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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok, first of all I have to say that the grumpy husband part was amazing! I LOVE THAT! Then the whole concept of Maan being in a lower class was a nice twist. I never would have thought of that! Plus, I love the couples...that was a perfect combo. Okay im just going to start listing stuff that I loved lol
- Pinky narrowing her eyes while Adi nervously pushes up his glasses
- Geet being put on the spot (your description of her emotions...kya bataoon? lol)
- Maan's pupp dog eyes! I can so imagine that
- the four women are their wives...OMG...HAHA
- Maan's jaw drop...sigh...
- jealousy...mua ha ha
- the forbidding and the groaning by the KC gang...once again...perfect
- "so basically you're going to apologize?"..."yeah" lol
- good boy...just to end it off was great oh and Maan's apology and their dance
- Did I forget Romeo's oh teri?
Sigh...it was just perfect in every single way. Im probably getting repetitive now. lol, I can tell why the boys so angry (lets say), those are some pretty wicked dresses. Hmmm what else....I dont know what else to say. It still continues to amaze me how you know these characters SO WELL. This is like my dream episode of Geet...thank you for cheering me up in this slump. There...i think thats long enough. Now leave me alone! I need to read it a couple more times before I can finally get some piece of mind and start my homework again lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
That was amazing.....LOVED IT...like crazy

Calling geet a good girl...you sure as hell deserved it...and the men are such girls...getting ready together...
and when Geet said that the good girl is at home i was dying of laughter and her awesomeness...LOVED it when she said that...
and jealousy..OMG perfect....all the guys are just head over heels jealous...i couldnt contain my laughter and my mom gave me the annoying look...i was so embarrassed...

and CEO of Maan Singh Khurana...she sure is....

and loved Geet's dress
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!
That was brilliant ahh I loved it =D
Wow the way the ladies tortured their hubbies ahhahahah ;P
Thanx for the picz of the dresses aswell =) Xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Jazzzzz
Yet another amazing piece of work...
Awesome
Good girl.......

Love you silly Naina x ( the one that cracks u up ) x
And damn that guli person always comments first on everything!! Haha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was a fabulous OS!!! Good girl indeed....😆😆😆

My favorite part:

"That's it!" Maan yelled as she slammed his fist on the table and got to his feet. "Enough is enough."

"You going to show her who is the boss?" Adi asked.

"Damn right I am," Maan said, as anger flowed through his veins.

"Basically you're going to go apologize?" Dev asked.

Maan's shoulders slumped as he sighed.

"Yeah…" He said dejectedly.


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 The CEO of Maan Singh Khuranna indeed 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jaz 🤗.....OMG.......what an OS 👏......where do u get these ideas.....u have done it again......i am speechless......everything was sooo good.......the couples were all so made for each other 😍.......Maan says good girl 😲.....these guys never know when and what to say....and he forbids her to dance.😡........loved CEO Geet 😆......loved the way she taught him a lesson.....awesome dresses......the finishing touch was the Good boy 🤣.....plz need one more part......want to see Arjun's reaction after seeing what Maan has acheived......plzzzzzzzzz.......thank u for the PM .....TC 😊





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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow it was really beautiful OS love how Geet torture Maan when she dance with another man i wish it was SS or FF love it super ending
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful JaZ !! Loved it..you never fail to surprise me..I loved the dialogues b/w the boys especially when Maan furiously say 'that's enough" and the readers are made to believe that he's gonna yell at his wife but then Dev very casually asks 'So basically you're going to apologize.".Whoa!! that had me in splits😆 Thanks Jaz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey amazing OS, I never knew that tragedy queen could right some funny and cute thing, it is really awesome and of course very well written, I really like the choices of couples you made, it was really fun to read, and I like again the confident Geet.

Sejal
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Jaz🤗

That was a good OS, very different from your usual OS's.
It was hilarious too.
I was laughing while reading specially the conversation part where Maan says enough and the guys ask him if he's gonna apologize😆 😆
Geet is definitely the CEO of Maan Singh Khurana😉😆
All the girls were pretty cool and the dresses were too good.

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