Maine Pyaar Kiya #11 : All is well ?

Hi,

Thanks all of you for appreciating the "MPK on scooty " . and this time I have tried to touch on the emotional turmoil which Maan must have gone through while accepting the baby.. and Geet how she felt when Maan accepted..

I have a feeling CVs avoided the mental turmoil which both characters should have gone through.. and also after Dev truth was out.

Hope you all will like it.

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GB

Maine Pyaar Kiya #11 : All is well ?

Maan was driving in speed.. his mind was racing more then his car.. and he was worried like hell.. It was Geet's call early in the morning..She was crying loudly.. he could hardly hear her voice.. only her sobs..

"Maan, I am not feeling the baby at all since last night.. I don't know what has happened..

"Geet, please stop crying.. I will be there in 5 minutes... and don't worry nothing will happen.." But he knew in his heart he was very nervous.. what has gone wrong... He was just praying.. let everything be fine..

He was thinking of the day.. when Geet had told him about her pregnancy.. He was totally devastated.. The girl whom he always thought to be pure like a dew..is carrying a baby.. the thought of her being in someone's arms.. the thought of her sharing a close moment with someone.. and the thought of someone touching her intimately.. he was totally mad that day.. He couldn't believe her at all... Is she lying.. Is she taking his test.. How this can be true..? .she looks so innocent.. How is this possible.... a child out of marriage..

He came out of his thoughts when his car stopped at her place..

"Geeeet".. he was concerned seeing her. she looked very tensed,.. and her eyes were red.. He could feel her pain and knew she must be crying...

'Geet, nothing will happen... Bharosa rakhon.. " while seating in the car.. Geet was not saying a word.. He knew she is very much worried.. but then he himself was much more worried, trying to put up a brave face..

He knew .. Geet was looking forward to the baby so much.. She had planned everything...even the name.... and he knew baby is her life.. her reason to live.. . For this baby she fought with her near ones to save its life.... a girl who had always lived sheltered life.. came to Delhi.. to face the harsh city life on her own....
and if something goes wrong now... then he knew it will total devastation.... and he was scared.. if he loses her also..

But then Geet is very special woman, she is a fighter .She has always fought for what she thinks is right....and even after facing so much, she has not lost trust in life.. such a positive attitude.. and then he remembered the day.. she told him the truth about her preganancy...
He could have never imagined that behind a ever smiling face lies a tragedy.. and he was amazed by her.. His respect for her grew more..
She is not an ordinary girl.. She is very special.. a chosen one..

He was happy with his decision to accept their relation..He wanted to give her all happiness.. to share all with her all.. her responsibilties also ..It really doesn't matter to him if it was not his child....
but now he will be so much attached to the unborn..he couldn't believe himself.. he didn't knew when he started recognizing himself as father of the child... and the unsaid bond was formed..with the child.. He was also looking forward to the child so much...

He was getting tensed looking at her.. and on another side.. was feeling very disgusted.. Its all because of him.. and his family.. He couldn't believe that because of someone from his family, she has to go through all this.. But then she had never complained.. she never questioned his family..She always believed in him and didn't let any of that come between them.. He thought about himself.. how he always disgraced her family at HP.. without knowing what they were going through...he felt very sorry....

But then when he came to know about Dev,,, he had gone through another test.. without she knowing about it.. Till the time he was not knowing the man.. everything was fine with him.. but thought of her sharing intimate moment with Dev... How could Dev be the man.. with she ....it was making him mad.....and for him accepting this truth was going though hell again....but then again she pulled him out of that dilema with her love.. .. Her feelings never changed after knowing his relation with Dev..she didn't let any such bitterness come between them ..she had believed so much in their love.. and total trust in him...
and then he didn't look back..he has to be with her..they cannot live without each other and nothing matters more...

They reached hospital.. she was looking very nervous.. as if waiting for some bad news..He was also feeling the tensions now..

"Doctor, Is everything fine ?".. He was very much hoping all is well.

"Looks fine to me.. But better get the sonography done.. let us be sure.." He was so relaxed hearing this,. and he looked at her.. She almost had tears in her eyes.. smiling..

"Thank you Doctor... we will meet you again with reports".. They left to get the sonography done...

She was waiting for Maan.. he had gone to collect the report.. She was quite relaxed after meeting the doctor.. but then in her heart still was anxious to see the reports..

She was thinking about Maan.. He looks so worried.. Has he really accepted the child ?

To be continued .. (with Geet's thoughts ...)

That was a lovely post.

Hey Gold ..you captured the pain and anxiety of Maan so perfectly......I also feel that CVs did not do justice to this aspect of the story where Maan's pain should have been shown in a proper light....they just finished it in one scene...but you have really done justice to that feeling....I wish Cvs would have shown it the way you have written.. I enjoyed the comedy in Scooty post and now in this a serious and emotional post you once again proved that U are a wonderful writer. Do continue dear.

Nice updt....liked how you wrote about Maan's inner turmoil...

Originally posted by: whitepearl

Hey Gold ..you captured the pain and anxiety of Maan so perfectly......I also feel that CVs did not do justice to this aspect of the story where Maan's pain should have been shown in a proper light....they just finished it in one scene...but you have really done justice to that feeling....I wish Cvs would have shown it the way you have written.. I enjoyed the comedy in Scooty post and now in this a serious and emotional post you once again proved that U are a wonderful writer. Do continue dear.

Pearl Thanks.. I like Geet because of the depth and intensity of love portrayed.. and the emotional turmoil should have been the highpoint of the serial.. but CVs avoided going in details.. I think it would have made Maan more human..

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Nice updt....liked how you wrote about Maan's inner turmoil...

Originally posted by: goldenball

Pearl Thanks.. I like Geet because of the depth and intensity of love portrayed.. and the emotional turmoil should have been the highpoint of the serial.. but CVs avoided going in details.. I think it would have made Maan more human..

awesome... part.....you are going great..
love the way you write....

part 11
loved the way Maan cares for Geet and the baby...