one shot *our way to express Love* part 2 at pg 2

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Nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago

Geet in middle of night .... sitting with closed eyes.."kya baat ha baby ?" talking to baby in sleep ..... rub her stomach ..i am feeling hungry hmmmm i want to eat chicken paneer ...... open her eyes .... she called Maan...

Maan: was fast a sleep he didnot pick the call...

Geet: yeh loo papa is sleeping ..... she walk to his room ...saw him sleeping with hugging his pillow .

Geet: maan... whisper

Maan: geet please iss waqat fight na karo...

Geet: maan i am not fighting ...just get up

Maan: hug her from her waist

Geet: Maan baby...

maan: at once open eyes .."what happen to baby placed his hand at her belly,,,"

Geet; pat at his fore head .... "uff maan"

Maan: bolo tou kya huwa baby ko?

Geet: baby is hungry ?

Maan: oh tou ja kar kuch khalo ..why you are waking me?

Geet: oh baby want to eat chicken paneer?

Maan: at this hour ..looked at his wrist watch

Geet; yes this hour now like a nice hubby & pap get up ..

Maan: geet tum bhi na

Geet: ha mein bhi na kitni cute hoon...

Maan: smiled as her Innocent face .... "ok i will cook"

Geet;no i want to go to that dhaba and have

Maan: the dhaba will be closed...shouted

Geet; maan you are maan singh khurana you can ask the owner to open the dhaba ...

MAan: looked at her

Geet: wink

do comment if you like and want me to carry on

next part at page 2

rest will be added

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago

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Nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago

oh no 1 want more ok 😔

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muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey interesting loved the last 1 ur maan singh khurana can sau owner 2 open infact he tou can purchase it hahaha du conti...........
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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

yeah....definitely!

continue...jaldiiiii

Swati😃

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Chelsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

@ naddia
Very nicely written with Maaneet's nok jokh. Pls continue yaar.

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muskaan_cute19

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26
oh no 1 want more ok 😔

nono iwoukd love 2 read further du continnue😉

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hookedonGeet

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Posted: 14 years ago

Instead of Geet tum bhi na, how about Lo baat karo

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Nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hookedonGeet
Instead of Geet tum bhi na, how about Lo baat karo

ok in next part Lo baat karo... dear i type what came in my mind 😳

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Nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago

Maan : looked at her in angry

Geet; maan pyar mein tou log chaand tor kar lata ha aur aik aap..... sit on bed with her face turn on other side ...

Maan: geet yeh to tum pagal ho yeh mein...

Geet: you

MAan: made a angry face ..... acha acha mein .grab her arm

Geet; baby your papa is not going ..lets go and sleep

Maan: ok lets go ..

Geet: smiled .."lets go" pull him

MAan: can i wear my shirt or you will take me in this .....looked at her

Geet: ok ok..shyly

Maan:"why are you blushing?"

Geet: me & blushing

Maan: yes....

Geet; Mein Geet Maan singh khurana ho mein nai shy hoti ... wrap her arm around her waist.

Maan: lo baat karo .... sharam na ki koi cheeze he nai ha meri biwi mein

Geet: aai lo.... jab pyar kiya to sharmana kya ...

Maan: looked at her .... in surprise...

Geet: maan aap aaj chal ga yeh aglee saadi mein ( maan will you go today or in next century)

Maan: chalo ... pull her from her arm

Geet: aaram se aaram se Dadi will get up...

Maan: oh yes ... they both started walking on their toes ..... as they were about to go out of the main door

Dadi: Maan Geet .....

Maaneet : ufff together

Dadi: where are you going?

Maan: woh dadi Geet ko walk

Geet; woh dadi Maan ko icecream

Dadi: beta .... why you both are telling different story....

Maan: geet tum ko bolna zaroori tha....

Geet: kya aap ko zaroori tha

Dadi :ufff not again this cat & dog fight ..

Both looked at each other..

Maaneet: dadi we are not fighting

Dadi: then

Maaneet: covering each other.......

Dadi: smiled as the both looked in each other eyes .....

Maaneet: this is the way we express our love ...

~~~~~the end ~~~~~

Happy birthday Mano Memon

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hookedonGeet

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: naddiya26
ok in next part Lo baat karo... dear i type what came in my mind 😳

Sorry i just remembered he said " Lo karlo baat" it was cute he has said it twice now i think

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