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Posted: 14 years ago
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I absolutely loved today's episode. There was so much emotion - understated yet deep. Both Maan and Geet feel ashamed for their actions but express it differently. Geet as expected could not believe that she would have raised her hand on him. The girl abhors violence and is quick to accept her mistake even if it was justified under the circumstances. Maan too realises that there is something grossly wrong with their relationship. He wonders how he has become this way.


The lift scene was poignant. This is their third encounter (is it not?) in the lift but unlike earlier occassions when one or the other was angry and the other tried to appease, in this ride both were absolutely silent although their thoughts were not. For the first time they were uncomfortable in each other's company because they were ashamed by their actions. Geet lost her voice for the first time. She was both fearful and embarrassed to speak. Her dupatta tried to play cupid but when she realised it was touching Maan she dragged it back, not wanting to anger him further. Maan on the other hand thought that she did not even want her dupatta to caress him. Thankfully he did not vocally react in anger and precipitate the situation. By the time Geet got her voice back, Maan was gone.


Geet is never one to give up. I love this about her. She is not deterred by Maan's indifference to her. She barges into his cabin. Thankfully today we saw a more cool headed Maan. It must have taken tremendous effort for a hot headed guy like him to remain calm. He politely tell her not to disturb him and he will talk to her later. His calmness stuns her as she has never seen him in this avataar. She cutely draws his attention to the fact that it is her and I loved Maan's response there. After all in an all male office the only female voice could only be Geet's not that Maan would ever forget it. He asks her to leave which she reluctantly does, all the while looking at him and trying to figure out what is in his mind. Maan knows without looking that she was heading to the door with her back to it and from past experience of having seen her bump herself this way, he warns her. Loved the expression on his face as he looked up to see her receding form; it showed how much he still cared for her. Maan has truly been woken up by that tappad!


The store room scene was the best of the lot. Loved the way Geet locked the door and silenced him the way he has done innumerable times. What she said next wrenched my heart. She begs him to hear her out for it had taken her a lot of effort to work up the courage to say what she intended to. Maan was moved by these words because he understood what she must have gone through. Geet has apologised in the past too but this time was different. Maan has been wild of late. There is never knowing how he will react to her and yet she was bold enough to take that first step to make peace. She gave a straight forward apology without losing her dignity. She also made it clear what he did was wrong. That really was commendable. the girl never shies away from calling a spade a spade. Maan knows what he did was wrong but stops short of actually apologising. She wants her answer (whether he has accepted her apology). He promises to answer in an hour's time (here he was referring to correction for all the mistakes in their relationship). Geet is left confused and in apprehension.


I think the meeting Maan is rushing off to is to finalise the sale of India Paints. He will leave IP and return to KC. When she realises that Maan has sold the company, Geet may think that he has not forgiven her slap and may be heartbroken. She returns home to see Dev and is double heart broken and may decide to leave the city.


Coming to Meera-Dev and Meera-Geet portions. The first showed that this girl is still blindly in love with the crook. she could have admitted him in a hospital if he was really sick. Why bring him home knowing how Geet will feel about his presence. Totally selfish of her. The second scene only reiterated her selfishness when she lied to Geet. totally spineless character. Yash is better off without her.


The only reservation I have about today's episode is that only part of the problem between them is addressed. Both were regretting the previous night. But that is just the tip of the iceberg, the symptom not the disease. Unless they address the root cause of their problem, things cannot be back to normal but yes today was a start.

Edited by Opti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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My verdict, actually I liked it a lot...even with the Dev-Myra scenes...Didnt feel like the flow was out!
I loved the way Geet stated her stand, showed Maan his wrong and said the path she choose to counter attack was also wrong!

Today we saw one apology
I could write a eulogy
On Geet's depth of understanding
Of her and Maan's standing
The distinction between the right of right
Hopefully more sense in sight
And the wrong of wrong
Hopefully the last we are fed this crap at the strike of the gong!!


And I can see Maan making amends to his act as well.

Something I want Maan to say to Geet

I lost my mind, for you werent in sight
Your absence made my heart forget whats right
Your denial made my cringe in pain
Your shunning made me insane
Please oh dear
Nothing can make up for my behavior
I am ready to make every amend
Creep, crawl and bend
Seeking your forgiveness and setting the equation back
Is the only way my mind will be on track
But I have realized one thing along this way
I need you more than I thought I may
Your breath in the air I want to breathe
Your voice is the only sound I want to heed
Your face are the only sight I was to see
You mind, body and soul is my one and only destiny
You are my one and only love, my Geet
And I shall remain yours forever, my sweet!!


I feel now we are in on the amend track before we head to reunion. Like people have been saying, I think he will walk out of her life for now, thinking that too much water under the bridge and his presence in her life is only messing things for both of them. That arises from 2 facts, she has constantly stated that she doesnt need him and now that guilt of his behavior has reached that high point where he feels that even the dupatta touching is something she would avoid. He is just going through that shame and guilt of his acts.

He might leave her incharge and head to KC.

But this time, Geet might come back saying yes, I want to be independent but your absence makes me lose meaning in life. You taught me how to walk this path and you let me fly, but when I return home and I dont have my one and only family to share my new found joy, whats the use of this independence?

Geet to Maan

My love, you decided to walk away
Leaving me to seek my way
In this world unknown
Strangers all around and I feel alone
I want to take my flight
But come home at the end of the night
Lie in the arms of my love and share
My everyday happiness, joy and care
Waiting to hearing your say
As I chatter away
I want to share my every second
Hold your hand and tend
To our life together
As we walk on forever!






Edited by ykannan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I reserved yesterday's den page but din get enough time to write anything. sry for wasting a post.😭

Ok. bak with yesterday's epi. I think it is the best epi after the separation track started. Diwali epi was good but last night's epi was best as it cleared many points to the viwers. I have no prob with it. my only objection was about the place & characters. the party may took place in some other place. I do get the point that they had to show the diffrence between their frst water drowning scene with this one. So they arranged the pool party. But some bloopers are there as that was a river & this was a pool. That time they were all alone & now circled by too many ppl. The situation changed. It could be done better but there is always limitation in tv shows.🤢


The epi began with geet's drowning & Maan's saving her. well enuf. No matter how much he denies he cant let his eyes out of her. thats the truth. thts the reason he becomes the saviour of her. Geet's dialogue was very good & pointed the same ques we r having last some days. Like what he is up to? why he called her? why is he insulting her? Is insulting her publicly is his only job these days? Why is he humiliating himself infront of public? Does his heart allow do it? Maan did his xtreme humiliation to Geet last night's epi in public & in private. but at the same time he questioned Geet wht happend with tht party grl. he felt something was wrong between tht grl & Geet. nd he never allows neone to humilite Geet infront of him. so he asked wht was the prob? he was egarly waiting for Geet to come to him & tell him her complain but Geet never do it. Here Geet also has to learn tht seeking help to her beloved or complaining abt someone to his beloved is not her weakness. It is another form of love to assure ur beloved tht I need u at the time of my crisis. He may not always protect her like guide. But sharing her problems with him can make the bond stronger. But Geet never do this. She never talks about her with hi. He has to understand it from her movement or eye contact. This time Geet was not doing this in a determind way to show herself stronger. which made him hyper & took him top to it.
wht happend in dance floor? he went to dance with the grl to teach Geet some lesson. But deep in his heart he wanted her to stop him. like the Pari track in disco night. He wanted her to come to him & grab his hands with full authority & drag him out of there. He wanted her authority over him. But Geet was in pain. All she was witnessing that hes ruining their golden moment & memories of kurban hua dance sequence. So she was all teary. Another hit on Maan. Maan hates tears on Geet's eyes. So he did more. at the end she cudnt take it & left the hall. in this whole time tht party grl was never important to him. He dint bother to look at her once. All he observed is her pain. the monster inside him told him that give her more pain & u will feel good. But his heart knows its opposite. Just after she left the place he was lost. he was searching for her madly. he faced her. he wanted to knw from her what wrong he made? he wanted to know from her that she is jealous. he wanted her to claim him as hers. but she didnt do that. He got more angry & showed extreme violence.😡
the main problem of MSK was he cant take this strong Geet. for him Geet is soft & tender. he is there to wipe her tears & ensure tears dont come from her eyes. but what he forgot is, this strong Geet is his creation. bak in HP he told geet as a stranger tht women always need someone to protect themselves. either bro or father or husband. thts the reason he use to hate women that time. But now he wanted geet to come to him. So here is the controversy. in general he wants women to be self dependent. But when it is the matter of Geet he wants to be part of her in every single moment. travel all the rough & smooth path with her. That dosent mean he wants a weak geet. He wants Geet to share her trouble with him. So that he can b the part of his problem too. But Geet is denying continuesly tht she dont need him. thts hitting his ego & he is brusting in anger.
From geet's pov, she needs him always. mentally, physically & all way. But here she is also in pain so she is denying. Also she is feeling his pain which he is not admiting. So in this process she is in double pain. But her anger make her deny the acceptence. One simple hug & some authority wud calm down the monster inside maan. but she dint do it coz she knew she was right & maan was wrong. Maan shud learn to control his anger & feel other ppls pain & anger too. So at the heat of the moment the most wanted slap came. The slap was very much needed to make Maan realize tht he is acting childish & evilish. He shud stop at some point. Also it shows geet's full authority over him. It shows if Maan does something wrong she has full strength & courage to stop him as his partner. A very solid foundation between a couple. So with that slap both of them came to a point.
Today we saw guilt from both side. from geet's side it was predictable but from Maan's side it was guilt & pain. He was broken in guilt of pain with his acts. His self talk reflects it. whats wrong with our pure relation? why we changed so much? He used WE. not individually me & she. so he did break. Geet was in guilt coz she knew maan was wrong but she dosnt approve physical violence. its horrible pain from both side. both r guilty but MSK is silent & Geet is vocal.
He dint give angry look when she enterd the elevator. he felt pain when she remove the dupatta frm his hand. he was all broken & silent. geet was guilty only not broken like him. So she tries to take the frst step. she went to his cabin without his call. she wanted to talk. but he was in such guilt & pain that he was not ready to face her. She mentioned I m geet. he calmly replied I recognize ur voice. no anger or no brust up. he was cheking files but his third eye was on her. So he told her to look forward when she approchd to the stairs. After she was gone the pain in his face was beyond imagination. Geet realized something is very much wrong with this calmness. It is not his character. The fact is she cant this silence from his side & pain in his eyes.
then again Geet tried to say sorry & makd it & show her point of being sorry. Also she raised her voice by saying that u were wrong last night. He listend silently. no anger only guilt. Guilt in front of the person he loves. So where is the gap? again in their way of thoughts & acts. geet was vocal & let out her pain & guilt but maan was silent & teary with guilt & pain. He again made some promise that he will shape up everything which was ruined between them. he said its his last promise. well yes it is. before that he made all promises to her. love promise, responsibility promise, being a part of her life's promise & all. So it will be his last promise. he is promising if I did wrong I will make it up. Now & in future. Another life long promise. Like all the promises he will keep this promise too. So it is another begining of this love story. making mistake in relationship is common thing but the couple shud realize it at some point. Thts what they r doing now.😊
Dev's stay in Meera's house is future track may b. Meera is hiding the truth from geet. Again Geet will be betrayed by a friend. it will lead to some gud track I hope. NT will b bak in action soon. Most important part is how MSK will make up the situation & how Geet will take it. I observed one important thing in today's epi. The taveez was always with Geet's hand. So may be some track from this angle too. No matter what happens I am hopefull we r proceeding towards a mature & passionate re-union😊
Edited by shadowstreet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Devils!! 🤗

Reserved!!

Will be back much much later to edit.

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved.

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Without knowing what MSK is planning, the story remains incomplete. So, a complete analysis is not possible. Seeing Zee and Jyo crying, I am afraid something drastic and wrong is going to happen 😭

But coming to the episode, MSK's guilt oozed out in every scene. The animal is tamed. He was unable to meet Geet's eyes. Felt for the character. Felt sad and sorry for him. Why did you let yourself go down that path MSK? Mission of actor, director, CVs accomplished. Left its mark.

Geet, dear Geet - that determination and inner courage to face everything - whatever it is - guilt, anger, mistakes, injustice! Where do you get that from? Give some of that to me! I could make so much more out of my life, if I had that... I am reminded of the initial promo of Geet. "Woh president nahin, x nahin, y nahin, lekin phir bhi woh sabki prerna banegi" or something like that (irony - didn't one phrase in that promo said "woh kissi company ki CEO bhi nahin" 😃)

Waiting for tomorrow's episode to see if it is the sad times ahead for us or the happy times. Personally, I am fine with some more time before reunion, but I don't want them moving further away from each other (which is something Maan's last dialogue seems to indicate 😭). Giving space and time to each other is good though.
Edited by sharmishtha01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mein Yahaan Houn Yahaan Houn Yahaan Houn Yahaan

😎🤣🤣🤣

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Should i or should i not..?? 🤔
Man how cares..i am just reserving to get this Den moving 🤣
Will come back to edit If i feel like writing something! :)
BTW
ALL: Answer my question on Meera
What is her purpose in this show ?
(A) TO give a place for Geet to stay
(B) To take care of Dev
(C) TO give a place for Geet to stay
(D)TO take care of Dev
Pick one option PLEASE 🤓
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Okay watched the episode n i loved it! :)
First of all, Dev admiring Meera : Ewwwwwww 🤢🤢🤢
Secondly, GC excellent acting Today! Really i could feel him being remorseful just through his eyes. It was really in regretting plus gulity mode Today. 😆
And i realised one thing, Maan did realised by himself that what he did was wrong. That cabin scene just proved it when he wasn't able to meet Geet's eyes. SO am happy! Coz i really wanted Maan to have some self dialogues n realised it on his own rather than Geet apologising to him n then only he realised.
Instead it was him realising it already by himself n then after Geet apologised to him, he felt worse. Meaning to say more guilty.
Now the ending part, what he said about "aakri vaada"......that sounds sad actually. I guess u guys r right, Maan might just distance himself away from Geet by leaving her.
I STILL feel he shdn't give her Indian Paints as a whole, coz Geet never wanted the company in the first place.. INSTEAD i go with hegdemedha's prediction, i would rather see a public apology from MSK to Geet coz he did publicly humilate her, so maybe he should publicly apologise to her as well .... 😆...I never like things to be done publicly...but i think this is fine..coz i really don't see the need for him to give her Indian Paints!..
Meera --- The fact that she is hiding from Geet just annoys me. AND she wants to keep him in the house for 2-3 days..is she crazy..? How is she gonna keep him in the room only.? 😆 I tell ya she should just start her own tenant business..n get more people to pay rents...by renting out her spare rooms.......😆😆😆
Oh yes, love the "chup, bilkul chup" moment....😳...
No wonder DD n GC were comparing each other's hands in Today's SBS episode! 😆
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Edited by Blueberry_07 - 14 years ago
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oyee me alone? 😕

i aint writing no analysis....😳😆
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Edited by maansa - 14 years ago
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@49erfan....
Absolutely agree with you
will watch the show and revert
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Hello all..ahhh so GEET 10/11 epi..



Wasn't it fantastic..better than that comedy on Monday..



Wow me loved it and I know why they made us laugh coz they
wanted to make us cry today..oh yaa I did in that elevator scene..it was so
simple but that one dialogue maan says kills u.."uska duppata bhi ab mere haath
ko chu kar guzre ab use yeh bhi manzur nahi.."



Man so simple yet so beautiful..she is uncomfortable coz she
thinks he will be thinking wrong about her and he is uncomfortable coz he knows
he is wrong..gosh and both of them dying to speak but the words just don't stay
with u..man it was the beautiful scene of the day for me..



Can I skip the dev meera part..yaar some one explain what
was going on I will write but when I was blank what do u want me to write..



Ahh I forgot that pool scene'



Oh gosh it was done perfectly ..MSK remembering each and
every dialogue that has gone on bw the two past few days and then he getting
more angry at his own self..wow well done..and side by side we had geet
thinking she shouldn't have raised her hand'that's like GEET..isnt it..the one
who does anything but not raise her hand.. we have seen that before the dargah moment..so
just loved it and then his self talks..ahhh at last the editors listened to us
and not cut off this..IT WAS AN IMPORTANT scene with loads of emphasis on
various things about MSK and GEET here..their
much required self talk was shown at last..



His dialogue "kaise ho gaya yeh mujse main geet kya ho gaya
hai humein yeh kaise be kaabu ehsaah hai jo huemin khud se alag kardein..yeh
hum kaise raaste pe nikal gaye..jis raaste ki pavithrata pe humein naaz tha use
aaj hum apne haathon se'kyun kyun hum saari seemyain paar kar rehin hai..main
aisa toh nahi tha..geet aisi toh nahi thi'"



AHHH doesn't that show he is sorry and he did what he did in
anger..so this where we start on path of redemption..



Then the sorry scene..loved that..



Mmm last dialogue left us wondering.."aakhri waada"..what I have
deciphered MSK in so many months..i would put it in this theory here..



..yup he is planning to walk away..why..coz when people like
MSK find they cant repair something, something that is beyond their control
specially there emotions, yes these people have extreme sides of emotions thats
bad i know but thats the truth..ok so when these people face something like
this they try to walk away and go back to their own shell..coz letting their
emotions out is not something they can do naturally and when it becomes un
controllable they tend to leave it coz it kills them to know that some one else
knows about their emotions..



That's what I think..pls no chappals at me for this..



To all it was a good epi..yes even the editors for once I don't
feel like killing u..



Ahhh but BG pls MAHIIIIIIIIII make it softer pls..it hurts
and already MSK speaks so loudly na ..man it takes all my concentration to hear
what he is saying..



Gurmeet: AHHH yesterday everybody hated maan today they
cried for him..didnt I already say all thanks to u for making MSK so special



Drishti: wow one min we see a naughty geet and one min a
girl who is half crazy over whats gonna happen and worried..thanks for that..



That's all from me today..yup u all saved..hehe

I could never say what he meant to me,

i could never tell wht he had done for me,
made me brave made me smile,
held my hand along the mile,
my life is his to treasure,
my smiles are his to decipher,
no pain i want to go his way,
no suffering to stop him away,
my life could nevr be complte without him,
but now i have nothing but a flower without sun..


Edited by mchopra - 14 years ago

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