OS - Maaneet - After thoughts - Page 2

BEAUTIFUL....not the usual type..just wonderful...!!!! 👏👏

Originally posted by: Maneetforever

Amazing!!! LOVED IT!!

Thanks so much 😊

Originally posted by: muniza75

Wow wow Sohniya it's amazing, it's breath taking. When she couldnt breath, i also stopped my breathing...Really such an awesome job, seriously loved it.....

Please please pretty please it's a request of idiot to write 1 more OS for tomorrow...

Luv you.....

Muniza

Moony..........my love...thanks so much yaar....These are my rookie attempts at writing..and I'm glad you guys enjoy it. Ek aur OS toh nahi..but maybe I can put something else together...ONLY for you ...MUAH

Originally posted by: sksg

Bravo!

'Kuch jhoot nahi nahi ' yeh nazdeekiyaan, yeh ehsaas, aapka pyaar, meri chahat ' sab sach hai. Agar kuch jhoot hai, toh who hai natak ' jo aaj tak hum karte aaye hain. Main aapke bigair nahi jee sakti, lekin mujhe darr lagta hai ' aapko khone ka. Mujhe phir se akele hone ka darr lagta hai, aapse door rehne ka darr.'

Best dialog I have read so far. I hope what they show (when they show it_ is atleast half as beautiful as this.

Thanks buddy.....I really feel honored and elated for your comment has made my day :-)

Originally posted by: shalini_s

hope we can see this on screen..

When I wrote it down I had no intentions of seeing this on-screen....but now I do....thanks so much😊

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

nahin yaar....i love maan...but i am too good to take anyone's man...
he is only and only geet's maan!!
But man i wish i was mean....then i wouldn't mind him pinnin me down!!
But my poor heart can't take the fact that someone would snatch away maan from geet!! I hope i don't have to see them separate ever again...i have not healed from the almost separation...another one of those...and dol u will get a call to attend my funeral!

Ok...first off what is this??? What is this that u have written?? It was an atom bomb....thank god i did not read this before a class.....i would have surely fainted!!

This was all in ur mind.....and i am glad that u shared it!! Like i said...u are a brilliant writer.......and this was just amazing!! Geet's words when she confessed......they were written beautifully!!! I might die earlier....because i am friends with such brilliant writers.....u....Niha...and then of course vrush di.....yaar this was simply beautiful.....i know to a u might feel that this was not great....but that is because u know urself well...and u know what u wanted to express.....and so to u this may be eh ok..ok...but to us....well to me it was amazing!!! Honestly yaar....good job

can i forget the rest of the idiots.....they all are brilliant writers as well!!

but look how much i loves ya darling....me came back and wrote another comment....well i knew i had to....the first time i read i didn't have words to express how amazing it was....and so at that moment i wrote down what i felt....and so now i am calm....and came back to give a real comment 😉

I'm really glad you liked it...but trust me, the image in my head is MUCH purer and much better than what I could portray with words. I'm only glad I could give you a glimpse of what I had in mind :-)

Thanks for coming back and writing a comment...means a lot to me 😊

And you know you won't die earlier.....jaane nahi...denge tujhe....:-)

Originally posted by: nanditasingh

Dol - even if they show scraps from this .... it will be worth the wait we suffering this whole weekend
i love it to bits...you better send me a pm whenever you write...thanks to Shivani ..or like always i could have missed it all...or could have been the lateeeeee comer

Was it that good? Wow...I'm honored...well I'll be sure to PM you when I write more...abhi ke liye you can follow the link in my signature...sab ka home wahan hai :-)

Now even I wish they show something like this...lol but I'm sure aisa kuch nahi hoga...

Can't wait for Monday now...really can't.

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

Moony..........my love...thanks so much yaar....These are my rookie attempts at writing..and I'm glad you guys enjoy it. Ek aur OS toh nahi..but maybe I can put something else together...ONLY for you ...MUAH

Originally posted by: elavenil

oye Dol kya kardhiya yar tumne subhe subhe😍it was mind blowing dear.awesome ,fantabulous, and i am running short of words to appreciate ur effort👏 well done and keep going.Geet's dialogues were awesome hope to see this onscreen😃

Hey thanks so much buddy...I appreciate your words 😊

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

BEAUTIFUL....not the usual type..just wonderful...!!!! 👏👏

Thank you very much 😊