OS: Consequences Prt 2Pg7 Nov 11

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111priyan

@111priyan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#81

awwwwww such a sad ending but must say very well written

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#82

That was sad ending

I thought we wuld get happy ending but watevr Maan did this punishment was still lil less But still feels bad for him

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#83

very nice parts...................nicely written....................but where is Geet???????????

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#84

just read both the parts!...

amazing!...

that was sooo touchy!...

beautifully written!

thnx 4 the pm!

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Hola twinnie,

OMG i missed you sooo much too!!....you probably don't see me on forum cuz i have been suffering from orgo-genesis in college and now that thanksgiving break is here, i can finally breathe!! 😆....you must have a break too, right?...so does that mean more time to write stuff and more of that stuff for me to read?😉...lol but jokes aside, how have you been? i know this is really late but how was your thesis?....i wish i was at that stage so i wouldn't be taking dumbo orgo and i would actually have a life!😆....okay enough of my bakwaas, now moving on to your OS...another one, which may i add, is not a "HAPPY ENDING"....by now, i don't think i need to remind you of my pink bulldozer!!😡

hmm idk so what should i start with? tareef karu ya chillao?...fine, good thing first...i think the highlight of this OS was the emotions!!👏....they were soo painful and deeply moving that they totally touched my heart....it was as if i could feel maan's pain of losing someone close to him and to be able to get this reaction from a reader definitely tells you something about your awesome supercool amazing fantastic writing skills and power!!⭐️👏....and trust me, i am not being a biased twin at all!😆...ur mad good dude...u know maybe through telepathy, you could do my essays for me too!😆....and i lovedd this meera😃....she was like superwoman...BAM BAM WHOOSH PHOOSH!!...ya those were awesome dialogues and i was like uh huh you go girl!!👏....but.....that big BUT...i understand this ending had to be this way for it to go along with the entire theme of the OS but still, me is very gussa at you!!😡...cuz u know i m a sucker for happy endings and yet you still torture me!😭....well missy, now i better get some happy happy story rapido, considering maaneet in the show are soo lovey dovey nowadays!😳😉

loveee you!!!❤️

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

aww jaz i feel soo bad for maaneet...
'He'd been an idiot, and acted before he thought. He'd done the crime and so now, he'd face the consequences. And a life without Geet, was the biggest consequence of all.' this just says it all.

wonderful os Jaz, ur writing always leaves me wanting more...u have a way with words :D