OS - LOVE AND PREGNANCY part 2- updtd pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Zamee.. Really nicely written, loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy peeplies.. this is the second part of the OS...😊

HAPPY READING...!! 😛
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As she headed to the kitchen, he made a mental note about the hand-holding in bed thing.

Two evenings later, while lying in bed, she reached for his hand again, and maan spun towards her so fast, the sheets got tangled as he tried to kiss her.

' yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?', she said pulling back

'geet, tum mera haath pakar rahi ho' he said

'to?'

'to..um'to.. jab tumne mera haath pichli baar pakra to tum..aa'to tumhe pyar karna tha' he finshed somewhat awkwardly.

'tab maine apka haath pakra tha lakin mein kuch thumb ke ishare bhi to kar rahi thi', aur abhi maine kuch ishara nahi kiya,' she said

Maan tried his best to absorb that. 'to tum pyar karne ke mood me nahin ho?'

' mein' mera mann nahi hai, aagar main sojau so aapko bura nahi lage ga na?

He tried his best to avoid a sigh. ' nahi geet, thik hai'

'kya hum cuddle kar sak te hai?

He paused before answering, 'kyun nahi?'

It wasn't until the following morning that everything finally became clear.

He woke to find her sitting on the couch- or rather looking as if trying to lie down and sit at exactly the same time- with her pajama top pulled up to her breasts. The lamp shade was angled, casting light on her belly.

'geet, yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?' he asked stretching his hands over his head.

'yahan aaiye', she said 'mere paas bathiye'

Maan took his place beside her on the couch as she pointed to her stomach

'dekhiye to' she said ' hiliye ga mat, warna aap nahi dekh paayenge'

Maan did as he was told, and all of a sudden a small spot on her belly seemed to bulge involuntarily. It happened so quickly, however he wasn't sure what it was.

'dekha?' she exclaimed.

' mujhe lagta hai maine kuch dekha, yeh kya tha geet?'

' yehi to baby tha'. Who laat mar raha hai. Pichle kahin dino se, maine mehsoos kiya ke wo karwate le raha tha, lakin aaj subhe mera shak pehli baar yakin main badal gaya'

The spot bulged again.

'wo dekho, maine dekha' maan exclaimed ' who humara bacha hai?'

Geet nodded, her expression rapt. ' wo aaj subhe se jag raha hai, lakin mujhe aapko neend se jagana nahi tha, isiliye mein yahan aagaye taki mein achi tarha se dekh saku. Kitna acha ehsaas hai! Haina?

'amazing' maan said continuing to watch for it.

'dijiye, mujhe apna haath dijiye' she said

When maan reached out, she took it and placed it on her belly. A few seconds later he felt it bulge and he grinned.

'kya tumhe dard ho raha hai?

'nahi' she said 'halka sa pressure jaisa ehsaas ho raha hai, yeh baton se explain kar na mushkil hai, lakin yeh ek ajeeb sa khushi sa ehsaas hai.'

In the soft yellow glow of the lamp, maan thought she was beautiful. When she looked up at him, her eyes were shining. ' kya yeh sab kuch magical nahi hai?

' yeh sub kuch magical hai'

She put her hand over his. ' mujhe maaf kardijiye, hamne pichle kahin dino se pyar nahi kiya, lakin mujhe kahin dino se ultiya karne ke jaise mehsoos hota hai. Me pehle heran hogayi kyunki mujhe yeh pehle kabhi nahi hua, lekin mujhe pet mein ajeeb sa mehsoos hota tha isiliye, main dargayi thi, ke agar humne pyar kiya to kahin.. lakin ab mujhe pata chalgaya.

'nahi geet, thik hai' he said. ' maine kuch notice bhi nahi kiya'

' haan, haan, mujhe pata chal jata hai jab aap udaas hote hai'

' tum jaanti thi?'

She nodded ' aap karwate badal te rehte hain. Aur kabhi kabhi lambi si aahen bhi lete hai. Bohot achi tarha se thodi der mein pata chal jata hai. Lakin ab mujhe acha lag raha hai.

'acha?'

' infact, mujhe hamare honeymoon ke din yaad aa rahe hain.'

'acha?' he asked a smile erupting on his face.

She nodded again, her expression seductive.

GUYS THANKYOU SO MUCH FOR ALL THE COMMENTS... M GLAD U GUYS ARE LIKING MY OS.. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

THANX DARLINGS..!!😛
love,
Zamee<3
Edited by -Premeena- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
Awesome update!!!
Are you gonna add more parts???
Please do continue!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
thanx guys.... m glad you liked it..!!=)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
hey...
just read both updates....
it's awesome.... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dat was gr8... plz add more partss... or make a new os, bt just dont stop, it was amazinggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanx guys... m soo glad you liked it...!!!
m working on another one but totally diff from this one... hope you like that too.. will post it as soon as m done...=)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Very Sweet
Loved Maan's reaction when he said Amazing
Thats Lovely
Thanq so much for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanx so much guys m so glad u liked it ..!=)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
awesome yaar soooooooo emotionaly sweet👏do continue👍🏼and don't forget to PM me😊

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