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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
when are we gonna have the continuation of OS FAREWELL...i am still waiting..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
wow jaz such a wonerful OS
really heartbreaking
i had tears in my eyes after reading it
superb yaar
really fantastic
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
awesome👏plz add me to ur PM list😊love to read ur next OS 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
It was so sad but so good!! You are amazing writer just though you should know:) Thank you so much for the massage.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Wow...Jaz...this was a painful one...but nonetheless beautiful!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Hey...

Thanks for the PM...

It was very well written but extremely heart wrenching...I seriously hope she doesnt lose the baby in the show...

As usual- Please write more often 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH TWINNIE,
BULLDOZER ALERT!!!.....MAD ALERT!!😡.....u better be running now!! hopepfully, u can sprint!!😆.....as soon as i read the title, i got the no-happy-ending feeling and i was like omgg dawg ur soo gonna get it.....k first about the OS, omgg geet's pain was just heartwrenching😭😭.....i was crying dude while hearing her mourn about her baby😭....and u beaituflly portrayed it....u didn't just tell the pain, u "showed" it....and thats the beauty of your writing because it always makes the reader visualize the scene and i completely forgot i was reading an OS....i felt like i was watching the show so kudos to you for such brilliant writing👏.....thank god this didn't happen in the show and maan got out of his car!!....i truly felt bad for maan and he really should have stopped the car but i guess being blinded by rage does that to you....and u know my most fav line (yes, 'most' fav cuz i lovee all of them😆 ) when geet said how the one who saved her life now took away her everything...sorry, if i wrote this in hindi, i would murder the beautiful line and i don't wanna quote you because it was too amazing to be put into my post😉....but really, that line was just awwwww.....it was soo symbolic and touching!!....and i lovedd maan's "i wanted"... monologue...i felt sorry for both of them cuz one incident took away all their happiness and it sucked because i think none of them were at fault....sometimes, its just destiny!!....wow i m going soo deep, ya something is wrong with me😆
And now, back to 😡😡😡.....really dude? was my last post not enough to scare you?....idk what to do with you twinnie.....u better hope the second part of "farewell" is up soon or else, DUN DUN DUN!!!....and ofcourse, that is all after you have fun with ur di....ya i will be a little lenient on the time issue but only this time!!....remember my pink bulldozer is ready and i can find out where u live by my twin telepathy😆😆....but wonderful OS and even though u made me cry, i guess i can FORGIVE u.....(haha get my joke?)....lovee you!!!❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Jazzzuu I lovvedd it Senti jar Ditta ing t was simbly too good
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
:O
Jaz I loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Gosh that was beautiful and soooo sad 😭 i wish u had given it a happy ending but still it was beautiful

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