Okay Madam, I just saw your nick as the authour and Im here to read it. Gimme a few minutes to read and then post my comments :)
EDIT:
Heyloo Jaz 🤗
It's not going to be my usual long two cents, but something really short and concise. I just hope it does justice to the brilliant peice that is written by you. So well, here goes nothing.
The Title:
The title is apt. Before reading you dont know what in the story is there that can never be forgiven. Second chances are always there, right? So how big is a mistake ideally to never be forgiven? As you read the story, you realise that even though you have two protagnists, Geet is the person you eventually will empathize with. And in the absolute middle of the story, the title justifies itself automatically. To a mother, nothing means more than her child, nothing at all. And in Geet's case, the feeling is a tad bit more, since she fought everything and everyone just to be able to bear this child. Good thinking behind the title 👍🏼
The Characters:
There is a striking similarity to the characters in the actual serial. The determination of Geet, the turmoil of emotions within Maan, the softness of Pinky, the serious sensitiveness of Adi, the condesending attitude of Sash towards Geet, the feist MSK, and vulnerable 18 year old Geet. The characters were extremely well analysed by you and then put forth in a beautiful manner. Me likes :)
Other Random Things:
Small things like the atmosphere of the office, the way Maan struggles to apologize to her, the way he rushes forgetting everything when he hears about Geet's condition, Geet's outburst in the hospital, the way Geet kept shouting for him.. and the way you made her fall. Brilliant !!
Over all I loved the OS. It had a very Maneet feel to it, and at times I could imagine 'Mahi' playing in the background. I guess, I cant give you a better compliment than that, can I?
Loved it, simply fantastic :)
Much Love 🤗
Edited by Arushi. - 15 years ago
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