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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 53

impt note all the updates have the link to the next part near the precap
once it is updated...so it is easy to read ...at one go...all the threads & parts are connected one after the other...just for readers convience..
they hold their hands & jump out of the jeep, away into the water...down the along the falls...
he holds on to her so does she...they togather hit the cold water. it pricks their body
like thousand needles from all over. their eyes meet inside the water...they immidiately
try to rise..maan nodes his head tell her to move away..since jeep will just land behind them
they swim under water away as fast as they could ..loud splash follows pushing them further down with the impact, he pulls her up & they move towards the nearest rock which let them to the
jungle. she rised out of the water & cuffed, panting catching for the breath.
she turned looking for him, he rised out of the water like a greek god
pushing his hair behind & unbuttoning his shirt. she kept looking at him with
so much of desire in her eyes, was it the emotional outburst of all what they just
went they through or was it just her hidden desire, she could not take her eyes off him
he looked at her, her pink slip was no more a slip it was sticking to her finely
carved body erotically almost transperent, her bra with her curves was very promnent
he removed his shirt & walked towards her. she mumered babaji, inhe kya hogaya
she inched back sliding on the rocks, he squeezed the shirt & asked her to wear it
geet oh ..ok..sighed in relief. she went behind the trees & removed her slip & bra
without thinking wore his shirt. she came out with his blue shirt & her hair let lose
he looked at her, his gaze travelled from her skinny legs clinging to the pair
of wet jeans to her face, he could not fail to notice her curves losely hanging
now, probably she was not wearing her inners..he looked back to her face, he looked at
her face which was now washed away with the cold water, no make up, no lipstick
the blood was washed off from the lips & forehead, but new layer of blood was
ozzing out from her forehead, it was all turned blue near the lip were she got hurt.
he cups her face angryly - tumhe kya zaroorat thi wanha aane ki
geet innocently - how could I let anything happen to you
maan held her face in his hands - tumhe kuch hojata tho
geet - waise bhi main aapke bia nahi rah pati
he kisses her madly all over her face it was more of concern pats soothing her wounds
maan - u will not do any thing like this again, samjhi
geet - u promise not to go away from me, reluctantly slipping her hand around him
he traced a finger down a strand of wet hair. he slowly tucked the strands behind her ear.
geet - sab aapki wajah se huwa
maan pulled her from her hair to meet her gaze - WHAT
she rests her head back on his chest - na aap mujhe se naraz hote, na yeh sab hota
he knew he was wrong he kept quite & hugged her tighter - sorry
geet - nahi aap sorry mat kaho mujhe aacha nahi lagta
his hand slid close to her waist touching her bare skin where she tied a knot
with the ends of the shirts. his touch send shiver down her. she could feel her
body reacting differently to his touch now, she liked sorry loved the difference
he could feel her n***** all hard pressing against his chest, making him feel
want her more. she moved away feeling odd the way her n***** seemed through the
shirt, she turned her back, jhali bahut zarori tha bra utrna, kitna odd lag raha
hain, chi chi babaji kuch karo na, kya lage ga unhe.
she heard a splash in the water & turned back in shock
maan was swiming near the water fall
geet screemed - are u mad
maan smiled & went underwater, he did'nt come out for few mins. she panicked
& began to walk up & down briskly. then she just decided to jump in the water
to look for him lossing all hopes of him coming back, he rose up carrying some
thing in his hand. she ran towards him & helped him with the back bag.
they came to the rocks & she waked him - bolke nahi ja sakte the
maan - bolke jata to tum bhi saat chalne ka zid karti
geet - hain to
maan - I could manage it myself, I did'nt want to put u in any more trouble
because of me
geet - woh kyun
maan puts the bag down and holds her closer from her waist - kyunki tum main
meri jaan basti hain
geet snapps out - to meri jaan kya us chidiya main bus thi hain, meri jaan bhi
to aap main
meeting his gaze she eats her words
he never wanted to hear anything from her now. he had enough & more evidence
of her love for this life & rest of the lifes. he just smiled at her naughtly.
she looked away & pulled out the bag
geet - waterproof hain
maan - not sure
they open the stuffs & lay them out. he pulls out his jeans & shirt, and hands over to her
change karlo, thand lag jayeeghi. geet took the cloths & went behind the trees mumering
zaroor unhone notice kiya hoga thats why he went to get this cloths for me
chi ..kitna odd lagraha hoga unhe, mana ki unki GF hoon lekin, koi decency honi chahia
tuj main
. she changed & came out mumering & was shocked to see him in just a a pair
of black jeans, her mumering continued jhali use mat dehkna warna tere hormones pata
nahi kaise kaise reaction denge
, she was already blushing & feeling uncomfartable.
he pulled out a axe from the bag & cut out some dry woods. it was treat to her eyes
to watch him but she felt so odd & ashamed with her thoughts getting out of control
maan set up the tent & arranged the woods to set the fire.
maan - fetch some water in the kettle
geet lost in him got the water & poured it on the woods he had arranged for burning
maan - yeh kya kar rahi ho
geet looked down & dropped the kettle once and ran into the tent hid her face
in the sleeping bag & started to cry.
maan rushed behind her - kya huwa tumhe
geet snapped back in tears - aap nage pange mere samne mat gooma, mujhe ajeeb ajeeb
se kayal aate hain
he wore his vest & came back - aab teehk hain

geet reluctantly looked at him & nodded
maan - use ke liya roti kyun ho
geet - pehle kyun nahi pehni, mujhe tang karne keliya aise kar rahe the
maan - nahi baba, I was saving for u to wear it tomorrow, just in case if we are
stuck here longer.
she looked at him feeling guilty
maan - waise tum meri bare main kya soch rahi thi
she waks him - kuch nahi
maan tickles her batavoo na she laughs & falls back
he pinns her down - tell me
geet embarressed - kuch nahi, let me go
maan - I won't unless tell me
geet - kaha na kuch nahi
maan bends closer - batavoo na
geet - chodo mujhe pushing him away fighting with her hands & legs
he really pinns her harder this time - batvoo
geet turns her face he saw her cheeks it was red & tempting
he placed a soft kiss very senciously, she turned to look at him in shock, that small feel
of his lips made her head spin & her thoughts were rushing all towards
some thing she thought was forbidden. she felt guilty & her eyes were mosit
he left her at once to see reluctance in her. he knew she was not ready for a
kiss yet. he moved back & went out to set the fire with new set of logs

precap
cast away continued😉😳

NEXT PART 54
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar muski.. now it's been a routine :-
My day starts with "Truly Magical" and ends with "Madhoshi". Now back to update.. as always great yaar... I really liked Geet today 👏👏👏.. I liked the way how she still treasured the values.. hope you will have more more more surprises for us in the next update 😉😉😉😉😍😍😍😍😳
😳😳.. Honey when is Geet going to realiseMSK is her bachan only???
😳
Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome muskan.....u made my day.....i was so bored i was waiting for u r update.......it was so romantic and hot😉.........loved it......hope i was there with maan instead of geet😆☺️🤣.....anyways want moreeee romance between them......update soon

---------vini😊
Edited by vinithaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

super awesome update...............

completely loving it
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
jhali use mat dehkna warna tere hormones pata
nahi kaise kaise reaction denge
,

aap nage pange mere samne mat gooma, mujhe ajeeb ajeeb
se kayal aate hain
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Loved the Update..
OMG...Truly Magical..hehe
Aww..maan is soo sweet..
Loved the kiss and the hugs...😳
Continue soon
Cant wait for the Next part😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
bindblowing update
can u belive it i specially got up in morning to read ur FF
it was outstanding,really nice and romantic.loved it
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz conitnue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!!! da castaway did cast them away in love.........

Loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update muskan
do post the next part soon
thanks for the pm
Mariam
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful
geet is so very innocent......loved their chemistry
simply mindblowing
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyy dii!!
AHHHHHH....stop it...you are gonna kill me of hyperventilation here!!😆....wayy too HAWTTT!😳
hmmmm...really geet, i wonder what you were thinking!😉....i have a feeling its something all of us or atleast some think everyday😆😉
fab update di!!...once again, water...a key symbolic element in their relationship...it brought them closer here as well!😳
you know this is not fair....*pout*....you really can't leave us readers hanging like this...god knows how i will sleep today😆....and the precap, omgg!!...i have said this before but i will say it again...really, you couldn't have chosen a better or more apt title...their relationship is soo magical, this ff is magical and the one who created this magic, *cough* you *cough*, is truly magical!⭐️
lovee you!! pweez continue soon!!...sorry, can't stop being greedy!😆

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