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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

wow, nice concept and update.
loved it.
pm me reet after u will update.

hey ...!!!!!!!!big huggg...and welcome
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thank u so much ...wil pm u surely
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: cute-aly

starting reet.



waiting for next

hey aly ....thanx a lotttttttttttttttttt
love u so much
will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Maneetforever

wow!!! Reet very nice!!!

hey darling !!
thank u so very much
will pm u the next link
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: roopareddy

hey reet its very nice
plz pm me

hey roopa ...
welcome dear
thank u so much
love u loads
reet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN

awsum dear... just loved ur story line..
plsssssss pm me...
nd pls update soon............

hey dear ..thank u so very much
added in the list
keep reading
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: rituka7

great
superb
update soon

thanx dear ......
will update soon
plz stay tuned
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abi2010

Nice .............pls continue.....................

hey dear ...thanx ...and added in pm list plz stay tuned
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: sallulover

Thats really nice LIke it

hey dear
thanx a lott ...
added in the list
keep reading
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 2

her head dropped on his shoulder.......

he was about to shout when he noticed she is asleep ......

ohh gosh ...!!! she snores....!!!!...............rolling eyes he pushed her head a little to get rid of her ....

she was not snoring loud actually .....but remembering previous experience with her ......he couldn't be polite with her .....this girl is limit ..!!!!

she nudged a little and snuggled up more with him as he tried to push her away ......clinging more with him ......

he noticed she was still wearing the waist length golden choli blouse .... with scarlet work in it .......long silky soft hair tied in braid ..hands adorned with mehendi to the elbow............ and the denim ........quite trendy outfit .......!! he thought amusedly looking at the innocent face .......................

huh...!!!.....what the hell is wrong with me.....he pushed her again to her seat ...

yummmmm.........she yawned stretching her hands aside.....whose sleep was disturbed by maan's interference .....

maan relieved finally tried to look back in the magazine.....

but geet didn't miss him staring at her ....

oyeee......again you are staring at me......!! she said accusingly ...

suru ho gayi ....he muttered under his breath .....

excuse me ...u were lying on my shoulder so was just pushing u off .....he corrected....

what ....dont give me those shits ...!! she snapped him and picked up the magazine in front of her .....

thank god...!! stopped ...maan decided to avoid conversation with her until he reaches Paris ....

after sometime ......

hey help me.........geet demanded his attention as he was trying to look outside the window.....

in what ....he sensed problem .....!!

uffho .....didnt ask you to jump outta plane .....no need to squint ur eyes......!! she retorted

he looked skeptically .....

when she turned back at him .......pulling her braid in front .....

open it ......!

WHAAAAAT !!!!!!!!!!!!.... maan gasped at that .......she is asking me to unzip her top ....!!! I cant believe how desperate she is !!!....gosh !!!!

Why are you shouting ...!!! don't ...my ear drum will get damaged ...now just open the necklace....

Ohh.....necklace .....!! he exclaimed with a relief..

Hold on ....!!! what did u think before.....she asked turning a little...narrowing her eyes....

Nothing ..... he tried to maintain the expressionless face ....

I don't believe this ....you are so cheap ...!!! ................she shot him a dirty look getting exactly what he thought about ...!!

Ohh cut the crap .....!! that's nothing impossible for a girl like u !!!!.....!! who strips off in front of everyone .....huh ...!!!

Saying this He was about to touch the necklace when she shrugged him off......like he was doing it against her will.........completely forgetting she is the one asked for help .....

U know that is ur problem .......bloody mindset ...!!you pervert .....pigheaded jerk ......just naff off ....!!!! she almost yelled turning into brighter shade of red in anger .....until stopped by maan

Hey don't abuse ...maan warned furiously!!!!

Or else What would u do .....???u bloody moron .....she retorted defiantly ....

Maan didn't believe himself what he did at the next moment ....

He just pulled her back to himself....tucked her to him holding by her tummy ....

And opened her necklace using one hand and his teeth ..... while his warm breath & fingers slightly brushed with her smooth skin Leading her to gasp for air ................................when he enjoyed that completely ..................

He released her in next second ..... throwing her back in her seat .....

How dare you ....!!!!!! groaning she lifted her hand to slap him tight ......as he caught her hand.....

Don't cross ur limit............ u dim-witted girl .......dont mess with me.. !!!!

Her nostrils flared in anger as he shot her back to her seat .......his tight grip of hands told her .....she cant slap him ............but she knew no way to take revenge of his cheesy act ......she fumed in anger ...but didn't dare to do or say a single thing ..........................

The rest of the journey was unusually quiet ...... they didn't exchange a monosyllable with the other until they reached paris

While going out ..............Maan noticed her hugging a guy flung her arms around him ..................................... he guessed him to be her boyfriend ....as she was running away from home.......he watched the guy steered her in his car ....and drove off...

What a desperate woman .......thinking he just shrugged off her memory there in the airport and soon got captivated by his own life.....

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Hey ....i missed you so much .....................she hugged him

Mee too darling ......so how was your journey ...!!!

That reminded her of HIM.....................she clenched her jaws.....

Met a jerk ....!!! she whispered..

Did he do anything nasty ...? adarsh looked at her keenly ....

Not really ........she avoided knowing adarsh very well.....she cursed herself for bringing up the discussion ...

Don't u hide it from me ..okay !! just tell me what did he do...??

Nothing adarsh ...!! he didn't do anything ...except blabbering some fuss ...she stressed..

R u sure ....??

Yes ...very much ...she assured him .........or else why wud I hide anything from u adarsh ...!!!

So tell me....did u bring your certificates along with u ......adarsh changed the topic ...

Certificates..!!!! she exclaimed....!

Yeah ....!! ur graduation certificates ???

No adrash ...!! I cudnt make it in time after this shadi jhamela and all..!!! ....

Ohh jeez !!! that's going to be difficult ..!! adarsh remarked .....

But I have brought the other certificates.....and have told them to dispatch me within 7 days ................

Hmmmm...adarsh was definitely upset ....

Actually he had proposed her name for a vacancy in his office ....that would be needed to increase the visa time period .... but she couldn't make it possible..... and her visa period is really very short .....

She looked ashamed for putting him into trouble because of her .....she tried to change the topic to lighten the heavy air..........u didn't ask me how did I run away from the marriage

That's nothing new honey ....!! I m tired listening the same old story again ........he winked at her ...!!

No re.....this time I made big blunders...lolzz...... have put on complain to police against the grooms family .....u know I have mentioned briz 's deeds too .......!!! aww...i feel pity for tayiji .....but briz is impossible .....hat dhoke piche padh gaya tha mere shadi ke !!! pata nahi kya shauk hai use mujhe tang karne ka...!!!

khud to kuch karta nahi hai ...mujhe bhi kuch nahi karne dega ...!!! she pouted thinking about her gawar illbehaved awara brother ...

Adarsh heard silently ,......means u have left no option of going back.....

When geet gave a cheeky smile to him ...and scrolled at him before clinging to him ......saying l.......i haven't come here for going back honey ...tera picha chodu naa naa naa.....!!!!! she exclaimed dramatically .....while adarsh laughed at her antics....!!!

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Hey MK ......!!! ......a lady clad in navy blue pencil skirt and offwhite blouse greeted him waving her hand from the car ........

He waved back and huffed in the car she was driving .....

Hi shasha...!!! so everything fine.......

Yess boss...!! everything is just perfect ....................except u know KK groups .......doing every possible thing to annoy us ....

Hmmm......maan responsed thoughtfully

It's the rival group of khurana industries.......they gave each other tough competition each time ..they signed a contract .....did every possible thing to buy a contract ........maan avoided open conflict with them.....he can go that down only to compete in business.....he belonged to a royal blood after all.........but he raised this business himself......maan was a self made man ......he had extended the business to Paris and London too.....though the main branch was is in india .....he has to shuffle between London and India ...while business in paris was controlled by sasha ...

Shasha was daughter of munsiji who was like maan's dad in his childhood........in absence of his parents .....he helped khurana family like a strong pillar ......he helped sawtri devi in raising up the little boy ....maan ....

but now a days ......few problems were arising .....at least aadi said so ......he insisted maan to visit paris and check the problems himself.......he didn't explain anything to maan except forcing him to go paris .....

Maan knew aadi from a long time...he was his right hand .......he knew he sensed something wrong ,.....when inspite of his repeated pestering aadi kept his mouth zipped.....he finally understood someone is backfiring ....so aadi wanted himself to find it out ......

Aadi : just go there and check na....if everything is fine ...u will just shop for ur marriage and come back ...simple.....i m sure bhavi is going like it very much .....

Maan snapped him and said....cumon adi ...i know its not the reason u r sending me there ......i know u that well.....now common tell me ....whom do u suspect .....

Aadi smiled and replied.......u are very much intelligent maan ......there is no need to guide u ....go and urself find it ...

Sighing he opened the files sasha brought along with her .......

This is the pre final blueprint of the building of moriams project ...brought to u if u need to change anything ......

Okay .....did you send the quotation to them.....

Actually I don't know .....she frowned ........well roger keeping this section under his control ....

Roger was another dependable person whom maan trusted a lot ....he was half Indian ......he used to run the business in paris along with sasha.....maan didn't understand what made them separately work ......why he was keeping things from sasha .....

He slammed the file on the sofa ....and said ...sasha ...please drive me to the flat ....i wanna take rest ......will go office later...

Maan was actually tired....though he slept a lil ..in the flight ...but that woman kept on disturbing him by humming songs plugging her ipod in ears.......

Gosh ...!! the silly girl ....!! maan gritted his teeth thinking about her .....

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At jay khandelwals office .....

Chief editor : jay khandelwal .......lets see whats going on in the room ...!!! writer peeps in

He was sitting in a big leather chair .......clad in a white 3 piece suit ...adasrh was sitting opposite him ..lowering his head ...

J : So where is she .........

A : she didn't come ....tired by jet lag.................will meet u tomorrow....

J : hmmm.....!!
A : I m sorry J....i couldn't

J : tell me what u can ..............

A : give me one chance ....she loves me a lot ....

J : so ...................???

A : she will do it ......
J : I cant wait...
A : geet hasn't brought her certificates..........but she clicks good photographs ....she had a knack on this from her childhood.....she is pretty good at it .......
J : okay ....bring it on ...!!......she is in ...will help u in clicking snaps....when u will cover the news........
Adarsh grinned wide....thank u sir ...!!!thank u so much
J : I believe in the work done ...not in excuses...sorry and thanq ...how many time I have to remind u that ....

A replied in little low voice..... : I know sir....!!

We will get started from tomorrow....

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The door bell rang irritating her sleep ....

she woke up and headed to the door....looking through the eyehole she found adarsh .................at this time ?? she muttered

hi honey ...!!!

hi adarsh .....kya baat hai iswaqt tum ihaa..?

is it a way to welcome ur love honey !!!

oops I m sorry ...its just that ...leave it ...come in ...!!

so ....what jay said ......she passed him the cup of smoking coffee.....

he was angry ......he muttered sadly ......and that is no good news...

tell me one thing adarsh .....why are u afraid of him so much ..??

ohh honey ....u don't know life outside india is very much difficult ...he exclaimed sadly .....

what happened adarsh .....i sensed something is definitely wrong ....when last time I had called u from india ......but u just avoided saying "u come ....and everything will be fine ..."

yes...definitely .................................adarsh remarked stressfully ....i was waiting for u ...!!! his tone was bit different than usual ....

geet cocked her brows .....what is it aadarsh ....??

adarsh heaved a sigh ........baby .......i m big trouble .....!!!

what wrong ? geet looked concerned immediately .....

jay had taken my passport visa and every documents I had .......if the cops finds it out ....i m running without documents ....i will be behind the bars .......

what ??? unbelievable ........!!! why did u give it ???

I had no choice honey ...i had borrowed a big amount from him ...at the time of mother's illness...........he sadly informed....

And I couldn't manage to pay it back dear ....still trying everyday ,....but cant manage it ....today also jay asked for it........

I m working like a dog ...but jay is not at all happy with me....

Hmmm.........i need to get a job too ...geet said thoughtfully ...

Ohh yeshh...that has been solved ........jay has offered u the job of the photographer under me...

Ohh that's at least a good news......

Geet sat next to him ...and snuggled up ......dont worry honey ....everything will be fine.....

When adarsh rubbed her hand gently ..murmuring "I hope so ..."

But the tension was evident in his face .....

He continued....... jaise hi passport wapas mil jaye ...hum india chale jayenge .......papa bohot bula rahe hai ..............i mom's time I could nt do anything except sending the money ......i couldn't even reach her death bed ....u know .........i don't want that with papa ....i will dead if anything happens to him .....adarsh's voice choked in tear...............

Don't worry adarash .....everything will be fine ...we will do something about it ....and pay back jay .....!! then will go back to india...

He hugged her to control his pain .....

She patted his shoulder to console him ......she knew how much difficult the life is without parents ....though taya ji and tayi ji loved her like their own daughter ...briz often reminded her the absence of her real parents .....

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Edited by maanmeet8 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing and intresting ff....love the fight between maaneet.....thx for long parts

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