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Posted: 14 years ago
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He had reached out to free her dupatta and that is when he had felt it ' her touch on his shoulder. For the first time it had felt different - neither hesitant nor accidental nor worried but, a confidant touch, an almost hug; her acceptance, her trust, her faith in him - evident.

When he had looked back at her, her eyes had spoken to him - letting him in on the secrets of her heart, telling him how much he affected her; but, this time he had felt a need to hear her say it, compelled to know that he had not been wrong in what he read in her eyes. She had then, asserted with her words what her eyes conveyed, words that he had unknowingly waited for- telling him how much he meant to her, that he was above all else for her; affirming it with her touch, making him a promise. Those words had brought with them a joy, a peace and contentment for him; a balm to the hurt he had felt with the realization that she had loved another- a confirmation of her feelings for him, her esteem for him. His heart brimming with love, he had stood there gazing at her to his heart's content - no need to hide his feelings from her, to shield his heart from her.

The trip to Manali had brought something else out in him, made him feel something that he had not known he could - jealous, insanely so; his possessiveness of her manifested manifold.

Their client's overly friendly behaviour with Geet, his effusive praises, had grated on him; his appreciative glances at her open back had made such a streak of a jealousy run through Maan, that uncaring of appearances, he had raced after her to cover her up. When Mr. Rawal had made inquiries about her, he had impatiently tried to hurry her, forcing those bangles on her; only her pained gasp making him realize, what he really had been doing in his haste to get her away. Oblivious to all else, he had stood there caressing her hand, gazing into those eyes that looked at him accusingly but without anger.

Finding Geet surrounded by Mr. Rawal and his family, all approving her as their daughter-in-law; had made him annoyed, brought his possessiveness to the fore. He had forcefully pulled her by his side and proclaimed her as his; this time, not his fake fianc but his real love. She could belong to no one else, love no one else- the love in her eyes, her gentle smile, all belonged to him just as he belonged to her.

He had freed himself from the burden of hiding his feelings; free to claim her as his. His jealousy, his possessiveness, all a part of his love - gloriously encompassing them both; there for all the world to see - she is mine, only mine. His Geet - Maan Ki Geet.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful Kri. Its like every time you look into their hearts and brains and bring us a peek of their thoughts and feelings. Very nicely written dear. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash08

Beautiful Kri. Its like every time you look into their hearts and brains and bring us a peek of their thoughts and feelings. Very nicely written dear. 👏



thanks ash. You came and you took time to write too...thanks a lot dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan's state of mind is aptly described in this song
"Tum mere ho, Bas mere hi mere ho
Tum mere ho, Bas mere hi mere ho
Pooch loo hawao see, surmaiye ghatao see
Barisho ke panni see, poocho nadiya dewaani see Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Tum mere ho, Bas mere hi mere ho
Tum mere ho, Bas mere hi mere ho"

Its a song from the movie betaab.. Pls listen to the song n tell me wat u felt...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful............keep up d good work...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice...ur post makes geet's statement in the next epi that all this is fake even more illogical and inconsistent...
we r constantly blaming the interference by the channel....but i dont see how it is entirely their fault....at this juncture of maneet's relationship there is no excuse for geet's statement....therefore i think the writer and director r themselves confused....just because they want to delay dev track and because they hv lost anymore ideas of romantic scenes...they r putting confusing statemenst in geet's mouth thereby spoiling the character...
i mentioned it before and i do it here again...that if they hv no idea how to show romance...then they better start dev track and progress the story from there on....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing gurl..really so well put into words
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantabulous.....👍🏼⭐️
You are a really gifted writer and you perfectly capture the myriad thoughts and emotions that result in the actions we see onscreen!

bravo!👏

If you have a PM list, please add me to it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sooo beautiful 😛
I hope soon Maan does away with her constant 'fake fiancee' question with an open explanation of the possessiveness and jealousy that she evokes in him!
I hope Geet overcomes her sense of past hurt and insecurity and starts trusting completely in Maan's love for her!
I guess they are both taking time to come to terms with their feelings! Maan is still discovering the myriad of emotions she makes him feel...and Geet still needs reassurance that someone could love her so much!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Once again Gurmaan, you deliver. I haven't watched this episode yet, but your words have woven a vivid landscape and in my mind's eye, I can visualise exactly how it would have happened. Bravo!👏👏

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