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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Jaaaazzzz.

You rock yaar. By the title of the OS. I thought it'll be a senty story with geet and maan's daughter. But no i you went beyond my expectations. Totally loved and enjoyed it.

Sexy dresses huh.
I loooove when maan is jealous hehe ( im evil i know lol )

Wow geet served him very well.

Very well written as usual hun esp the line " dresses that were too short and heels that were too high" lool too good yaar

Love

Humera.

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@MishtiShona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

This was fantastic......................well done...luved how Maan got jealous....u have defo changed the idea of a 'good girl'

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ansah

@SahSah

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Finally we have something happy....😆😆

awwww thakuuuuu Jaz.....loved it

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

nice OS! Liked the inspiration for this OS! hahaha "good girl" sounded kind of cute when Maan said it but I didn't think Geet would take it the other way. I guess bc I say good girl and good boy to a lot of of friends hahaha

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saanjh rathore

@saanjh11

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

too good yaar me liked the pairing u did sasha n romeo rofl ,it is simply wow loved it to cores

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johnangad

@johnangad

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

lol this was funny!!! a good traet b4 monday morning!

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swetha10

@swetha10

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

wow amazing OS.. luved it..

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

hiiiiiii

awesome os

loved it

loved maaneet and all da couples

loved da concept

min blowing

plz do write more

thanks 4 da pm

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-Deepzz-

@-Deepzz-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

I hope it is a happy fic ....unlike your other angst fics.....Though I loved them too....We need some happiness in life😛

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Haha awe that was awesome and so true good girl does make us feel like we're not equal and haha loved how all the girls tortured their husbands and haha all thanks to maan who didn't think before he said good girl and awe geet was quiet naughty in this still punishing him and phew arjun didn't feature much in this just a few words about his jerk character and haha loved how everyone reacted to when maan said good girl it was the best moment anyways a great os with and interesting plot really enjoyed it 😃

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