadi but not allow Dev to come anywhere near Geet fearing her health & state of mind - but what does he see - Reasons be whatever he finds her tending to Dev's needs he told her be it Dadi or God how can u go near that creature who hurt you .
Again when the blackmailer mentions him of Geet & Dev he says No it cannot be he tries to reach Geet first then helpless again he goes to the caller thinking again of Geet, her safety with Dev their in the house.
What does he get to see - first the picture - a meeting he knew not of & comes home to a similar sight of Geet & Dev talking about something , the truth that is hidden from him ..

With all this any Man will go wild & react.

Why is it when a woman's pride questioned its called self respect & a man's ego.

Its his pride in her that she wont lie to him, his trust that is put into question.

Originally posted by: Mllu.N
he was jealous to see geet and dev together and trusting an outsider and seeing a photo of devgeet was an extreme step was'nt expecting this from maan but thankgod he realized his mistake he said"geet did so much for me bring happiness in my life,give me a new life and what i did in return broke her heart"he said"my hatred will snatch everything from me one day" he admitted he went blind in his hatred for geet that he fogot everything and what geet went through when he was fighting for his life.

'Jealousy !' you shock me he is her husband, she claimed & accepted him as her child's father what has he to be jealous or insecured of a Rapist. The relationship that Geet & Dev share is of a Rapist & a Victim.

Maan jealous of this ?

He realized that he was blinded by his hatred for Dev...u wrote Geet...the episode i catched i dint find him saying he hated Geet.
He rather kill himself than hate Geet.

He wasn't sorry for his hatred towards Dev nor his anger. He was sorry that he could not console her from her pain rather went on with his anger.

He was sorry for having her fear his anger & keep the truth from him & suffer alone.

Originally posted by: Mllu.N
Maan is so particular about his principles that's why it happened to him he was both blinded by hatred and his prinicples but for prinicples in a wrong way that made him forget geet and the baby and he went aggressive.Geet had no chice left except for seeking help from dev and geet explained it to maan and after that his expressions were remorseful and he realized how much pain he has caused geet when he himself realized that his words has hurt geet to no limit

Its his principles that made him punish his own blood, its his principles that made him fight for this woman against all, his family too & its his love for her.

Mallu why is Maan hating Dev - for what he did to Geet & the baby. Both Geet & Baby could not have been alive thanks to Dev if Maan had not been there for them.
And its this that makes him hate Dev. He does not hate Dev for himself or his principles alone .
Only coz of Geet & the Baby he hates Dev.

Yes he was remorseful when he see her relive the pain yet again ..he was sorry that she had to suffer it again to make him see it.

It was not Geet alone who was hurt, her hiding the truth hurt him & his reaction to it made her get hurt
Newton's law - its applicable here too

Originally posted by: Mllu.N
Maan could'nt believe that geet begged dev to save maan he thinks that death would be better but he must have put himself in geet's shoe and than think what if it was geet fighting for her life and maan had no other choice except for seeking help from dev , would maan have left geet in the jaws of death????no never esp when geet was too getting worse???Whenm geet was sitting in the hospital helpless it was like each moment is passing like an year

Why couldn't Maan believe that Geet begged to Dev when he too could have done the same if he were to be in her shoes, He knows her love for him as much as he knows his own.

If Geet faced this moment now Maan too has seen her in hospital bed fighting for 2 lives & he helpless left only to pray..so he knows what she went through seeing him near death.

Geet begged to Dev her sinner its this thought that made him want to die. Do Dev & Maan not share the same blood in the first place as brothers & family. Yet now why he hates this blood in his veins - Only becoz Geet had to beg for it from Dev.

Originally posted by: Mllu.N
Hats off to geet that she did'nt even ask or confront maan about the photo, she did'nt ask him that how could you prefer an outsider on me and well there is in another point although the photo was taken and it was a reality but photo manipulating is a game now, maan did'nt think for a moment that this photo can be made..

She dint confront Maan about the pics coz she knew Maan did not suspect her about having an affair or any such with Dev. Maan himself did not question her about the picture but dropped it at his feet & left, not believing or needing the picture but what his eyes showed him. Geet stopping Dev, were as he believed Geet had nothing to do with Dev other than disgust.

Whoa ! Mallu ...the pic with the hospital in bg & 2 people in conversation not in any such state that can be questionable .....the picture pointed Geet met Dev & Maan has no idea of it ..why could a simple pic with 2 people in public spot talking have him question its authenticity

With the first pic received dint he voice that Dev blackmailing Geet & she unable to tell him..he never doubted Geet then too...

Did u see Maan think that the pic was more than them meeting ? Then why accuse him for not doubting its authenticity

No offense i'm sorry if i sounded rude of defensive here are my thoughts to what you blamed of to Maan...Yes me too respect your pov but seriously failed to agree that its only Maan at fault

Relationship is a mutual affair....its never one at mistake here, its both of them...if Maan is at fault at some places , so is Geet...

I don't think in my post I blamed Geet anywhere at being wrong..

Edited by nanditasingh - 14 years ago

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Maleka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by Mllu.N

he was jealous to see geet and dev together and trusting an outsider and seeing a photo of devgeet was an extreme step was'nt expecting this from maan but thankgod he realized his mistake he said"geet did so much for me bring happiness in my life,give me a new life and what i did in return broke her heart"he said"my hatred will snatch everything from me one day" he admitted he went blind in his hatred for geet (sorry its my mistake he went blind in hatred for dev-just a writing mistake that he fogot everything and what geet went through when he was fighting for his life.

yes he was jealous and that's what i say and will remain stick to it remember what he once said to geet i cannot see anyone coming closer to you geet, maan witnessed geet with dev in the photo, in the outhouse yes if not too much yes it was a little bit of jealousy.

He realized that he was blinded by his hatred for Dev...u wrote Geet...the episode i catched i dint find him saying he hated Geet.
He rather kill himself than hate Geet.

yups its my mistake a writing mistake so dont want to say anything yes at this point coz of my stupid writing mistake i will have to agree with you he will die rather than to hate geet-silly me.

He wasn't sorry for his hatred towards Dev nor his anger. He was sorry that he could not console her from her pain rather went on with his anger.

Again disagree if he was angry that he cannot console her in her pain and than there was no sense of maan saying"geet you knew you were wrong"and if he went on with his anger it means that he will keep this pain in his heart forever that he cannot console geet it means that nothing is ever going to be allright between him and geet?out of question.

He was sorry for having her fear his anger & keep the truth from him & suffer alone.

Yes maan was sorry that geet suffered alot because of his anger she kept the truth hidden from him and maan admitted too that yes because of my anger geet did'nt tell me the truth.

Originally posted by Mllu.N

Maan is so particular about his principles that's why it happened to him he was both blinded by hatred and his prinicples but for prinicples in a wrong way that made him forget geet and the baby and he went aggressive.Geet had no chice left except for seeking help from dev and geet explained it to maan and after that his expressions were remorseful and he realized how much pain he has caused geet when he himself realized that his words has hurt geet to no limit

and if it was'nt his principle than he could'nt he maan singh khurana this is what makes him maan that for his principles he can even go against his love ones and geet was right msk also told geet if you were'nt on the right side i never would've supported you.Maan was angry because of many reasons one of them was that too that geet went against his principles thats what infuriates him but!!!!this situation of maan and geet was never about principles.Yes maan hates dev for what he did to geet and baby because he loves her to no limit.

Yes he was remorseful when he see her relive the pain yet again ..he was sorry that she had to suffer it again to make him see it.

It was not Geet alone who was hurt, her hiding the truth hurt him & his reaction to it made her get hurt
Newton's law - its applicable here too

its not the question that who was more hurt, yes maan was hurt because he did'nt know the whole situation.

Geet knew maan would be angry but she did'nt expect maan would say without thinking about her and baby that you should have let me die.

Originally posted by Mllu.N

Maan could'nt believe that geet begged dev to save maan he thinks that death would be better but he must have put himself in geet's shoe and than think what if it was geet fighting for her life and maan had no other choice except for seeking help from dev , would maan have left geet in the jaws of death????no never esp when geet was too getting worse???Whenm geet was sitting in the hospital helpless it was like each moment is passing like an year

there is no need to say anything here you have answered your own question.

Geet begged to Dev her sinner its this thought that made him want to die. Do Dev & Maan not share the same blood in the first place as brothers & family. Yet now why he hates this blood in his veins - Only becoz Geet had to beg for it from Dev.

dev's blood in his veins gives him the reason to say you should have let me die no!!! he said this because he was only seeing the one side of the truth and if maan was concerned about geet that it was better to see geet begging in front of her sinner that this thing will get wrong i.e."geet you know you are wrong" if he is concerned in this way that geet begging in front of her sinner that was infuriating maan, than he cannot say geet is wrong.

I will have to write more, there is more to add.....

to be continued.Have some work to do.(incomplete analysis)

Originally posted by Mllu.N

Hats off to geet that she did'nt even ask or confront maan about the photo, she did'nt ask him that how could you prefer an outsider on me and well there is in another point although the photo was taken and it was a reality but photo manipulating is a game now, maan did'nt think for a moment that this photo can be made..

She dint confront Maan about the pics coz she knew Maan did not suspect her about having an affair or any such with Dev. Maan himself did not question her about the picture but dropped it at his feet & left, not believing or needing the picture but what his eyes showed him. Geet stopping Dev, were as he believed Geet had nothing to do with Dev other than disgust.

you got me wrong, she in her dreams cant imagine maan suspecting her it was not about suspecting it was about trust geet have every right to confront maan that how can he just believe in a picture which was given to him by a third person.

Whoa ! Mallu ...the pic with the hospital in bg & 2 people in conversation not in any such state that can be questionable .....the picture pointed Geet met Dev & Maan has no idea of it ..why could a simple pic with 2 people in public spot talking have him question its authenticity

its not about authenticity its about trust!!!that's it.Too people talking and public in background that's what all photo manipulation is about well that's a different thing, esp when geet admits that its the truth but maan does'nt know the whole other side of it.

With the first pic received dint he voice that Dev blackmailing Geet & she unable to tell him..he never doubted Geet then too...

Did u see Maan think that the pic was more than them meeting ? Then why accuse him for not doubting its authenticity

answered above!!!

No offense i'm sorry if i sounded rude of defensive here are my thoughts to what you blamed of to Maan...Yes me too respect your pov but seriously failed to agree that its only Maan at fault

you got me wrong i never said that maan is wrong, i said that he is taking the things in a wrong manner.
There is a fine line between a person being completely wrong and taking the things wrong completely.

Relationship is a mutual affair....its never one at mistake here, its both of them...if Maan is at fault at some places , so is Geet...

agree

I don't think in my post I blamed Geet anywhere at being wrong.

i never said that you are blaming geet-did i?

well i am sorry if i too sound rude.Again i have written what i have felt and sorry this time cant agree with you 100% like you i too have a different point of view.

Dont forget to pm me for your next awesome post.Its not about maaneet only i too wanna see how much writing potential do i have in me.😆

Mallu

Edited by Mllu.N - 14 years ago

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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mdmsk
awww...i tell you nandita, its a pleasure to read your posts, i love them a lot....:)

Love,

Maddy

thanks a ton Maddy i'm so glad you loved it..its always a pleasure to see you respond..thanks a ton dear & All the Best with your exams

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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Chelsha
I always felt that more than what Maan n Geet says in words their facial expressions give out the hidden feelings of their hearts. To feel
them by ur heart is easy. But bringing them out in words is not that easy. But you have a special talent for that n ur way of interpretation n ur usage of the language just makes me to look you up in admiration.
Ur burnt up sky just burnt me up to cinders as i too felt what Maan n Geet felt by ur beautiful portrayal.
Thank u so much dear for such a lovely .......[plz fill in the blank on behalf of me dear as i cant just call it a post n u've such an amazing poetic knowledge]

Aww! thanks a ton dear i'm speechless & humbled by your appreciation & response .... thank you is all i can say & hope to live upto your expectation always

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dewdropred

@dewdropred

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

nandu .... it does not matter .... whether i contradicted from my own word ...or not ... coz i wanted to voice abt geet's feelings .....& U were voicing maan's feelings ...... so it's all what we think abt them at that time .... it was nice discussing with u & 2 know each other's POV ....

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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: dewdropred

nandu .... it does not matter .... whether i contradicted from my own word ...or not ... coz i wanted to voice abt geet's feelings .....& U were voicing maan's feelings ...... so it's all what we think abt them at that time .... it was nice discussing with u & 2 know each other's POV ....

yup in this moment mentioned i voiced Maan's feeling coz that was Maan's scene/ moment .. i was talking of ...

he was reliving the flashback of the moments that made him angry & he was so exercising...so i dint think Geet's thoughts to be included there ...

When Geet's thoughts at seeing him walk away i dealt with ..there i dint bring in Maan's perspective coz that moment was Geet's alone.

Yes its been great to discuss with u

Edited by nanditasingh - 14 years ago

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