FF- Revenge...Part 3- Pg-7...updated

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Hi Frenz I'm gonna start my new MG FF. Its inspired from some FFs which I read till now..n liked very much. Its something different'I hope you all will like it. It is combined wid my other fav... serial CID.

INTRO:

ACP Pradyuman: A tough but soft heart man. Whose duty is more important.

Geet Handa: CID officer Known for her short tempered n shoot at sight attitude. Same attitude as ACP.

Daya: Popular for breaking open the doors and slapping the criminals. One of the smartest officers and often risks his life to save Abhijeet.

Abhijeet:One of the best, intelligent and honest officers in the CID team. He is also the best shooter in CID and can shoot with his eyes closed by only hearing the sound.

Fredricks (Freddy): He is a soft-hearted person and is greatly affectionate towards his wife.

Vivek: He is also a soft-hearted person. He is mostly known for craking up d cases along wid Freddy.

CONCEPT:

About a CID officer whose past is unknown to everyone. No one known wats her reason to join CID n How could a girl b so Stone hearted. Her hand doesn't shiver when she wants to kill someone. A girl who can't even smile at anyone or anything. Not even in funniest situation. She is always serious. Don't wanna enjoy life. She thinks life doesn't gave her Justice. In her life LOVE doesn't exist... Her MIND Her SOUL only asks for "REVENGE".

Few Words: I don't know that d concept is clear to u all or not. I tried my best to write abt it but failed😕..Don't mind SORRY. But I'll make sure it will b clear slowly when I will start writing it. Some more characters will b introduced but not now..N I know u all will think when I'll introduce u to MSK'But sorry U have to wait😆' I had thought something different about his entry'.😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept. add me to ur pm
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nicey add me to ur pm list plz its gonna be intresting
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nice and interesting concept.loved it.
update soon.
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intersting 😛...add me to
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nice concept. add me to ur pm list plzz
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please add me to ur pm list.

i really liked the concept

continue soon.........
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add me to ur pm list
nice concept
sounds diff
CID

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Nice concept
Liked it
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interesting n very different concept continue n pm plz

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