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hey folks 😊 ..................big hug for u ...........😳....
~~~~ HE & SHE ~~~~
here i m to post another fic .........based on maan singh khurana and geet handa.......the story has no smililarity with the present track .......except maan is a very rich successful business tycoon .....and almost all(not every) of the qualities matched with original maan singh khurana ....!
but geet is quite different charecter here ....she is not married with dev ....and not preggy .......geet is orphan has been raised by her tayaji and taiji .......briz son of her tayaji ...!
she is little more bold than original geet ...chirpy and impulsive charecter ...more about her will be discovered with time ......for now this is enough ....!! the role is bit more intersting than original geet.....well not that innocent as she is in original geet ...!! will disclose later .................
i m starting the fic ...i mean first part of the fiction .........with just two of them ...................................with time introduce new charecters...with needed description ......as the story will proceed
charecter sketch
maan- gurmeet choudhary
geet - drahsti dhami
maan's dadi sawitry devi -- same person in original play
adarsh- mishal rahija
nisha- ashka goradia
first thing i wanna say ...i will update this fic maximum twice in a week .....so u have to be a lil patient .....after finishing my last fic i will be regular updater again ......
hope to see good response from you .....fingers crossed ........hope u enjoy it
posting the first part of the fic....
please do post ur views....every comment is welcomed..
silent readers it just takes one sec to post at least a word about it it......!
thank you !
love u loads
reet
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part 1- page 1
part 2 - page 5
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...it looks interesting...
looking forward to it....
keep writing....👏👏👏👏
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Originally posted by: ansah

hey...it looks interesting...

looking forward to it....
keep writing....👏👏👏👏
do add me 2 ur pm list

u r already there in ma list dear ..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
thanks for replying first !
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Yaar Im so Happy to see Ur New FF
Thats really Interesting
Pls add me to ur PM List
Eagerly waiting for ur Update
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part 1

He glanced at his tag-heuer wrist watch for the 9th time ..........and impatiently tapped his foot ....

Seems like the flight is going to be delayed .....still no announcement...!!!! he murmured.....

the young man in his mid twenties was sitting at the same place for last n hour ..he didn't care to notice how many girls were sneaking glances at him ....some tried to catch his attention ....but he didn't seem to notice the obvious attempts of the opposite gender ......

That was no fault of those girls ......The person was exceedingly handsome.......he has got a very fair complexion and perfectly complimenting zed dark hair.......his big honey coloured eyes were shimmering intelligence from them ....his stubborn jaw and the little untrimmed stubble was giving him a perfect arrogant look.... making him more attractive ....

He unmindfully straitened of his expensive light gray tuxedo .....and loosened the tie from the collar his black shirt .from his very attire anybody can say ....he is stinky rich ...!!!!

Curling his brows for some fraction of second he got up .............and grabbing his laptop sack he headed to the coffee bar at the side of the airport lounge .....

As he walked to the coffee stand ......his erect posture dripped his poise suave persona ....... his broad shoulders implied dignity and pride ...

.....after grabbing a cup of caf- lungo (Italian roasted beans-without milk) he was walking back to his seat .... looking straight to his destination .........

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She frightfully looked back while rushing through the entrance of the airport lounge ............slightly lifting her heavy lahenga by one hand and another hand grabbing her purse .......

Her light brown emerald eyes looked scared ....little sweat drops forming above her supple rosy pink lips ....expressed her nervousness and exhaustion .......she was walking ahead....while eying behind......

Once satisfying herself......that no one is following her .....she paused for a second to catch her breath ....that she was running out .....

She straitened her scarlet and gold lahenga and heavy worked red dupatta ....for the last time before walking to the air-india counter ..... she sponged her sweat by the back of her palm ...........and again started rushing to her destination ......sneaking glances behind frequently ......

Her attire was bridal..even an idiot can say that after having a single glance at her .........the choodha's bangles....gold danglers necklace and mop chains were no regular dress to roam in Indira Gandhi international airport of delhi .........

She was almost covered by the jewelry from head to foot .........her long plait was striking her butt with every hurried steps of hers........the kundan maantika adorning the perfect milky white skin was striking on her forehead with each step.........she was looking extremely gorgeous .....even in her scared trembling footsteps.....

As she figured out the counter ....she marched hurriedly ...without looking sideways......

And then........................................................

Baaaaaaaaaangggggg!!!!!!

The most awaited incident took place ..................ahem......unwanted actually !!!!!!!!!

He felt the burning hot coffee spilled on his chest .......................

Arrrrrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......!!!!he groaned........

Ouchh!!!! She moaned rubbing her temple ....closing her eyes in pain and anticipation of touching hard floor as she was falling into the ground ..........

But she didn't reach the floor......rather she discovered herself hanging in the air ......as a strong arm held her waist ...........

The whole cup of coffee was spilled on his suit as she collided with his robust chest .......totally spoiling his dress..before he could understand ....he was her falling down .....and grabbed her waist to stop her colliding with the hard floor beneath ........

Dekhke nahi chal sakti .......!! he growled at her ......aankhein hai na ...????

She opened her long thick battling eyelashes to look up to the person growling at her ......... and found a pair of ocean deep brown eyes staring at her ......................her heart thumped loud embarrassing her as her eyes fell upon the striking handsome face looking keenly at her .......

He was dumfounded as she slowly opened her light brown butterfly eyes widened in fear ......she was looking so vulnerable......kissable full lips parted a little in anticipation of falling ......... the gold n garnet maangtika was adorning her milky white complexion .........few strings was falling on her cheek .......disturbing her eyes...to open......how innocent the face is......

He lost his voice for next some seconds.......... until .......she wriggled in his arm to get free...........

He released his breath ........not realizing he was holding in actually for a long time ............

Dekhke nahi chal sakti .......he groaned again .........as if to hide the tinge of emotions that quickly ran across his mind......

Ankhein to aapko bhi diye hain na babaji ne....she scowled ....voice contradicting the innocence of her face....

Dekho .....fault tumhara hai ....chalte waqt age dekhna chahiye ....na ki piche........bhag to aise rahi the piche gunde pare hai .......

gunda hi to hai mera bhai ........ She murmured..in a inaudible voice...

Kya kahaa.......???? he suspected she is abusing him under her breath ..

They kept on arguing still in the same position ...he leaning on her ....and she hanging from his arm ..held by her waist .....

Yehi ......ke agar aapke yeh batate bare jaise aankhein kaam ke hote ...to aap mere raste me nahi aateee......

Kyaa kahaa.........he groaned again .....

Haan ...shakal se to bhale ghar ke lagte hai .....aur niyat ....chiii...chii......she winced her face in mock shame ....ladki dekhi nahi upar gir gaye....

Kyaa kahhha.......????

Lagta hai aapka record wohi pe atak gaya hai ... khair ...jabtak aap apna recorder thik kare ...tabtak mujhe chodhenege plz......!!!! she curled her lips in sarcasm....

Realizing what he is doing he released her at that instant ........so agitated by her words ... didn't care to steady her on her feet .....

Causing her to fall miserably on the ground .......

Aaaahhhhh....!!! she winced in pain ....

Lafange ..gadhe .....khote de puttar .......haye.....!! phatte muh ....!! bhagwan kabhi bhali nahi karenge ................................while rubbing her butt she kept abusing the trailing figure in front of her .....

While he walked ahead with a smug smile on his face.........

He didn't even look back to her on her wretched condition .....

And suddenly there was announcement of his flight ....so snapping her out of mind .....he rushed to the conveyor for dispatching his luggage.....

After boarding in the flight .......he slouched on his seat beside the window.......and suddenly his eyes fall upon his suit .......that was grinning to him with the proof of his collision with the running disaster .....

He gritted his teeth........at the memory of the incident .....and the irritating girl he had ever met .....nobody ever dared to say these kinda words on the face of MAAN SINGH KHURANA ........

He took off his coat and picked a magazine to divert himself from the odd incident ...............................and the talking machine he met few minutes ago ......praying he doesn't meet her again in rest of his life....

But little did he know .......he has to bear the most beautiful "disaster" for the rest of his life........he had no idea .....that how their lives are going to entangled with each other .......and one day in his life ....he is going to pray helplessly...craving for one single sight of hers.... sitting in the same place ...same flight ...same seat .....

Bhagwan please... bas ek bar milado usse .................!!!!!

Soon to his utter dismay somebody disturbed his concentration ....as he found someone slumping in the seat next ..

And sighed........finally babaji ..!!! tuci great ho .......thank u thank u thank u .....mmmmwaaah ....!! a feminine voice said in a single breath ......ending with a flying kiss ..............probably to her babaji ....!!

He sighed thinking he has to tolerate another woman (dramatic )next to his seat for the rest of the long journey..... .......he didn't remove the magazine from his face to check on her ........he was not keen to make any kinda conversation with his co-passenger for the rest of the time in this flight ....delhi to paris ...!!

He always hated socialization ........he just loved his privacy beyond limit .....enjoyed his lone solitary world......

Yesh.....he had rarely spoke to anyone anything other than business .....except his grand-mother ..he loved raising a unbreakable wall around himself.....and loved living a secluded lone life .....that he enjoyed his fullest...at least he thought so ......

Sighing he absorbed into the magazine .......

Suddenly ....the magazine punched his upright nose......causing him to wince reflexly in pain ......

She had hit her nose by her elbow in the process of detaching the dupatta off her head ....

A feminine voice spoke out .....sorry .sorry sorry sorry ...........extremely sorry .......i was just ......i m really sor.........................!!!!!!

As he took off the magazine from his face ....the voice stopped abruptly .....

He was still rubbing his nose closing his eyes.....as the flow of sorry stopped abruptly ...rather awkwardly ....he opened his eyes to look at the voice...........

And his eyes widened in shock .......................................ohh nooooo!!!not again ....!!!!

Tummmmm......!!!!

Aaappppp...............!!! arrrrrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhh...!! she gritted her teeth .....

What the hell you are doing here .......?? she scowled ...

Oyee hello ....this is my seat .......goccha ....by the way why are you pushing yourself on me...........maan growled at her ....

Oye khotte ....mai nahi .....aap piche pade ho mere ....!!!

Acchhha....!! isilie ....to yeh paris ke flight tak mere piche piche aagayi ....besharam ladki .....!!

She opened her mouth amazed by the audacity of the smug in front of her ......!!!she felt like strangling him and putting some real sense in him ........but controlled as he picked up the magazine again ...

She knocked at his shoulder and said in icy tone....

GEET HANDA kabhi kiskika picha nahi karti hai ....samjjhe aap ...!!!!!!

Ohh rehne do ....!!! he snapped her out ......mujhe sab pata hai ....!!!

She narrowed her eyes.....to the MR....know_it_all...!!!

Aapko chodh kaise dia....??she exclaimed.....

Kyaa.....kisne ....??? he retorted confused at the sudden change of the track ...!!!

Pagal-khane ke chowkidaron e..... she answered in a nonchalant voice....

Dekhooooooooooooo.......tum mujhe gussa mat dilao ....clenching his jaws he pointed his finger out at her.......but couldn't speak more as his eyes fell upon her

Without paying attention she continued her job ......in process of which she had hit his nose......

He watched bewildered as she took off the dupatta of her head ....and folded it neatly ............after that started taking of the jewelry's one by one from her ......

He watched bemusedly as she continued her work absorbed in herself.....how innocent she looked when she checked her bangles before taking them off.......

He gawked silently ....as she took off the maangtika from her forehead .......he was mused at her face ....as she tilted her head a little in the process of taking off the dangler from her ears........

he didn't realize he was actually staring at a stranger girl ....that was very much unusual of him............................

But his amusement soon changed to shock ......well u can call it "panic" ..............................................as she started unzipping her lahenga .... his eyes widened in shock as he got she was actually stripping off her cloth .....

He gasped ..............!!!!!!!

Hey ......wait ......what are you doing ,.......!! hey .....are you out of your mind ...????? hey don't start stripping here .......

He grasped her hands to refrain her .....

Whats your bloody problem mister !!!!! ...? she was about to burst in anger as he again touched her ........

Pehle hat chodiye mera.......

He didn't pay attention to her and continued.......

Suno......u cant do this.........

I m actually doing ....................!!!! retorting she released her hand by one jerk and continued her work .......

Failing miserably in refraining her from undressing herself he covered his face with the magazine.......desperately asking help from god.....he was sure of the fact ....that she is mad.......he had nothing else to do except praying hard for an angel to help him ...he pressed the button to call the hostess.....

Excuse me sir..........an almost mechanical voice of the hostess drew his attention ...

Ohh ...please save me from this psycho girl ........

he didn't take off the magazine from his face while placing his helpless request to the airhostess ......

and suddenly the cover from his face was snatched ......and some one grabbed his collar .....

exactly whom did you call "mad " ????????

he replied keeping his eyes shut tightly ......tumhe ....aur kisko ...jante bhi ho kya kar rahi ho......

accha kya kar rahi hu.......she retorted in no nonsense tone.....

u r striping ....do you realize that ....

I do ....now open ur eyes......she demanded.......

No......his quick reply came.....

I said open your eyes.........she shook him hard clutching his collar .......

Irritated he snapped her hands and opened her eyes........muttering ....besharam to bohot dekhe hai ,....par tum jaisi besharam ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekha ,....he kept his gaze fixed in her eyes.....strictly avoiding to look down ...and discover the girl half naked..... he had no doubt on her lunacy ....

She thumped the lahenga on his lap and asked in same sarcastic tone .......acchhaaa?????jara bataiye kya besharami ki maine....

Yeeh ..... without looking he pointed at the lahenga on his lap.....

She narrowed her eyes and chuckled..................maine aaj tak aap jaisa namuna nahi dekha..........!!!

Did she just call me "namuna..!!"....how dare she ...!!!! he thought

Saying she turned around leaving her .............facing the confused airhostess who was thinking who is actually mad......she said

Thank you so much for coming ....get me a coke please....

Recovering from the chain of shocks she was giving .......he shouted ......Hello excuse me...but the hostess was gone already ...he wondered why didn't she tell anything to her .....

Oye dekho ......maan hissed.......

She looked back gazing intently in his eyes........and closing the distance between them....that shut him instantly .......embarrassed by the awkward proximity .....

She whispered,..........................dekha .....!!!!!!

He gazed her brunet emerald eyes loosing himself for some fraction of seconds.......

And gained it back as she cocked her brow ....

Dekho......... kapde pehno ........!!! he finally found his tongue ....

yeh gol gol aankehin na ......she almost poked her finger in his eyes and said.................bhagwan ne mujhe ghoorne ke lie nahi .....dekhne ke lie diye hai .....maine kapde pahen rakkhe hai .....she hissed back

embarrassed confused and shocked he looked down and found.......... the denim hugged around her curvaceous body .......

parr abhi to tumne.........yeh......he mumbled confusedly .....pointing at the lahenga .........

haan ....kiunki maine niche jeans pehne rakkhi thi .....har bat puri jane bagair logon ka insult karna aap jaise bigre dimag raison ka shauk hai .......she munched the words at him .......

he finally realized what was the matter ....she was wearing the lahenga on the jeans ....so while she stripped it off .....it didn't reveal anything ....as she was in the denim already .....and that's why the hostess was cool too......

but u could use the washroom ........he finally got back his voice .....

no I couldn't .....as the public washrooms are dirty and ..m much comfortable here .......it took just 10 seconds to get rid of that ......she countered ....

he cleared throat ......realizing his foolish act .......and thumped the lahenga on her ...saying apne yeh gande chheezein apne paas rakho ....

meri lahenga to fir bhi saaf hai .....jara apne coat dekhie.....she pointed at the coat ruffled in the hand rest

shut up ....!! yeh sab tumhari bajase hua hai .....he groaned ...!!!

acchha....maine kaha mere gale lagne ke lie......!! she taunted back ...

to kya maine kaha tha mujhse takrane ke lie .......nahi ,.!!!!!!.....tum jaisi ladkiyan to mauka dhundhti rehti ho...................gale padhne ka ......he replied with same sarcasm in his voice.......

arrrgghhhhhhhhhh.....she groaned.....

dekhiye maine jaan bujhke aapse takraya nahi tha......woh mai thoda pareshan thi ...islie....

haan dikh raha tha .....kahin chori karke bhag rahi thi shayed.......

jee nahi....................khud ki shadi se bhag rahi thi ........she replied nonchalantly ........

stunned he gaped at the sample sitting beside him struggling with the necklace in her neck ........

so u were running away from your own wedding ....he repeated her words...trying to get the meaning ......still gaping her with the disbelieving look hanging on his face ...................

I think I had said that only .....ohhh .............i knew u r blind.....but now got that u r deaf too......she retorted sarcastically ....

He didn't pay attention to his wonderful compliments and asked......so that's why you were wearing jeans under your wedding dress...!!!!

So intelligent ........!!!!............... she scoffed .....

Waise ....this is the 3rd time ....i managed to run away ......this time decided to leave the country before they get me.........

He stared at her with jaw opened to his knees.....

Close ur mouth .....u look odd .........she exclaimed.....

Coming out of the trance he shrugged ...failed to determine the level of insanity of the piece sitting beside him .......

I don't believe this ...he murmured...........!!

he picked up the magazine again to distract himself from the ultimate piece he had ever met........

but his meditation didn't stay long ....as............................................

Edited by maanmeet8 - 14 years ago
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thanx sireesha ....!! love u gal......
@all.......waiting for ur responses.............................!!!!!!!!!!!
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maneet met first time at indira gandhi airport delhi ....after that they kept on bumping .....they thought this is intentionally by the other..>>> coincidentally >>> accidentally >>> but may be not .......
everything happened in their life was perfectly planned .....................
even the ticket of the flights .......
geet had a rocking lovelife with adarsh ....she was going to meet him at paris ..after meeting him she started working with him there....adarsh was a perfect boyfriend every girl wants .....but very much conservative ..!! and possesive about geet ......though she didnt mind at all......she loved him very much .....somuch she cud do anything for adarsh ......
geet was very much ambitious as well....she had big dreams in her eyes...
maan was going to attend business as well do shopping for his marriage held in the next month ....he was going to marry nisha ..more of him will be revealed slowly ...
maan and geet both hated each other more than anything ......geet hated him so much that she could poison him .........in this process ...maan landed up with the biggest scandal of his life....and their life changed .....forever.....................THAT WAS THE TURNING POINT ....
Edited by maanmeet8 - 14 years ago
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wow...............reet.....................plz send me pms...................really nice ff
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Originally posted by: maanmeet8

maneet met first time at indira gandhi airport delhi ....after that they kept on bumping .....they thought this is intentionally by the other..>>> coincidentally >>> accidentally >>> but may be not .......

everything happened in their life was perfectly planned .....................

even the ticket of the flights .......


geet had a rocking lovelife with adarsh ....she was going to meet him at paris ..after meeting him she started working with him there....adarsh was a perfect boyfriend every girl wants .....but very much conservative ..!! and possesive about geet ......though she didnt mind at all......she loved him very much .....somuch she cud do anything for adarsh ......

geet was very much ambitious as well....she had big dreams in her eyes...


maan was going to attend business as well do shopping for his marriage heldin the next month ....he was going to marry nisha ..more of him will be revealed slowly ...

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maan and geet both hated each other more than anything ......geet hated him so much that she could poison him .........in this process ...maan landed up with the biggest scandal of his life....and their life changed .....forever.....................THAT WAS THE TURNING POINT ....



btw when is the scandaal revealing????r u updating ur other ff Bin Tere 2oo???
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it....very beautiful

totally rocking......

maan and geet keep bumping to one another
destiny so want them 2 be together....
the fighting and bickering...so adorable
loved it....really nice
keep writing.....👏👏👏👏
and this lines are so touching

But little did he know .......he has to bear the most beautiful "disaster" for the rest of his life........he had no idea .....that how their lives are going to entangled with each other .......and one day in his life ....he is going to pray helplessly...craving for one single sight of hers.... sitting in the same place ...same flight ...same seat .....

Bhagwan please... bas ek bar milado usse .................!!!!!

man.....our munda will be saying this words....he sure will love geet....like hell......so well written line.....gurl u rock....love u🤗

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