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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: 49erFan

@ Doodle is just me or did GC just look like he was totally out of the romantic scene, especially at the time when he wanted Geet to confess! He didnt look like he was in a romantic mood! I'm wondering who spoiled it for him! 😡 That's my biggest complain for today and then why the hell they showing Dev's tummy, man when that scene came up I got scared! 😡



he was there fully...why you feel that???
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
So...I just recently started following Geet and finally managed to catch up with history. This was to have been that EPIC episode! Unfortunately, even if I am in a minority, I was not happy with it. It seems like CVS throws in the requisite romantic scenes to make up for a not well-made and short-on-flaws episode.

Lets start with the whole re-marriage sequence. It was to be a Demello-Rose wedding but the PDA and stares from Maan-Geet were just absolutely OTT. Given how professional Maan's charater is supposed to be, it just did not suit his characterization to be so moony-eyed at his client's wedding. We get it...they are in love...but there are so many nicer ways to show that without making the leads appear like caricatures of themselves. What's that for...TRPs. If the writers are true to the story and the characters, the TRPs will speak for themselves.

Moving on to the Dev sequence...that seemed like it was just there to add an element of thrill on whether he will get to Maan before Geet or not...so NOT needed. Dadi told him Maan was at a client's wedding. Knwoing how hot-headed and work-crazy his "bro" is, what does Dev do...take off to confront him at a CLIENT's wedding! Agggghhhhh!!!! I will be able to swallow the sequence if, next week, they show he entered a different place and not the wedding venue.

Finally, the much awaited 3DD secene... Dramatic Declaration (DD) scene between Dusht Danav and his Dil ki Dhadkan...it was as expected. The romance between these guys has become so predictably displayed. Yeah all our romantic little hearts loved it...of course we would...that is exactly CVS is playing to....I admit, I am a sucker for it too! I expected more. Maan's expression did not show the dynamism I was hoping for when he heard Geet say she was pregnant. Disappointed. But it takes the story forward so that is a good thing.

Lastly, I am not happy about the angry young man showing up again as per the new promo. After all that Geet & Maan have been through, esp the last sequence in HSP, I expected Maan to be shocked but if CVS is true to their storyline and character, he should come back to confront Geet and ask her for the WHOLE story. The anger should be about Geet not having TRUSTED him earlier to share her pain...NOT about feeling cheated or betrayed because she did not reveal it.

Phew...


Edited by darlunia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: an12345678


Just wanted to state this and bookmark.


Most of the hardcore news follows the
inverted pyramid model: Stating the important first – which is more relevant in the
present -- and then the details and past follows. I liked that the dialogue
writer wrote "I am pregnant" and nothing else because that is what defines Geet
at the moment and is important to her. The details will follow soon when the
man is ready to listen again. It was darn neat.





I disagree Ann!
No truth is absolute in itself.
A Truth ONLY holds itself in context.
Take it & put it another context & the truth is Meaningless!!!
I am Pregnant DOES not define geet's absolute truth...
Infact it's ONLY a very speck in the big picture.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: an12345678

Just wanted to state this and bookmark.

Most of the hardcore news follows the inverted pyramid model: Stating the important first ' which is more relevant in the present -- and then the details and past follows. I liked that the dialogue writer wrote "I am pregnant" and nothing else because that is what defines Geet at the moment and is important to her. The details will follow soon when the man is ready to listen again. It was darn neat.

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I was writing the same thing..now I don't need to write😳
All I can tell everyone is An is 100% right..details will follow..the main issue is out..so chill marofy😃
About the promo ..listen to the dialogues and see why Maan is mad and breaking Geet's reflection..not becasue of her pregnency but because of the fact that she din't share this truth earlier with him😳
Now one worry..which I got from my birdie...this Abhinav is giving tough time to the CVs...and we can see the result today...he wants to compete with Guru I guess🤢,...Either CVs will turn him into a sadhu or willl make him a devil later...now its our responsibility wihch path we show to the CVs😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
is it just me or someone else also found that changing the background music from pee loon to MAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII was too sudden...I was like pleaase noooooooooooooo............then when pee loon again started it was also a bit sudden
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
@An....agree with you. In the process of revelation Geet's first step was to tell him that she is pregnant. The rest will follow later. Also it creates more of an impact for us as viewers too....😆


@Vini......seriously what was the stud biker look.....🤔..that entire sequence was so unnecessary...👎🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
jyots saw d new promo....lk u hd said d mirror scene shown in SBS jhula wala segment.....
n guyz hdnt maan said durin d dhaba seq...dt he doesnt lk kids.....bt 2day he ws playin wid dem hvin gud time......
is dis a change in him aftr he realized his love....
woh bolte hai na pyar insaan ko aur bhi pyaara bana deti hai...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Did I say I was leaving?? I forget!! 😆

I am out for the weekend unless my blackberry actually allows me internet access!!

Bye everyone!! Happy discussing!! 🤗 Have a pleasant weekend!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
@Beagleboy - do we know each other? from IF? did u chill in KMH Forum awhile bak?
@All
DRAMA DRAMA TRUAMA N DRAMA😎 So, they had to go with the fundamental truth of "I am pregnant"
It was foremost wat was in her heart. What wud create most Dramatic Impact. Leaving Maan and viewers stunned.
It wud give room for him to exit and process... remember we don't want Saint Maan... we want real
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
@ Tannu, I got scared from that angle! Oh man and I thought he had boxers on, dammit I was looking for the brand too! 😆

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