Temptation - A Maaneet One Shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: esha143

Opti can I have the links for ur Michi fics as well....I too was a Michi fan and watched the whole of Kayamath....I still read their fics when ever I came across one...

I've already Maaneetified all my short stories on Michi. The links to my two mammoth fics which are left are here:


Destiny's Children: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1121463/ff-destinys-children-pgs-1-to-5-also-ck-pg-84

Great Expectations: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1184506/great-expectations-epilogue-pg-69-14-6


You need a lot of patience to go through the entire lot as they are really huge. I have put all the parts together in one place for easy navigation, though. You may come across some familiar scenes in them which I have already Maaneefied including this one.

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

another awesome OS!

loved it

Thanks Punjabi princes.

Wow Opti! you always make me to come out of stalking and comment here....😊 I loved the Aitraaz angle given here.

gawd this sameera girl.......another slap from my side...

maan is just so loyal to geet....awwwwww

loved it opti....as awesome as always

Originally posted by: amminii

Wow Opti! you always make me to come out of stalking and comment here....😊 I loved the Aitraaz angle given here.

Thanks Ammini. I've not seen Aitraaz, so do not know what was shown in it but I have seen the english version, Disclosure. Maybe the theme of seduction of a married man may have stuck in my subconsicous mind!

Originally posted by: ansah

gawd this sameera girl.......another slap from my side...

maan is just so loyal to geet....awwwwww

loved it opti....as awesome as always

Thanks Ansah. Sameera could not get over Maan's hotness I guess but Maan is not to be swayed so easily. His loyalty will always be with Geet.

Wonderful OS as usual. Cant believe youwrote it for some other forum. Looks like it was written for Geet. One thing which I have noticed in many FFs in Geet forum is that we believe int he existence of Sameera and Vicky in Maan's life, while the CVs seem to have comfortably forgotten them and keep introducing new characters who have never been mentioned before.

Originally posted by: Viji79

Wonderful OS as usual. Cant believe youwrote it for some other forum. Looks like it was written for Geet. One thing which I have noticed in many FFs in Geet forum is that we believe int he existence of Sameera and Vicky in Maan's life, while the CVs seem to have comfortably forgotten them and keep introducing new characters who have never been mentioned before.

Forgot to ask. How is your headache?

Opti, that was sweet. The introduction of mysterious sameera. We will have to wait some more for her intro in the serial and so in the meantime your OS is doing the honours. Thanks.

Originally posted by: Viji79

Wonderful OS as usual. Cant believe youwrote it for some other forum. Looks like it was written for Geet. One thing which I have noticed in many FFs in Geet forum is that we believe int he existence of Sameera and Vicky in Maan's life, while the CVs seem to have comfortably forgotten them and keep introducing new characters who have never been mentioned before.

Actually I had to modify this scene a little to suit Geet. I guess only writers like us will keep bringing Sam and Vicky in our fics. The show makers seem to be in no hurry to bring them in although they were the ones who mentioned them in the first place.

My cold is still troubling me, giving me a dull headache throughout the day. Will try inhalation tonight before going to bed.