#Devil's Den# Geet the Sherni!!! RAWR! - Page 88

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^{Phrase for today, "MOSQUITO REPELLENT" use it and have your team use it too.}

I am glad to hear that GC is out of the hospital and that Drashti is doing better. Today Karishma looked pale or should I say more pale from Friday's episode.

While we don't expect the show to last forever, there is no need to rush the show as if it was traveling at the speed of light. Since this is television there is a lot more control on how things take place unlike real life where there is very minimal to no control.

CVs and Nissar is cooking a stew with too many ingredients and it stinks badly. Too much drama compact in any television series wear tiresome on it's viewers and it makes the story a mess. The bottom line is that the CVs and Nissar did not and still isn't working well under pressure. The viewers/fans are willing to support as they understand the leads of the show are ill and one can only work a few hours while on can't work. But you guys are us running them around and you are not doing your best to move the story a long logically, instead you are throwing things together and showing them and some people can recognize it.

1. CVs and Nissar should not have show MSK entering KC on Friday when they knew he was ill; come on they had to know where they were going to go with the script for Monday, Friday to Monday. When you are writing a script you have to know what your today and tomorrow and next day is. Are you telling me that when GC got ill and was hospitalized, the creatives did not meet and discuss how logically a long with continuation and romance to move the story. Most of you may say yes to logically and continuation, but to romance how? Well we still had Geet; she could have remembered romantic moments of her and MSK. By doing this they came up with the stupid idea of having Maan stuck in the elevator and the elevator falling. Hopefully they would not bring any clich rendition of the "lover in coma, can't remember fiance, ex-girlfriend comes into pic" blah, blah, blah. This nonsense has been shown so many times in both American shows/films and Indian shows/film. They should show Maan as having some minor scares and needs to go to doctor and needing bed rest where Geet can be his at home nurse.

2. Drasthi's dialogue was good.

3. Geet and Maan are soul mate as she could feel his presence at KC; but why did she doubt her intuition?

4. They way Geet handled Sasha, it is about time. Sasha did not expect Geet to say that she was pregnant. But Geet still needs to bring her entire shady character out.

5. While Dev's dialogue was good with NT his expression went back to numb.

6. They way Geet waited at the elevator for MSK, how romantic.

7. Sasha's behavior indicates that she is obsessed with MSK and not in love with him.

8. That Sasha was used as the opener of Geet's secret to the world.

9. That once again the Khurana"s respect is trampled upon.

10. The office is such a horrible location for Geet-Dev confrontation part 2.

11. Does Tasha work for KC or on the street corner? Wardrobe give Tasha some professional clothing please.

12. The entire office scene with Geet-Sasha square off is employee harassment by employee. It was so unprofessional and tasteless.

13. That this point and time Sameera track seems useless.

14. I still stand by that an 18year old rape victim should not have her rapist child. The problem is that the creatives failed to have Geet acknowledged that she was raped. This is rape by law! If you guys have her identify this as what it is, you will be helping all those women who are being conned on a daily basis to identify the crime committed against them and then they can go and file a police report.

15. I also hope you guys are not going for the clich where the boyfriend in this case Maan to say the baby is his, which seems unlikely to happen, but I still had to mention it. Also, don't do the other clich of where the guy marries the girl pregnant with some else's baby and they are ostracized by society; this is also in so many American and Indian shows/films.

PROMO: CVs and Nissar if anything close to or remotely similar to October 12^th promo you will lose TRPs. Geet better not think that her Maan has turned his back on her and that is why he hasn't shown up. The separation of Maan and Geet goes totally against your script in the beginning as their match was show as made in heaven via the taveez over and over again, then we have dadgh, then in today's episode Geet could feel Maan's presence as a true soul mate would. Actually there shouldn't even be a misunderstanding between Geet and Maan about Geet's past and who did it, because not only did she tell him about her past, she also tried telling him who. Plus, he knew she was upset, something was wrong and she was trying to tell him. So now he has to be able to listen and understand her.

We have two weapons:

I think NT's re-entry will be made soon because NT is a missile with four target's programmed:

i. Geet - NT is stabbing away.

ii. Geet and Maan – NT is looking to drive a wedge so wide between them that they'll be in totally different universe. Little does demon girl NT knows that the BIG MSK already knows of Geet's past, just not the culprits names involved.

iii. Geet's baby – either she'll want to harm the baby or take the baby away to have an heir to the Khurana family fortune--- something she' been scheming after a long time now.

iv. Myra – NT is stabbing away.

v. Dev and Myra – NT has already started to drive a wedge here.

Sasha is aimed at destroying:

i. Geet

ii. Geet and Maan

I hope that …

1. When GC and Drashti returns, CVs and Nissar, you guys need to give viewers/fans quality and quantity Manneet time, romance included, but please don't forget logic and continuation too.

2. I hope that Maan finds Geet and not Dev and Myra.

3. I hope that Geet tells Maan the truth about the culprits Dev and his criminal crew.

4. Manneet's engagement takes place soon.

5. CVs and Nissar let Baba Ji help Geet out of her Dharma Sankat.

6. Geet needs to disclose Sasha's shady character. I am not sure but I have a feeling that this may come sooner than later based on Geet bumping into Sasha and the dialogue exchanged between them. I hope so.

7. that Dev share the crimes committed with appropriate percentage allot to each player, which means he takes all blame for raping Geet. Because he did this crime on his own.

My concerns…

1. Mann may misunderstand Geet because when the truth about Dev is brought in front of him, he'll remember Geet had the phone number. He is going to want to know why she lied to him; truth and trust? Grant Geet did it because she wants him to be happy, but is she really making him happy in the long run by keeping secrets?

2. Is Dev scheming and is he using Myra? For now looks like Dev was using Myra.

3. Where does Myra really fit in?

4. Sameera's entry? Play Cupid?

5. Vicky's entry?

6. Dev's Mom and Sister re-entry?

CVs and Nissar, you will be VIRTUALLY DEAD if you…

1. separate Manneet will. TRPs will sink!

2. If you have Geet misunderstand Mann that he was a part of the Dev and criminal crew scam/Dev rape. Mann saved Geet twice putting his own life in danger and that's just two times out of a zillion that he has helped her. It would be really stupid for this to happen.

Originally posted by: liv2laugh

@ Rashmi
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Yash...me is loving the promo very very much....i secretly enjoy all the pain inside of the mushy stuff...hehhehe