#Devils Den# Berang EGO ke Rang - Page 72

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ All 😊 Catch u all in a short while...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@promo...maan is a weridoo🤣
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@Karishma...Promo...Maan is THE Stalker😎🤣

btw...helloo🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello ji!!!

Moi will come to spam in about sometime...after din din!!

But moi loves the promo!! That mean stalker Maan is back in fultu action!!😆🤗

Marshu, you better stick around. You to rhea!!😡😆
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Moi is here to stay for a few hours Yash...😎

Dont Worry😆

Hola Soul Sister🤗

Moi is here😎
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Posted: 14 years ago
MSK has changed the dress in promo
means the game is still on.
let's see how long it takes geet to know that Mk is the boss
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Who liked MANISHA???🤣

MOI 😳


Finally we get some Real GAY stuff😆

Moi is bery bery GAY about that 😆😆😆
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Hi Rhea!!!! Babe, Manisha is the best! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Yash: Yesh me will stick around
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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MANISHA ROCKS 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

So Does ROMEO🤣🤣🤣🤣
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My take updated on page 2 😉

MSK ka new discovery - Pride is a cold bedfellow 😛
Don't take it literally 🤣

I absolutely hate your tadap tadap 😡 😡 😡 .....do you want to deafen us or drive us to violence 😒 😔 stop that abomination 😵.....that guy who is singing it should not be anywhere near a mike 😡 😡 😡 ..... W*H is up with those lyrics or lack thereof......Shreya has written some really good lyrics....use those

Now for the eppy.
😡
Both MSK and Geet are hurting now 😭 but once again it has been proved that Geet is the stronger of the two. This girl is a survivor and will rise to any challenge. Munda does not know what he is in for 😈. I say bring it on munda, kudi will hand you your head on a tray 😈.

I am with kudi all the way because munda is just being a UDP MCP 😡 .....he thinks she cannot survive without him......yeah right.....methinks the shoe is on the other foot 😉...... he cannot survive without her. Let us see now
1) He stalks her and hires a detective to follow her and locate her 😲
2) He buys the company that she works for 🤔
3) He wants to be her boss and watch her to see if she can survive without him 🤔

Kudi on the other hand is just happy she has a job and though she misses him she is ready to move on with her life. 😃

OK now who needs the other to survive? Maan may tell himself that Geet needs him but that is not the truth and he will see that for himself.

Kudi is still living (she took the flowers and held on to them). Munda is not living - he refuses the flowers, the coffee and even the curtains

His ego needs to be blown to smithereens and he needs to acknowledge how much he needs her in his life.

The clowns are hilarious and could provide good comedic relief.This track has lots of potential provided you get off the super sonic jet you are on and go at a normal pace. 😆 😆 😆 Else you will crash and burn as before 😡

This is what I want to see

Maan-Geet and the clowns

1) I want her to rise above every challenge Maan sets out for her.
2) I want her to earn the respect of every single one of those guys and the kid. Even Yash should start respecting her and listening to her.
3) I want Geet to succeed but realize that it is useless because she has no one to share it with. 😭
4) I want her to make some friends. She does not have any friends. I would love to have her be friends with all the workers to the point that they invite her to have lunch with them and share their dabba with her. ❤️ Maan eat your heart out 😈 😛 (pun intended)
5) When they come to know of her story and the fact that she is pregnant, she should say that you are all not going to support me anyways, I will leave. 😭. When my family and the man I loved did not support me, why should you support me. But they pleasantly surprise her by apologizing to her and telling her that they will always be there for her and will help her in any way they can. They are extremely courteous to her and do her bidding after that. Everyone brings stuff for her saying my mom says this is good for pregnant women or my mom made this 🤣 🤣 or they prevent her from doing stuff that they think is hazardous to the her health or the baby's. Imagine what this will look like to MSK watching chupke chupke - that the whole lot of them are in love with her. 🤣 🤣 🤣 ........He is gonna be so J 🤣 🤣 🤣
6) I want the new clown who was so happy to see her to hit on Geet. Geet should be clueless and think he just wants to be friends. More jealous MSK 😈

Geet and her baby
I want Geet to stop saying that she is alone. She is not. She has her baby with her. Geet has not talked to her baby in a while. I want Geet to do that while MSK watches while hidden.
She should start saying that the only one whom she can count on to not abandon her is her baby. This will really hit MSK where it hurts. She tells the baby that it is the only one she can trust right now because everyone else she trusted has let her down. She tells the baby that she is waiting for it to come out so that she can be happy again.
Show Geet trying to be happy with her new friends but in private the mask falls off and she cries. MSK must see this. Then Geet must wipe her tears saying she has a responsibility to be happy for the sake of the baby, paste a smile on her face and go on.

Yasheera track
Please give us a Yasheera track 😳 I want Geet to complain to Meera that Yash is working her hard. Yash tries to hit on Meera and Meera tells him that he is a meanie and she does not associate with meanies 😆 😆 😆. This gets too much for Yash and he spills beans to Meera. Ultimately they decide to work together to get Maaneet back together. 👍🏼


Daadima's character
You have successfully destroyed her character. Congratulations. 👏 👏 👏 😡 😡 😡

I want Meera to be the one who shows daadima a mirror. Maybe Meera goes to see her because she was ill and daadi bad mouths Geet. This irritates Meera and tells her that she has lost all respect for her because of her actions. She asks her if only her family's izzat means something and Geet's means nothing. She should ask her how she can support a rapist being a woman. Daadi can retort "what are you talking about?" at which point Meera tells her "Geet is pregnant." Daadi asks "whose is the baby" and Meera explodes. She tells her that Dev admitted to sleeping with Geet and that when Geet's family found out about the baby, they tried to kill her. She tells her exactly what her actions have cost both Geet and Maan. She tells her that she is proud to be Geet's friend and ashamed to know people like them. She tells daadi "your family single-handedly destroyed that poor girl's life. I hope you are proud of yourselves" and leaves in a huff.

When daadima goes to see Geet I want Geet to be very formal with her and address her as Mrs. Savithri Devi. When daadima asks to speak to her she should say "We have nothing to say to each other" and then the pesky kid comes and drags her away to one of the factory workers who has brought some food for her and says "you wanted to eat this so I had my mom make this" or something like that. This will drive home the point that like nothing else that she is out of the charmed circle, especially if she catches Maan watching this from the shadows.

She can then start her walk of penance and attempt to be the second Khurana to attain sainthood after Dev 🤢.

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