My Confession---------OS--------- - Page 3

wowww thats really cute, beautiful👏🤗

i really loved it to core😉

beautiful. Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: nikipuki

Very nicely written. I read this piece then went back read Geet's POV and came back and re-read Maan's POV. I really liked the way your mirrored their emotions to the same situation. You repeated the same sentences both from his perspective and hers and they didn't seem out of place at all. Each of the OS's are complete in themselves yet when put to together form another story. Very well done indeed.

The only question I have is, from Sameera's POV she is coming back after 28 months, after Geet and Maan are married, after I assume she initially ditched him it does not reference the meeting with him at the restaurant. Did I miss something?

Originally posted by: blueangel13

hey, thank you liking my os's so much.

this os is a reflection of the OS --Already Gone---

the piece i did from Sam's POV titled ---Love the way you lie---- is completely unrelated to these 2. that one has a very different type of Sam than this one. this sam is very much a plotting gold digger in many ways, the sam in Love the way you live is more of a lost soul who was misguided in her beliefs.