Meri Dukh Bharri Kahani - Dedicated to Deedians - Page 5

Originally posted by: mistymistu

Omg that was amazing!!! Well my day wasn't great either I had a fight with my mum and I got hit in the head and have a huge bump. What a way to start the year. I hope this year gets better for us.


P.s Beautiful poetry once again 😃

Originally posted by: sweet coco

Thank you!! You made my morning...you're a riot!!!

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

One more dukhi atma.....I so feel your pain.

Kya poetry yaar, very nice 😊

Originally posted by: jazzerette

I had a surprise visit from my chaCHA and chaCHI today...more like a shock...😡uff!! And they ruined the nice time I was having with my new found friends!!! So I am going whine, crib and complain in tuchi shayari style😆

In the Mood, I was doing good

But suddenly guests landed up

And mum asked me to cook food

Bana rahi thi sabzi, daal ko laga rahi thi tarrka

GurTi ke khyaalon se mera mann dharka

So distracted I was with the Deed

Jal gayi daal

My subzi turned to weed

Then my dog decided to pee

Chhi chhi maa said

Isse bahar lekar joa jee

Phir bajji meri ringtone

Boli main "Hello, kaun?"

Gusse mein aayi ik awaaz

"Now you don't recognize your dad on phone!!!"

I said Dad I'm really sorry

My mind is stuck about a chhorra-chhorri

Ek hai mouth-watering pasta

Doosri hot-teekhi kachori

Dad bole tere dimaag mein hai phasa TV ka seed

All I could say

InDEED InDEED InDEED

Finally time mila I got back to my PC

Par mera bhai* bola "I'm using it and am busy"

*(bloody lazy bum)

I had to coax and plead*

*(b'liv me had to actually bribe him)

Finally he gave in so I was able to get back

to The Foundation of the Deed

P.S.---

I know its a silly rhyme

But it was the best I could do

in such less time

My mom has allowed me to come online only for this 4 pal

Sorry - ab milungi kal

In guests ke chakkar mein

aaj nahi dekh paayi GurTi ka pyaar*

*(yes I do believe they are secretly in love)

Ab good-night ki baari hai

Kal hi honge unke DEEDar

Originally posted by: drdee142

Wow girl you are great👏👏 loved it to pieces. I tell you it's amazing, well you are amazing and sweetheart I'm as obsessed as you are and so are most Maneetians.

Can't wait to read some more great posts from you.👍🏼