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Okay a total random OS!!!
I dont know what I was thinking while writing this!!!
Anyways...
Here it is!!!


"Maan... Maan!!!" Geet said trying to wake him up from his sleep shaking him

"Sone do na!!!"Maan says as he keeps the pillow on his head

"Mr. Maan Singh Khurana... If you did not wake up don't blame me if your bed and you get drenched" Geet said in a warning tone

"Hmm" Maan said half sleeping

"Theek hai!!! But don't say that I did not warn you" Geet said going away but felt his hand holding hers stopping her

"Maan chod..." Geet's sentence did not complete as he pulled her towards him and rolled over

"OUCH!!!" Maan shouted as he was on the floor with a pillow in his hand

It was the 9th time in the month he ended up on the floor with a pillow in his hand. He just hit his head with his hand and said

"Yeh ladki mujhe sach much pagal kar de gi!!! Karde gi kya??? Kar chuki hai" Maan said as he got up and sat on the bed keeping the pillow on the bed. He checked his mobile and smiled as the same message which he has been receiving from the past one month was also today that too on the same time 8:33 am.

"Morning Dear Hubby!!! Hope You Had A Good Sleep!!1 Just Want To Say That Wifey Loves You and Misses You A Lot!!! P.S: Your angel is fine... Waiting eagerly for Dada to take it into his arms" Maan kissed the mobile as he read the message for the umpteenth time. He got up off the bed and went to fresh up. He comes out of the washroom and was shocked to see Geet standing infront of the mirror filling her maang. She looked at her astonished and walks to her. He was about to hug her from behind when he hears daadi calling him. He turns around and yells that he is coming totally irritated. He then turns around and sees no sign of Geet where he saw her a while ago.

He held his head in his both hands frustrated. He realized that as the time of their meeting is coming near... He is more and more impatient to see her. Its been one month since she went with her annoying sister and brother-in-law and he has been missing her badly since. He remembers how he and Geet returned from the doctor that fateful day and as they entered the house Geet squealed with joy as she saw her younger sister sitting in the living room.

"Meera" Geet shouted as she entered the hall

"Sambhaal ke Geet!!!" Maan held her hand as she tried to run

Meera who heard her elder sister voice got off the sofa and Ran towards Geet to hug her. Maan saw her approaching Geet running and knew any moment she would be hugging Geet tight. Maan without thinking twice stood in between Geet and hugged Meera. Meera quickly broke the hug and said irritated

"Umm Jeejz... Kya hai???"

"What do you mean kya ha??? You both sisters!!! Please show all your enthusiasms and share your sisterly hugs once ma angel comes safely in ma hands" Maan said as he pulled out of the hug

"Tell your wife to be careful!!!" Maan said as he turned to Yash who also joined the trio
"Oho ma sensitive Pati Parmeshwar!!! Nothing is gonna happen to me or your angel!!! Now can we please sit??? I am tired standing here" Geet said as she moved towards the sofas holding her back taking small steps. She sits down on the sofa while the other three followed her and sat there. After talking in general, Meera said,

"Enough of the gossiping!!! Lets get down to the real business!!!"

"As if this is a ladies function that there would be gossip session!!! Ma dear Saali!!! You are in Maan Singh Khurana's company" Maan said as he took a chocolate out of his pocket and gave it to Geet

"So that's the reason I was feeling as if I was in a business conference!!! No Doubt you were given the best businessman award this year" Meera says as she takes a piece of chocolate from his hand and eats it

"Ma dear Wife!!! I hope you know that your life long war with you Jeej can continue some other time but we have to leave early so please lets come straight to the point!!!" Yash said as always annoyed with Meera-Maan's taunting!!!

"Okay fine!!! Jeej we are here to take Di with us!!!" Meera said seriously,

"WHAT???" Maan and Geet shouted at the same time

"Yes... I am here to take you home with me until ma niece/nephew comes to this world" Meera said,

"Geet kahin nahin jaa rahi!!!" Maan said declaring and gets up,

"As if you are BABA MAAN SINGH KHURANA and everyone will obey you... Di is coming with us and that's final" Meera said getting up and standing in front of him

"But she cant travel in this condition!!!" Maan said almost shouting

"Mr Maan Singh Khurana!!! I have asked the doctor and she says its fine to travel by road if we takes small intervals!!! You cant do anything this time... From the past 6 months you are delaying by your stupid excuses but I am not gonna fall into the trap this time!!!" Meera said approaching Maan and he falls on the sofa behind him and she leans onto him

"Okay fine!!! Main usse kal subha khud le aaon ga" Maan said getting a little scaredr by the junior SHERNI standing in front of him,

"Ahaha!!! As if I am gonna believ that you would do it!!! I clearly remember last time what you did, You said that you would bring her yourself and then the next day you both fled to Switzerland!!!" Meera said

"But we cant flee this time na!!!" Maan said,

"Mujhe nahin pata... Di is coming with US!!!" Meera said

Maan was about to say something when he heard his wife shouting

"Enough of this!!!" Geet shouted throwing angry glares at her sister and husband who were fighting a minute ago stood next to each other in a row with their heads down like nursery kids who were punished by their teacher,

"Fine!!! I am coming with you guys!!!" Maan and Meera both looked at Geet then at each other with Meera giving a victorious smile and Maan disappointed

He wears the tie around his neck quickly as he heard dadi calling him again. He rushed towards the table and took the apple from the basket after wishing his grand mom Good Morning

"Maan!!!" Daadi said as he sat on the chair,

"Ji daadima!!!" Maan said

"I think its time you should go to Geet!!! After all you both should be together at this time" Daadi said and saw her grandson's face which glowed hearing his wife's name but trying hard to be stern

"Jaisa aap theek samjhe daadi ma!!! Main kal chala jaoon ga!!!" Maan said,

"Kal nahin aap aaj hi jaa rahe hain balki abhi jaa rahe hain!!!" Daadi ma said all the time looking at Maan whose happiness now knew no bounds,

"Ji daadi ma... Main abhi apni cheezein pack kar leta hoon!!!" Maan said as he quickly got up from the chair

"Uski zaroorat nahin hai humne aap ka saara samaan pehle hi pack kar diya hai!!! Aap bas jaye aur humaari Bahu Rani aur humaare great grand child ko lekar aayein!!!" Daadi said

Maan quickly came to her and gave a peck on her cheek

"Thanx daadi ma... Bye!!!" Maan said quickly took the keys of his car and went to bring his life back!!!

Geet was standing in the balcony with her hand on her stomach talking to her baby

"Hey darling!!! You know why but I am missing you dada!!! I know I know I always miss him... But today... IIts something different!!! I feel his presence" Geet said getting lost in her thoughts when her phone started ringing

She quickly moved towards her table and answered the phone without even looking at the caller's id

"Maan!!!" She said,

"Maan??? Looks like someone is missing me badly!!!" Maan says as he grins hearing her voice,

"Um!!! Stop teasing me!!! So how was the day???" Geet said,

"Its 9:30 on the morning Jana!!! How can I tell you what happend" Maan said

"Well you woke at 8:00 and its one and a half hour when you woke up... At least you can tell me what happened in this time???" Geet says as she sits on her bed eating her chocolate

"Okay listen!!! I am coming to you and ma angel!!!" Maan says,

"Sachi!!!" Geet says getting up from the bed excited,

"Hmm!!!" Maan says and hungs up the call

Aai Meri Subah Haste Hasate
Boli Aankhen Tere liye Sandesha hai

Geet picks the pillow up from the bed and hugs it tight


Haan hai

She then gets up and stand by the window


Jaagi aankhon ko bhi sapna milega
Koi khushi aane ka bhi andesha hai
Haan hai

She close her eyes as the soft breeze touches her face

Aan haaan
Gulabi si subah

Maan drives thinking of Geet


Aan Haan
Sharabi si hawaa


She feels the strong wind on his face bringing the fragrance of his Geet


Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye

Maan looks to his left side as he feel someone putting her head on his shoulder


Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Its geet and when he was about to touch her, she disappears and Maan just moves his head



Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye

Geet sees Maan and herself hugging each other in front of her


Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye

She then looks towards the bed and sees Maan and Her sitting on the bed with her head on his shoulder and he caressing her hair!!!


Raahein waahein bole baatein rumani
Aao Baitho suno baatein kahani hai
Haan hain

Maan stops the car as he sees Geet in the fields dancing with the mustard plants joining her


Tazzi tazzi lage humko rozana
Teri meri baatein yun to purani hai
Haan hai

She the takes picks a flower from the field and feels its against her beautiful face

Aan haaan
Khayalon se pale


Maan goes to Geet and touches her face


Aan haaan
Yeh zindagi chale

He looks here and there as his IMAGINARY GEET disappears again

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye

He was about to go when he feels her hugging him from behind


Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

He follows her as she leads him to the car and goes again

Bheegi si bhaagi si
MEre bazuo mein samaye

Geet feels Maan hugging her from behind


Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye

He comes in front and both start talking while on the other hand Maan drives as fast as he could and he finally reaches his destination and honks the horn indicating his arrival and Maan comes out of the car rushing towards the door

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi

He opens the doors and see Geet coming out of a room approaching the door and stops as she sees him


Mein pyasi thi nirashi
Tu pani ki surahi

She stand their and tears of happiness flows from her eyes

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi

She takes slow steps and covers the distance between them

Tujhe dekha to khila hoon
Teri chahat mein ghula hoon

Maan sees his wife approaching her and smiles as he sees her looking more beautiful and radiant!!!


Mile Mandir Mein jo
Mein to tujh mein yun mila hoon


Maan hurriedly covers the left steps between them and embrace her in his arms carefully!!!

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi

Geet hugs him more tightly and smiles in her tears


Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi


Maan breaks the hug and both of them get lost in each other's eyes with Geet having a firm around his neck


Aan haaan
Dhundhe na abb koi

Maan wipes Geet's tears


Aan haaan
Mein khoya Tu Khoyi


He kisses her on her forehead


Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye

Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Maan holds her from her shoulder and both of them walk towards the sofas


Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye


Both settle on the sofa snuggling close and feeling each other after a month's interval

"God!!! I Missed you" Maan and Geet both said the same thing at the same time breaking the silence and passed each other a smile, Geet was about to say something when Maan kept his finger on her lips

"Sshh!!! Let me feel you and our angel's presence" Maan says as he keeps his other hand on her stomach.

Maan got out of his thought when he felt a hand on his shoulder and saw his Saali standing with him in the hospital corridor!!! She told him with her eyes to relax and her reassuring hand on his crossed arms told him that everything would be fine!!!

"Congrat Mr. Khurana!!! You are now a proud father to a beautiful princess!!!" Maan and Meera looked at the doctor who came out of the room

"WOW!!! Congrats Jeej" Meera said excted and gave a side hug to the man standing beside her who was lost in the new bundle of joy the news brought with it

After overcoming of the fact that he was a daddy now that too a baby girl for whom he always fought with Geet since the news that she was pregnant that he wanted a doll like her but she wanted a boy – a JUNIOUR MAAN SINGH KHURAANA, He now made his way towards the room where his two precious possessions lied. He entered the room and saw Geet sitting with the support of the bed looking at the cot kept beside her bed admiring THEIR ANGEL. Maan walked up to the cot and looked at the little life lying in the cot. She smiled as he observed that she resembles Geet a lot, but that did not mean that he did not gave her his traits. He noticed and saw that she was frowning which was a typical Maan Singh Khurana trait

"Ahem Ahem" Geet cleared her throat to seek her husband's attention who was adoring their princess. Maan looked at her and passed her a smile. He then carefully picked his girl in his arms and walked to Geet. Handing over their angel in her arms he setteled himself on the bed and hugged her sideways and saying a THANX in her ears, he held her hands which were holding their princess securely and both of them looked at their sleeping beauty with her mother leaning completely on his father's chest, looking like A PERFECT FAMILY INDEED

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey zoya

beautiful OS😃
loved it
thanks for the PM

love
prinz
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Edited by Prinnia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome...so cute ...so much love..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that is sooo sweet!! loved it!!!
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CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.......Loved it zoya dear...... SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTEEEE......ANGEL....WOW...soon to see an cute angel in serial also.... calling maan dada....Awwwwwwwww.............cuteeeeeeee....Wonderful dear....👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG...This is Beautifully Writtenn
sooooo cutee..
and loved the song sequence..
aww ...maan and geet' angel
loved it..so cute!!!:)
Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thata was very Sweet zoya...LOved it...Wish something like this happen in the show tooooo😍
Thanks for the PM///Loved it 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww that was beautiful
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG ZOYA JANNU..THAT WAS ONE OF THE MOST SWEETEST TOUCHY OS EVER READ..

WEN IS THS GNG TO ACTUALLY HAPPEN IN GEET MAAN LIVES!!! CANT WAIT FOR THEM TO BE MARRIED AND LOST IN EACH OTHER..

THEN CARING AND WAITIN FOR THEIR BABIES..OHHHHHHH'


LOVED IT DEAR!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waaaooooo.....tat was a cute update... 😳😳😳😳

loved it.... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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