OS - Maaneet - After thoughts - Page 4

Originally posted by: LavZ

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you LavZ 😊

Originally posted by: swatichowdhury

@Dolphin: OMG OMG OMG, u made me go blank with ur master piece... OMG am having a very very cheeky smile on my face after reading it... I wish it were longer....Y don u extend it?? Make it into a FF... I would love to read it... U r too good a writter... Have u written OS/FF b4? If so pls PM me the links of them when u r free...Am dying to read wat u have written...
I strongly suggest u put this up on Facebook..The CV's can take ur idea... The lines U gave geet were original n the cliche ILU...This is wat i like bout maneet, they r no way the cliche couple flooded every where else.. They r unique n i love them for that...
'Kuch jhoot nahi nahi ' yeh nazdeekiyaan, yeh ehsaas, aapka pyaar, meri chahat ' sab sach hai. Agar kuch jhoot hai, toh who hai natak ' jo aaj tak hum karte aaye hain. Main aapke bigair nahi jee sakti, lekin mujhe darr lagta hai ' aapko khone ka. Mujhe phir se akele hone ka darr lagta hai, aapse door rehne ka darr.'
Too good yaar.... Awesome... Chumma from me to u baby *be happy n celebrate ok, me only give me chumma's to me hot n yummy n sexy munda*.....

PS: The next time u write an OS pls PM me the link... Geet IF is so fast that i tend to overlook such masterpieces most of the time....

Hey Swati, thanks so much yaar. Extend karne ko mat bolo, I cannot commit to a FF. I've written a few one shots and some other thoughts. You can find the link to all in my signature. Hope you enjoy it as much as others did.

Why don't you do me a favor and post it on FB yourself? I'm not too active on Geet forum on FB. That will be a big help since many who read this want the dialogue to be included. It will be rewarding....

I'm on cloud 9 after getting a chumma from you :-)

Thank you reea and sofiya :-)

Done i posted it on FB giving credit to u... Here is the Link..
http://www.facebook.com/topic.php?topic=1011&uid=109723285713002

Thanks so much buddy!!!!! MUAH

so lovely, finally da word love used!

wow loved it.. so pure & hot.. i want one more...pls hurry..