FF- Revenge...Part 3- Pg-7...updated - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful concept pls cont soonnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept...interesting

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept i hope she is not out to take revenge from maan..............pl cont soon and can u pl add me to ur pm list
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Frenz this part consist only CID part.. Sorry abt this but I'm helpless...

Scene 1
CID Beauro Time-9AM

(It was morning n all officers were busy.Abhijeet n Daya were chatting with each other. Fredy , Vivek N Tasha going through some files. Suddenly ACP sir comes in)

ACP: Abhi-Daya ek acchi khabar hai. Humare team main ek new officer aa rahi hai.
Abhi:New Officer..😕 Per kaun Sir???
Suddenly some1 says
Voice:Insp.Geet reporting sir.Gud morning every1

(Every1 turn back n see beautiful girl with sweet n innocent face.)

ACP: Welcome Geet! Abhi ye Sub Insp. Geet hai.Humare CID ki new officer.Ye pehle Delhi CID mein thi.
Abhi:Hi Geet.Main Insp. Abhijeet hoon.Tumhe yahan dekh kar accha laga. Nice to meet u.😊
Daya:Hello Geet Main Insp. Daya.Tum kaise ho? Hope tum yahan enjoy karogi.
Pia:Yes Sir!.

(Every1 comes forward n have introduction Session. After some time phone rang. Tasha goes to pick it up.)

Tasha:Yes CID Beauro here
Voice: Main Mud island se Pratik bol raha hoon.Meri Wife ka Khoon ho gaya hai.Plz aap log yahan jaldi aayiye.
Tasha:Thik hai hum wahan pahunchte hain.

(She cuts the call n inform about this to rest of the team)


Scene 2
Mud Island (Prathik's house) Time-10AM

(ACP talking with Pratik.Abhi-Daya talking with Neighbors. Fredy-vivek checking house N Tasha n Geet examining body)

ACP-Mr.Pratik sabse pehle ye laash aapne dekhi thi?
Pratik-jee sir!
ACP-Kab dekhi thi ye laash???
Pratik- Sir Subah mein 9 baje k kareeb. Actually main meeting k silsile mein lonavala gaya hua tha.Subah jab main wapas aaya toh kaafi der tak doorbell bajaye lekin Smrita ne darwaja nahi khola toh maine duplicate key use kiya. Ander aakar dekha to ye..😭😭
ACP- Koi baat nahi. Hum aapke wife k khooni ko dundh nikalenge.

(Other side near the Body.Geet N Tasha were talking.)
Tasha- Kaafi bedardi se maara hai ise. pehle gala dabaya phir ise piche se chaku maar diya.
Geet -haan. bahut bereham hoga.
(then she notice something.)
Geet-Tasha forceps dena.
Tasha-Ya
Geet-Ye iske nails dekh rahi ho.Yahan inme kuch phsaa hua hai.
(Geet takes it out.It was human skin Piece)
Tashaa😲-Ye toh insaan ki skin hai.
Geet-haan!lagta hai apne aap ko bachane k liye Isne Khooni ko maara hoga. Tab shayad iske nails me ye pice aa gaya hoga.

(ACP goes near them)
ACP-Tasha-Pia kuch mila kya
Geet-Yes sir.Ye dekhiye.(She give the piece of skin to ACP)
ACP😲-ye toh insaan ki khaal hai.
Tasha- jee sir.
ACP-Tasha is body aur sare evidences ko Forensic lab bhej do.
Tasha-Yes Sir.
(Tasha goes back where as Geet checks the house.)
(Meanwhile Abhi-Daya n Fredy-Vivek come near ACP)
ACP-Kuch pata chala.
Abhi-yes sir kaafi kuch.In parosio ka kehna hai ki Smrita ka affair chal raha tha.Ek ladka hamesha pratik k absence mein yahan aata tha.
Daya-Lekin sir wo kal nahi aaya tha.
ACP-hmm..Daya Abhi pata karo is ladke k bare mein.fredy-vivek kuch mila kya.
Fredy- Nahi Sir.Ghar ka saara saamaan idhar-udhar nahi hai.
Vivek-yes sir.chori bhi nahi hui hai sir.

(Suddenly Geet calls out.)
Geet- Sir... (She shouted very loudly.All officers arrive there N find her In fainted condition.)
ACP-Geet.Kya hua ise.
Abhi- Sir hume ise Hospital le jaana chahiye.
(they call ambulance n take her to hospital)

Scene 3
Hospital Time-11AM
(Geet was shifted into ICU.All officers were worried.Suddenly ACP gets a call.)
ACP-Haan Hello. main ACP Pradyuman bol raha hoon CID se.
Voice-ACP samjha dena apni officer ko.Mujhse panga lena bhadi parega.Ye toh sirf trailor tha. Agar isne meri baat nahi maani toh agli baar nahi bach payegi.
ACP-Hello.kaun ho tum or ye kya bakwaas kar rahe ho..
(But call cuts from other side)

Abhi- Kya hua Sir.Kiska phone tha.😕
Daya-Haan sir Kiska phone tha. Kya kaha usne.
ACP-Pata nahi Abhi. Kiska tha.Keh raha tha ki Geet ko samjha dene k liye k agar woh nahi maani toh woh uski jaan le lega.
Daya-per Sir wo tha kaun.
ACP-Mujhe nahi pata Daya.Lekin jo hai kaafi khatarnak hai. humare hote hue Geet ko maarne ki kosish ki..Pata karo kiska phone tha
(Doc comes out from ICU)
ACP-Doc ab woh kaise hai
Doc-jeher toh nikaal liya hai lekin hosh mein aane se pehle kuch nahi keh sakte.
(Every1 😲😲😲 shocked)
All: Zeher!
Doc : Ji inhe zeher diya gaya tha...
ACP-Abhi tum yahin raho Geet k saath or dhyaan rakhna.
Abhi- jee sir.

Scene 3
Forensic Lab Time-2PM

ACP-Salunkhe kuch pata chala ki iski maut kab or kaise hui.
Salunkhe- Haan boss.Iski maut thik subah 6 baje k kareeb hui hai.Iske gale me mein jo dabane k nishaan dekh rahe ho usse pata chalta hai ki Khooni k sirt 3 fingers or 1 thumb thi.
Fredy-Sirf 3 fingers.
Tasha-Sir woh.. mujhe kuch puchna tha
ACP- haan pucho.
Tasha- Sir Geet kahan Hai.
Salunkhe-boss ye Geet kaun hai.
ACP-Salunkhe Geet new officer hai CID mein.Tasha Geet ICU main Hai. Use kisi ne jeher diya tha.

(Tasha n Salunkhe 😲😲😲shocked)
Tasha-per sir kab or kaise.
ACP-Jab humlog Pratik k ghar per the tab Geet ghar ko check kar rahi thi.Achanak uske chillane ke aawaz aayi. Hum sab jab wahan pahunche tab tak wo behosh ho gayi.
Salunkhe-Ab wo kaise hai boss.
ACP-kuch nahi kaha jaa sakta Salukhe. Doc ne 24 ghante ka samay diya hai.Any ways mujhe jaana hai.

(ACP n Tasha goes out of the forensic lab)

Scene 4
CID Beauro Time-3PM
(Daya n fredy coming with a young guy (abt 23 yrs)
Daya- Sir ye raha Smrita ka ashiq Mr. Ayaan.Iska or Smrita ka affair pichle 3 mahino se chal raha tha.
ACP-Toh Mr. Ayaan smrta ka khoon kyun kia.
Ayaan-kya smrita ka khoon ho gaya.Per kab 😲 kaise.😲
ACP-wahin toh hum bhi puch rahe hain.Smrita ka khoon kyun kiya??
Ayaan-Nahi Sir main Smrita ka khoon kyun karunga.Main toh usse bahut pyar karta tha.
Daya-Aacha pyar karte the.waise tum usse kab mile the?
Ayaan-Main usse 3 mahine pehle ville park main mila tha.Wo wahan ghumne aayi thi.Mujhe use dekh kar hi pyaar ho gaya.
ACP-thik hai tum jao. jarurat parne per tumhe bula lenge.

Scene 5
Hospital Time-5PM

(Abhi standing outside ICU.Suddenly a man bumps over him.)
Man-Oh Sorry...
Abhi- Koi baat nahi.
(the man went off leaving conused Abhi)
Abhi- ajeeb baat hai. itni jagah hone per bhi ye mujhse aakar hi kyun takraya.

(He see rest of the team coming from other side.)
ACP-Abhi Geet ab kaise hai?
Abhi- Sir abhi tak hosh nahi aaya hai.
Daya-Kya hua Abhi. Kya soch rahe ho?
Abhi-Daya abhi-abhi ek aadmi mujhse takraya. Ajeeb baat ye hai ki itni jagah hone per bhi woh mujhse takraya.
Daya-Kya.. lekin kaun tha woh.
Abhi- mujhe nahi pata.
ACP-Abhi apna pocket check karo. mujhe lagta hai shayad us aadmi ne tumhar epocket mein kuch dala hoga.Isliye tumse takraya.
(Abhi checks the pocket n find a letter. he open it n read it)
Abhi-Tum CID waalon ko aashcharya ho raha hoga ke mainne ye letter kyun bheja. Phone karne k baad bhi.Tum logo ko ye batana tha ki agar Hosh aane k baad bhi tumhari is Insp. Geet ne apni investigatin band nahi ki toh wahi hoga jo 2 saal pehle hua tha.Is baar toh use baksh diya lekin agli baar nahi. ye letter use dikha dena or koi galat kadam uthaya tum logo ne toh tum log apni jaan bhi gawa doge..Samjhe.

(Tasha goes inside the ICU to Geet N all officers outside ICU)
ACP- Kaun hai ye jo ise ko marna chahta hai?Hua kya hoga do saal pehle?
Fredy-Sir ab kya kare...pehle toh ye Smrita ka case solve nahi hua or ab Geet ko koi marna chahta hai.
Abhi-Fredy Smrita k khooni ko bhi hum jaldi pakad lenge.Lekin hume ye bhi jaana hoga k do saal pehle hua kya tha jiske kaaran koi Pia ko marna chahta hai.
Vivek-Aur ye jaante hue ki Geet ek CID officer hai.
ACP-Haan Abhi mujhe bhi ye baat aajeeb lag rahi hai.
Daya-Sir kahin ye Geet ka koi purana dushman toh nahi jo us se revenge lena chahta ho.Ya phir koi aisa Criminal jise usne ne pakda tha or ab woh choot gaya hoga or apne gang k members k saath mil kar use ko maarna chahta hai.
ACP-Haan Daya lagta to hai.Ek kaam karte hain..Abhi-Daya tum dono Geet k case ko dekho or Fredy vivek n Tasha mere saath Smrita k case ko Agar koi khabar milti hai toh mujhe report karo.
Fredy- Waah Sir! Kya baat hai.Abhi or Daya sir ko Geet ka Dangerous case aur hume Smrita ka case.
Abhi-Fredy Smrita ka case bhi mushkil hai.tumhe pata hai na ki Smrita k Khooni k khilaaf humare paas koi saboot nahi hai.
Daya-Fredy tum sab Smrita ka case ek saath solve kar rahe ho.Geet or Smrita dono ka case important hai.Agar hum log Smrita ka case ek saath solve karenge toh us beech me agar Geet per phir humla hua toh..
Fredy-Toh thik hai Sir main Smrita ka case solve karne k lie tayaar hoon.Aap log Pia ka case dekhiye.

(Every1 smiles. ACP,Fredy n Vivek asks tasha if she wanna go.Tasha replie that she will join them later.So All of them except Abhi Daya n Tasha left.)

Scene 7
Pratik's House Time-6:30AM

(Fredy ring the Doorbell. Servent opens d Door)
Servent-Saab aap log yahan.
Fredy- Haan hum yahan hum nahi aa sakte kya.
Servent-Aa sakte hai Saab lekin Pratik saab toh ghar per nahi hai Woh bahar gaye hai.
Vivek-bahar per kyun?
Servent-woh saab ko Smrita memsaab k pariwaar walo ne bulaya tha
Fredy-Pariwaar walo ne per kyun?
Servent-Mujhe nahi pata saab.
ACP-thik hai.Fredy - Vivek ghar ki taalashi lo shaayd khooni k khilaaf kuch saboot mil jaye.
Fredy N Vivek- Yes Sir.

(All of them check d house.Suddenly Vivek notices something.He call out ACP)
vivek-Sir.
ACP-Haan Vivek
Vivek-Sir ye dekhiye.Bed k is right side waale leg pair per khoon laga hua hai.
ACP-hmm..Vivek ek kaam karo.Is khoon k samples lekar forensic lab bhej do or Salunkhe se kehna ki ise Smrita k khoon se match kar k dekhe.
Vivek- yes Sir.

In the Kitchen..
Fredy-Sir..
ACP-haan Fredy.Kya Hua..
Fredy-Sir ye dekhiye Is window k paas Bullet laga hua hai..
ACP-Per ye Bullet yahan aayi kaise.Lagta hai Fredy ye bullet saamne waale ghar se chali hai.tum ise nikalo or forensic lab bhej kar yahan waapas aao.Hum us Saamne wale Flat mein chalenge.
Fredy-thik hai Sir.

Scene 8
Hospital Time-7PM

(Abhi N Tasha inside the ICU.Daya has gone to bring the medicines.Suddenly Doc come there.)
Doc-Aap mein se koi inka family member hai kya.
Tasha-Nahi hum inke colleagues hain.Per kyun Doc..
Doc-Woh kuch formalities baaki hain.
Abhi-Lekin humne toh saari formalities puri kar di thi phir aap unke family k baare mein kyun puch rahe hain.

Aakhir Doc Geet k family k baare mein kyun pata lagana chahta hai?Kya CID Smrita k khooni ko Dundh payegi.Kya unhe pata chal payega ki Kya hua that do saal pehle.Kya Abhi or Daya Geet k family ko dundh payenge?


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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update though it was not maaneet but i enjoyed reading it..............lots of suspenses..............waiting for them to b unravel
thanks for the pm...........................
Edited by preethia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept... do add me to yr pm list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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brilliant part. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I've never read an FF (I didn't even know what FF meant till a friend told me recently!), but I stumbled on yours just now by mistake and to my surprise, I found the start of your story very interesting to read.

You've certainly got me intrigued about what will happen next.. Do put up your next episode.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonder who did that poor Geet i hope she okay fabulous update pls cont soonnnn thnks pm

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