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Posted: 14 years ago
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NJ,

You are BRILLIANT!👏 I loved your writing style and everything! The story is super cute! All I'm singing is "Baby, I'm addicted"😳

Reference to Jane Austen....icing on the cake! She is one of my favorite writers! I still can't get over P&P ☺️ And Emma 😆

Please continue writing OS! Loving it!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
beautifooooooooooooool.......
love it..
and thx for the pm..
hope you write some more about maneet... you write so well...

emma
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: shockalot

That was SO SO SO CUTE!
Totally my type of story - haha and the reference to Jane Austen, MaanEet and Abhay Deol...i hear ya sister! They all seem to be affecting me greatly as well heheh - I actually just bought Emma yesterday so I'll be starting that very soon!



thanks girl!!!

cute, lol! credit - like i said - my theme base! Life without Austen would be so not 'dreamyyy' 😆

i hope this story doesn't serve spoilers to your reading of Emma, its one of the fun-n-est ever chic***!

ps: while i'm at it, must tell you i've been in eternal love with your abhi-armaan vm on Jaane Kyun...!

thanks for dropping by,
cheers!
nj
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

such a delight to read ur FF......

fantastic and logical ending ..................it was too good to be true........................brilliant...............
hope to read more of such beautiful stories that make for wonderful reading................
thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
The last part is soooooooooooooooo beautifully written
Thats Awesome
Loved it
Loved their whole conversation
Atlast Maan finally confessed and Geet accepted Him
Thanq so much for such a lovely SS
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Hiiii,
Beautifully written 👏👏👏👏👏👏..loved your writting style
The siggy is awesome..the convo between Geet n Maan is so cute...Fianlly Maan Confessed n Geet accepted 😃
Totally fabulous story dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roshni.

NJ,

You are BRILLIANT!👏 I loved your writing style and everything! The story is super cute! All I'm singing is "Baby, I'm addicted"😳 - awww thanks roshiii! 🤗

Reference to Jane Austen....icing on the cake! She is one of my favorite writers! I still can't get over P&P ☺️ And Emma 😆 - hahaha, well! if one is a reader, they've definitely grown up with austen, haven't they! - like her, or not (ahem sookie! 😆)

Please continue writing OS! Loving it!😃 thanks rosh, now that i know you're also a reader, outside of BC, you'll get all my spam posts in your pm dabba! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome last part! Loved it! 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wait.. plenty of stuff i thought i would say.. but its close to midnight n i have to move before ppl around me desperately decide to take me to an ear specialist first thing tomorrow!!

do wait till i edit this one!!

gn, shabba khair..lol sumthing's horribly wrong with me now.. n i don't even know wat!😆

**EDIT**
all coz of u girl! i couldn't listen to an inch of what ppl spoke around me or to me or God knows to whom, while i read that day.. was grinning like an idiot all the while..😊 just loved the end!!
'Jeonde raho puttar' was fab..super!luv daarji for that.. i was reminded of newton's laws u know, the scene whr muskaan was made to ride a tricycle around the cafe aur watever, singing dhoom machale dhoom!! hahaha.. no connection at all, but still remembered the thing n laughed out loud😆
and in between all the fun of maan breaking into her house unannounced at that hour, u very well managed bringing out sum nice catchy moments too.. high on drama, like u say..
i always thought geet's eyes resembled that of a doe, timid n innocent kinds.. but the mention of baby bambi brought back a flood of memories down onto me.. ranging from my favourite colourbox that had bambi's li'l pic onto it and going ahead to all the things n ppl i could associate it with.. well, u wr so so right with that simile!
u r a wonderful writer nj, do keep writing all right!! the maaneet effect is growin on me these days..
luv,
anu.🤗
Edited by lookwhoshere - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Awesome..Plz PM me incase u write again...

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