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uzmam1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Khushi,

Wonderful,wonderful updte.. so sweet and gentle ..

imagine it an an epsiode .. it would easily reduce the viewer to tears ..

this is as emotional and beautiful as Maaneet could get!!

great stuff!!

Uzma xx

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

nice, lovely os. beautiful.
loved it.

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Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Fate, I said, that some relationships are like gravity, like the moon and the night, this gravitation between us never stops, forever pulling us close, but though I wish this gravitation never stops, I want us to become so close that no one can differentiate where one begins and the other ends, forever together Maan and Geet.

These lines......amazingly written!!

Wow! That was a fabulous OS! That was so poignant.....their dilemma, their confusion.....everything was portrayed so nicely! Loved the way it ended.....just awesome!

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whimsical

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

*gasps*

This was extremely beautiful!!

Excellent choice of song, and such an amazing depiction of the Maan's feelings, in all their complexity!

Very, very well-done indeed!

My heart kind of stopped when I saw the cliff-hanger end.. Is thus where she tells her she's pregnant? Omg .. *bites nails* .. but wait.. it's a one-shot! Nooooooo! lol.

I really loved this! I was completely engrossed in every word.

Awesome work!!