OS - Maaneet - Tempted to touch... - Page 4

Originally posted by: Sananya09

I read this before i actually watched the episode & all i could think was.. "god atleast make this episode close to your oneshot" 😆

Wonderfully written! 👏

Aww thanks girl. I knew the episode won't be anywhere close to being this HOT, so I thought I'd give you guys a treat 😉

Originally posted by: johnangad

amazing

Thank you very much 😊

Originally posted by: thesaint148

good lord Dol ... i have goosebumps reading your beautiful and seductive narration of maneet and the cottage ....

just loved the way u have expressed her emotions ... it was as if i could hear her saanson ki awaaz ... and i could see maan touching her,

Just loved it.

but i am sooo disappointed with geet in todays epi .... i have written in detail in the irresstible post ... hope u get time to read it.

Love, K

I knew the episode won't be that HOT....so I thought..OS mein toh hum kuch bhi daal sakte hain naa :-)
Don't be disappointed....I've been away so haven't really had a chance to comment on your post...will do so now...

BTW I'm glad you liked it...😊

Waaaow! As they royally screwed up the episode today ... this is what today's episode should have been (minus the 1 week cabin lock in) .... just brilliant. You should post this on Starone comment section as they have butchered today's episode ... it was so anticlimactic! Hi5 for your version!

it was awesome ! so hotttt !!! likede it very much and ur a superb writer the language is brilliant .............. keep it up ! :)

ufff---wow dol!!

thts is sooooooooo wicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#

Originally posted by: sumz3

Waaaow! As they royally screwed up the episode today ... this is what today's episode should have been (minus the 1 week cabin lock in) .... just brilliant. You should post this on Starone comment section as they have butchered today's episode ... it was so anticlimactic! Hi5 for your version!

Aww...thanks so much hun. I enjoyed the episode actually....but thanks anyway 😊

Originally posted by: cutie_pie21

it was awesome ! so hotttt !!! likede it very much and ur a superb writer the language is brilliant .............. keep it up ! :)

Thanks so much for the encouragement. If you wish to read more, follow the link in my signature. There is more to read 😊

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

ufff---wow dol!!

i simply adore the way u write--

aik dum professional material!!

ur tempting title tempted me evn more to read this!🤣

buh awesum job yaaar--

loved the last bit....

He asked her 'Were you scared to spend this whole week with me here, locked in this cabin?'. She couldn't help the smile that formed on her lips before replying 'I've already booked the cabin for the next year'

bang on!! now this is how u answer maan singh khurana!

Arre baap re...professionalism se toh main kossoooon door hoon. But thanks so much for the encouragement. I started with the last part and then drafted the story around it...😊