OS - Maaneet - Tempted to touch... - Page 5

Originally posted by: --Revv--

👏 Thankooooooooooooooooos Dol- Maza aa gaya!! .... Beautifully and aesthetically written!! And she booked it for next year too 😉😉😉..Naughty Geet 😛😛

Originally posted by: LuvRagvir

thts is sooooooooo wicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#

oh- the intensity is lyk wow!!!!!!!!!!!

i was lyk tht ius wiked- so amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

i luved tha vit were she sed tht she booked tha cabin 4 next year!!!

Originally posted by: shalini_s

wow.. awesome OS..

Originally posted by: -Premeena-

aww.... sweettt... loved it ...=)

Originally posted by: -honeydew-

When i promise something i keep it up ... samjhi tum ???😛😛😛

the change of location from an artificially set up manali was a welcome change, cos it allowed me a scope for imagining the place, the cabin, the window... both of them there, her in shorts and the kurta ...with no ounce of make up and water droplets all over he face, and her pink lips quivering, gave me enough lead to get into the mood of reading what you wrote.. well yes... this background mental prep is very necessary .. atleast for me each time i read something...plus it was you who wrote it .. it had to be good...

the scene was actually believable, and i could visualise the two engaging in intimacy of the sort, her hesitation, holding his finger, shaking her head, something which we have seen before as well...

but the cutest was them falling asleep arm in arm....you know i love these little cute gestures ... and thank you snow man! for giving us the time our dear Maaneet always want but never get with each other ...

like always ... the last line brought a smile on my face ...

p.s: are you related to swati pandey or barry dhillon ? by any chance? how do you always hit the nail on the coffin???

Perfect DD !! and thanks ... it was unbelievably amazing as you promised... graphic details later ..😆 i mean not ever on this forum i mean ...!!!

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA

It was the end that inspired me to write something similar. I received a greeting card for valentine with a similar story...so I'm revealing the secret only to you that the idea is not my original. I hope you won't throw jooti's at me now.

Yes, Maaneet have to forced into being together, warna kuch nahi kar sakte woh buddhu log...hut scene in HP, conference hall and now the abandoned house...

But keeping Maan and Geet in mind, I didn't want anything wrong to happen between them that would creates any confusion or questions or misunderstandings between them.

Did you notice, I let Geet take control of the situation and not Maan. Usually, every one else writes how Maan always takes a step back in such situations....

Originally posted by: smarty2010

gr8 work.luved it