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Posted: 14 years ago
omggwow dat was awesummm it was sooo sweet and romantic maan questioning geet geet askin him to lseepiin the sleepin bag and wat this terroristt aww i hope both r ok
cnt wait 4 more continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG loved all the updates Muskan......they were awesome!!! OH NO major accident.....yeh kya hai?! I hope nothing happens....PLZ continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

thanxs a lot for all the comments😳 & smacks😭

hope u all like the updates...thanxs ..please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskan keep it up yaar love all yr updates thr never enough tht we can get from u u just make our day
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Posted: 14 years ago


waiting sweety....🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 52

before maan make her understand. the car came infront of the jeep
the guys quickly encircled them pointing the AK-47 at them
maan wispered - lo kah lo sorry
to his shock she actually went forward standing between the gun point & him & said
geet - koi badi missunderstand hogayee hain, we are really sorry
her hand was encircling him backward, like she won't let anything happen to him
he just wondered she was nuts, she had the gun pointed at her & all she was
bothered was him. he just fell in love with her again probably. he knew she loved him
but to this extend he did'nt know ..he doubted if he could do some thing like this.
his love seemed so timid in front of her passion. the momemt was short lived one
of the terrorist hit geet on her head with the guns end. every thing suddenly became dark..
she couldnot see what happened & fell in the jeep. maan protested & tried to pull the gun away
the other guy put a black cloth on maans face & tied his hand from back
terrorist 1 pointing at geet - iska kya karna hain
maan turned his head violently - aap logo ko meri jaroorat hain na usse chod do
terrorist 2 - waise bhi she will be a liability..
terrorist 3 - kisi bureaucrat ki beti hain
terrorist 2 - bekar hi iska baap hala karega
dragged maan to the car ...she could feel they were doing some thing to him
they left her their & zoomed away..she opened her eyes in pain & dizzy..
she saw them taking him away..she did'nt know what to do, she just rush of the thought
followed them keeping a safe distance.
they drew almost for 4hours she had no idea what was happening. but she wanted
him safe. she did'nt know what was she heading into.
finally after driving through series of curves & turns they devitated into
the jungle. she parked the jeep, tucked the guns behind under the shirt & took the knife
into her shoes & covered them with her pants. bilkul filmy she thought to her self
she slowly followed the marks of the car into the jungle. she carefully reached
where they kept him capitive. she managed to sneak inside the room where they kept him
tied on a chair. maans head & face was covered with a black cloth. his legs & hands
were tied to the chair. yeh kya hal kar diya mere bechan ka, I am definitly going to
kill them
she mumered. geet tu yanha se zinda nikal payeghi..babaji mujhe darvoo mat
she quickly shot her prayer to babaji & waited there hiding. behind the door
there were only 3 guys fully loaded with ammunition. she watched them carefully waiting for
them to leave the room. they left him alone after 30mins. she sneaked in slowly
maan could feel her presence..he mumered yeh yanh kya kar rahi hain
khud bhi mar ghi mujhe bhi marvayeghi. yeh aapne aap ko koi james bond
samjh thi hain jo challi aaye yanha pe mere peche peche..uff kya karoon main iss ladki ka
geet wispered abhi kuch nahi karsakte let me just cut the thread then probabaly u can
maan wispered - are u mad
geet - I thought u already knew that..
she removed the black cloth from his head she was about to cut off the last thread from
the legs those guys came running in.
geet wispered - pretend ur tied up
maan immidiately kept his hand behind..
terrorist 2 - u actually thought u could take him from here
terrorist 3 - ladki bahut teez hain
terrorist 2 pointed the gun to drop the knife..she did'nt
terrorist 3 - is chitiya ki jaan to issme hain...pointed at maan
she droped at once
terrorist 1 dragged her away from maan & slapped her..her forehead was already bleeding
now her lips where bleeding to..they all tunred their back to maan..he quickly
untied his legs..terrorist 2 turned back to look at maan & kept the gun on his head
he sat their like he was tied down.
terrorist 3 - why don't we have some fun since we have her here
maan clinched his fist...terrorist 2 hit him on his face with the guns end
he was getting mad, could'nt put her life in danger they had the gun pointed at her
geet jolted when she saw him getting hit
geet screemed in anger - just leave him alone
terrorist 1 - wah meri sherni..touched her softly on her shoulder
she snapped back
terrorist 3 - aise nahi pyar se
maan was swear under his throat
terrorist 2 - why don't strip for us
geet spat - on my death bed
terrorist 2 hit maan again - no on his death bed
geet could not see him in pain - u will not do anything to him
terrorist 1 - ur shirt off giving a lusty look to her cleevage
maan yelled - just leave her alone
terrorist 2 hit maan again & his forehead was bleeding..geet removed her shirt at once
maan looked away...she was just wearing a thin pink slip hugging her body & her
white bra lines were shown..the 3 guys had their jaws dropped open looking at her
quite clearly visible curve lines. maan remembered how much she hates guys with
lusty looks & she is putting up all this just for him...her eyes were diluted but she
was quite determined.
terrorist 1 touched her stomach with the guns tip & asked to remove the slip
maan - ur not doing any thing
terrorist 2 hits him again - usse koi problem nahi to tujhe kya problem hain
geet crossed her hand like trying to pull out the slip...
maan pulls the gun from the terrorist 2 & fires at him
other two turn to point at maan & he point at them
she pulls out the guns from her back & fires at them.
she keeps firing at them even after they where lieing dead on the floor
maan hugs her - calm down its ok....she drops the gun
she caress his face his hands, his head ..- aap teehk ho
maan - pagli main teehk hoon
before they could get out ...there were more of them heading towards them
geet - yeh Maan Singh khurana ko to main maar hi dallonghi
maan smiled & mumered aab tumhe jo karna hain karlena ..yah zindaghi tumhari hi hain
geet - jeep maine road side main park ki hain, it is like 30mins run from here
they held their hands & ran , she knew the way out..she lead through the woods
and the slopes & reached the road. maan started the jeep & drove really fast
the road was really curvy & steep.. the terrorist followed closely
& shot at the wheel. the jeep went out of control & was heading towards the cliff
it was a huge water fall...it was cold stream flowing down.
maan hold on ..jump away from the jeep...& the rocks..take a long breath
the moment u hit the water try to rise back up...umm
she looks at him fearlessly umm
geet - aapko swimming aati hain na
maan mumered issko is waqt bhi meri padi hain hain shakes his head & nodes for a yes
she was relaxed, he wondered what was she made off...
just when the jeep falls of the cliff along the water fall. they hold their hands &
jump out of the it, away into the water...down the along the falls...

precap
cast away
NEXT PART 53
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskan di..i started reading your ff at 2 at night..just finished it am hour back. .you are too good..please please please..update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
RESV : posted comment at next page😊
Edited by pushpi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my gosh..i requested you to update..and the subject of your topic changed to updating..wow what a gift..thanks in advance.. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskhan loved the concept everything .
but to short hii😆

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