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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: mrk_1
nice update yaar...do introduce maan soon ...

Maan will be introduce later... Just trust me... his intro is the best... keep faith on me.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: wajiha-1
nice intro
concept seems to be intresting
add me pm list
continue soon

Thank you so much...

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ansah
that was superb....really awesome...

the start was great...waiting for more

and do add me 2 ur pm list thx

Thank you so much...

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -shamima-
Ooh this is interesting and the concept of this story is hatke from the rest anyways great update and continue soon 😊

Thank you... yep.. its hatke... cause its based on Canadian culture mixed it Indian tradition...

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: komlika
nice FF..........please add me to PM 😊

Thank you... I am not having pm list.. in face click on the like button on the part I update... each time.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK
Really interesting start...
Can't wait to read a continuation! 😃

Please do add me to your PM list and continue asap ⭐️

Thank you

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Thank you for the comments... they have made my day.

Here is the second part...

Maan and his family will be introduce further down the story... not now.

since its about Geet's struggle against life...

based on today's teenager and their thinking about life.

Enjoy!

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Part II

Rishi parked his car on the driveway... snow flakes blowing every where in mid-February. Geet ran inside her house... throwing her coat aside and quickly ran into the washroom.

Rishi looked worry along with two of his friends and her friends.

{Geet's Perspective}

I heard someone knocking... I knew it must be bro, but how can I explain him about my monthly cycle... and first two days are painful and I start vomiting. Entire ride school to home... I control myself from throwing up.. if Karan didn't let cuddle in his arms than god knows what would have happen.

After wiping my face.. I open the door.. I was shock to even react..

{Karan's Perspective}

I was scared to react.. didn't know why.. when I saw her rushing inside the washroom without being caught I escape toward the bathroom.. and couldn't help myself from knocking.

When she open the door she got shock.. I snap my fingers to get her attention after she mumble my name.

{Geet's Perspective}

Only thing I could mumble was his name after he got my attention.

Geet: Karan... tum

Karan: I was worried

Geet: Oh! Everything is fine..

Karan: You know we are friends since we were kids and you can share any thing with me.

I smiled at him first than said "I know Karan, but there are some things that can not be shared. I would appreciate if you could get P2 Di"

I saw Karan nod his head.. I watch him disappear.. I lock the door and threw up again.

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I hardly ate anything.. both Rishi and Karan looked worried.. I just smile at them and excused myself.

Rishi: Why don't you stay home for the afternoon?

Geet: No Bro.. its just morning sickness

Rishi: Where you throwing up?

Geet: Woh..just woh!

Rishi: Woh kya?

Geet: Just few minute ago..

I notice the facial expression changed on Bro and Karan. I wonder why Karan is showing so much concern for me.. Now I am confused.

Rishi: It's final you'll stay home.. end of discussion.

I watch Bro march up the stairs.. I followed him upstairs than toward my room.

I changed in my scooby doo pj and made myself comfortable in bed with my four blankets.

Ready to close my eyes when I heard a knock on my door.. U didn't want to get out of bed so I shouted "come' in"

The door open slowly and I was shock again to see Karan.. now I am sure there is some attachment between us.

He walked toward me and sat on my bed.. next to me.

I smiled.

Karan: Take care of your self

I nod my head with a smile..

He leaned forward and gave me peck on my forehead.. before I could realize what happen.. he turn to leave.. but I slowly hold his arm and pulled him onto me.

I slivered by his touch on my face.. his hot breathe was sending different sensitization down my stomach.. I pulled him closer.. inches apart of our lips.. but before we could feel them.. his phone rang and brought us back to reality.

He get up.. I was blushing deep pink.. and watch him leave afterwards I close my eyes.

Edited by Miketa - 14 years ago