IRRESISTIBLES-Mohabbat kay imtihan Part-2 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kashish dear, You have made the post very late that i havent got chance to read....And now have to go to work...Sadly cant commment....Miss reading your posts sweetheart...I hope you will start posting regularly, and i will enjoy reading, and comment.....



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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi kashish..
i read ur post for the first time...n just got addicted to it..
every word of urs made me think of maan's love towards geet...
every bit of ur post was beautiful n well judged...
my most fav part was
about dev :
But would life give him that chance. Some mistakes are not worth forgiveness. Some mistakes can never be vindicated, because they are life-changing and life-chattering... Some mistakes can never be pardoned. Some mistakes hurt us to the core of our hearts and no matter how hard we try, we can never ever forget the pain associated with them. No matter how hard we try, we can't forgive them, we can't forget them, and we can never free ourselves from its repercussions. done and he wants to express regret on it. But would life give him that chance. Some mistakes are not worth forgiveness. Some mistakes can never be vindicated, because they are life-changing and life-chattering... Some mistakes can never be pardoned. Some mistakes hurt us to the core of our hearts and no matter how hard we try, we can never ever forget the pain associated with them. No matter how hard we try, we can't forgive them, we can't forget them, and we can never free ourselves from its repercussions.
i say it again..very bit was awsum...fab...i m in love with maan n geet yet again...
beautiful poetry...
n yes agree with ur thought tht geet should tell truth to maan...as maan love her so much...
as he says in his dialogue" sachayi aur bharosa" thts all wht he feels love is all about...
geet should come up strongly this time too..n maan will understand her...
best regards..
.hoping to read more of ur posts from now on..😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautifuly written....hopeing for the best too :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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So beautiful and heart-touching.. lovely post !
VJ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2 - Todays epi analysis updated friends.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Good job yaar! 👏 👏 👏 Fantastic...thank you for posting this! 😃 I loved reading it 👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: whitepearl

Dear Kashih...You did it again...My diehard Maan fan...Love your post to the core....⭐️

Mohabbat '. itni asaan kab thi '.Har dard say zyada hai '.

And as someone said,

Yeh ishq nahi asaan, mat sehl issay jano

Ek aag ka darya hai, aur doob kay jana hai '

Totally agree with you.

Kaun kambakth kehata hai mohobbat aasaan hoti hai

Is dil se pucho jis pe zakhmon ki barish subah sham hoti hai.

Abhi tu Maan ki mohabbat ko bohat imtihaan dainay hain.

Abhi tu ek zindagi baqi hai '

Your sahyari is infectious K...Main bach nahi paati hoon.

Mohabbat karanewaalon ko dard ki fikr kahaan

kafan band ke nikle hai safar ki fikr kahaan

Maan was happy, Maan was content. He saw Dev coming and he couldn't control his emotions. He told Dev how happy he was and how Geet has changed his life. The happiness on Maan's face was overwhelming. I dread the thought that this happiness was short-lived; that this happiness is only till the time Maan doesn't know the truth; that this happiness is nothing is front of the harsh realities of life.

Very true....the serenity on Maan's face was capturing. How is wish to see this contentment and love on his face all the time. I am sure his heart must be humming this...

Ehessan tera hoga mujh pe dil kehata hai jo kehane de

mujhe tum se mohabbat ho gai hai

mujhe palko ki chao main rehane de.

Maan left Dev .. standing there ' lost and wondering '

How he will hurt his brother by telling him the truth;

How Maan's life would change when he would come to know the truth;

How his mistake would ruin Maan's life.

Dev seems to be repenting, he seems to be feeling sorry for what he has done and he wants to express regret on it. But would life give him that chance. Some mistakes are not worth forgiveness. Some mistakes can never be vindicated, because they are life-changing and life-chattering... Some mistakes can never be pardoned. Some mistakes hurt us to the core of our hearts and no matter how hard we try, we can never ever forget the pain associated with them. No matter how hard we try, we can't forgive them, we can't forget them, and we can never free ourselves from its repercussions.

And that is the kind of mistake Dev has made. No matter how hard he tries, he will never be able to wipe it off. He will never be able to free himself from its burden ' never ever '.

I can't express myself K on this Dev issue....If he is truly repenting I really want this man to be given a chance. Even Ramcharitramans was written by a person who was not worthy to write it..if he can be forgiven...then why not Dev....True some mistakes are difficult to be forgiven...but a sin is a sin whether it is small or big. And a sin can only be forgiven when the sinner truly repent with a contrite heart.

She was playing with her Maan... she was trying to run away from him, with the hope that he would come and get her; and when he would do so, it would be a magical moment, for he would hold her, touch her, caress her, and make her feel loved and wanted ' but on the contrary she bumped into the Maan who had hurt her the most. She saw him and images of her past flashed through her mind. And, filled with hatred and anger; disgust and rage; abhorrence and ire; she slapped him ' hard and tight... telling him, he had hurt her, he had disgraced her, and above all, he had broken her trust ' and she would never be able to forgive him from what he had done to her.

That's the Geet I salute..that is the way every woman should fight. Tell such man that she is not a doormat.

And she ran away from her. And this is what worried me a little. I feel she needs to confront him. But I am also glad that she ran away from him, because I know she needed time to digest his presence on her engagement, and she needed time to react. But now that she has had enough time, I only have one DUA ' Geet tells Maan the truth. No matter how much Maan tells her that he loves Dev and how much Dev matters to him.. I want Geet to tell him the truth. Because this, I believe, is her only chance'. If, by any means, ,Maan gets to know the truth by someone else, that will be a disaster ' that will be something Maan will never be able to forgive Geet for, and why should he? If Geet hides the biggest truth of her's and Maan's life from him than she doesn't deserve Maan's love. If she thinks she would do him a favor by hiding the truth from him than she is sadly and badly mistaken. Nothing can justify this ' she has to tell him, or let alone Maan, I (Kashish) would lose my trust in Geet. I would lose my faith in her honesty. I would lose my confidence in her.

Love is not deceptive...Love is transparent.

Love does not hid things...Love brings out things from hiding.

I think Geet would tell Maan before their engagement as she herself is an honest girl. She has always followed truth in her life like Maan. Abhi Abhi kadwe gooth peene hi padate hai...par is se aane waale bade dard se bach jaate hain.

So she went to Maan and dragged him ' "I want to tell you something ' he let her drag him, because this love, this apnapan, this deewangi, is what Maan had been looking for in Geet for soo long. He just walked with her, matched her pace, let her do what she wanted, till she entered that dark and cozy room with him. And when she did so, Maan's emotions played a trick with his senses again. Unaware of the person in her past, unaware of her fears, unaware of her qualms; he held her shoulders, placing his hands lovingly and protectively around her he made a statement of her life, "bas tumhain dhoondna chor soon, tum khud ba khud bechain ho kay meray paas aa jao gi ..."

I was sooo touched by this statement ' I was sooo touched by his emotions. I was soooo moved by his feelings '.

Aik taraf Maan aur us ka pyar hai

Deeosri taraf Geet aur us ka sach

Aur sach ki taqat jar taqat say zyada hoti hai.

As I said above, she better tell him the truth now; because if she delayed it, she would be inviting disaster.

Very well written....Maan's immense love is beyond comprehension.

And on top of that he told her, Dev is his brother. Wow ' perfectttt ' I understand the dilemma Geet is facing; the uncertainty she is going through; the insecurity and hesitation she is going through, but I also know that no matter how disastrous truth is, it is the only thing which can give you peace and serenity. Truth is the only way out ' truth is the only satisfaction.

Agree. Nothing but truth that too before it too late.

I don't know why, but I have this strange feeling that Geet will not tell Maan the truth about Dev. I have this strange feeling, and so I repeat my words, Maan has overcome every problem for now, but this betrayal, he will never forgive. Maan is a Maan of truth, honor, principles, integrity, values, and truthfulness and if Geet hides that one major truth from him, than what is left in their relationship?

Geet is in shock right now but very soon she will regain her strength and I am very hopeful that she will tell Maan everything.

Maan will be shocked also...He cares for his brother so much....

'gairon ki kya kahe apno ka gum tha, meri kishti wahan doobi jahaan pani bahut kam tha.'

It will be difficult for him to handle this situation..He has been Geet's pillar of strength but this time Geet will support him..remember she put her hand on his shoulder when she said.. "main apna ateet mere aur aapke beech main nahin aane doongi"...

Under no circumstances their engagement should happen under the darkness of deception.



Varsha my darling, thanks a million girl for all your support. You are really a GEM ... 😊

I agree V, dev deserves a chance, but i dont agree that he wants to hide the truth from maan yet again. if he truly needs a chance, than he should go to maan and tell him the truth, instead of asking geet also to hide it from maan. i know he is afraid and worried about maan, but that still isnt reason enough to hide the bigeest truth from maan.

To me, i would give him a chance, if he would go, fell in maan's feet and tells him the truth ... Maan, as we know is a man of reason, he will surely listen and try to find a way. kuch ghussa ho ga shuru mein, but later on, he will come to terms with it ... or even if not, i still want him to go and tell maan everything.

and same goes for geet ... as i said in my todays post, her love demands that. her love should be that reason.

and as u said soo rightly, "Under no circumstances their engagement should happen under the darkness of deception" Perfectly said.

and madam V, wah wah kya shairi ki hai aap nay .... SubhanAllah ....

Kaun kambakth kehata hai mohobbat aasaan hoti hai

Is dil se pucho jis pe zakhmon ki barish subah sham hoti hai.

wah wah wah wah

Mohabbat karanewaalon ko dard ki fikr kahaan

kafan band ke nikle hai safar ki fikr kahaan

Uff, maar dala ... wah wah ....

Ehessan tera hoga mujh pe dil kehata hai jo kehane de

mujhe tum se mohabbat ho gai hai

mujhe palko ki chao main rehane de.

Just love this song from the bottom of my heart ... cant get enough of it ... my hearts sings it for maan every day 😳😊


acha chalo, ab i have to rush. do reply on todays post, i have updated it on the same page.


Love, K


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: LOLAnisha

Good job yaar! 👏 👏 👏 Fantastic...thank you for posting this! 😃 I loved reading it 👍🏼



Thanks Lolz .... 😳😊 i really appreciate it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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eagerly waiting MM 😊😊

I will be replying to your yesterdays post soon ....

Love, K
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

how can you write so sweetly and beautifully. your updates always gives me immense satisfaction ,indepth of the feelings and emotions underlying in geet and maan . after i read your post once i go through the episode , i feel more elated, more satisfied and really makes me feel the emotions what they are undergoing. you are amazing writer, i think if i am not wrong you must be very sensitive,emotional, lovely ,creative persona. keep your update more frequent .plz



Awww dear, my heartfelt gratitude for all your lovely words. You really made me smile. Thankyou soo much for it all.

I am glad my posts gives u a complete aspect of their love and makes u enjoy Maan and geet more. to be frank, thats a true success of my writting, if i can impact the hearts of a few people, its worth all the hardwork.

I had been very busy lately thats why i was not soo regular in updating, but will try to keep it up ... 😊
😳
thanks again, dear ...

love, K

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