Just Another East Side Story...**Complete-09/10** - Page 11

Originally posted by: gk_09

Loved it NJ! ☺️ Do keep writing more..

Your writing style is simply amazing.

Originally posted by: Arushi.

God !!

You completed the entire thing and I havent even posted one comment till now? Shaay, I want to die of shame today, really.

So I made myself a deal, I am not reading Part 3, till I finish commenting on Part 1 and 2. I just hope this works, and you see my 2 cents here.

Sooo sorry !!

Love,

Arushi.

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Uh-oh!

Nj,

You've already completed the FF and I havn't even started reading it!😲 Oh well, I did start the first part and then my net went down and then I havn't returned to it yet.

Oh, but I promise, I'll comment individually for every part coz I'm soooo excited that you wrote on Maaneet! I was planning to start a pestering you mission along wid Nabz for an FF on Maaneet, looks like we needn't do that. Then again, this one's already over and I might want to defo reconsider my decision once I read the FF!😉

Originally posted by: lookwhoshere

wait.. plenty of stuff i thought i would say.. but its close to midnight n i have to move before ppl around me desperately decide to take me to an ear specialist first thing tomorrow!!

do wait till i edit this one!!

gn, shabba khair..lol sumthing's horribly wrong with me now.. n i don't even know wat!😆

**EDIT**

all coz of u girl! i couldn't listen to an inch of what ppl spoke around me or to me or God knows to whom, while i read that day.. was grinning like an idiot all the while..😊 just loved the end!!haha! i'm sure glad you did! its awesome fun writing entirely character oriented pieces, that when characters at play are maaneet, and based upon austen creations 😆

'Jeonde raho puttar' was fab..super!luv daarji for that.. i was reminded of newton's laws u know, the scene whr muskaan was made to ride a tricycle around the cafe aur watever, singing dhoom machale dhoom!! hahaha.. no connection at all, but still remembered the thing n laughed out loud😆 - LOL! really?!!! wow, i'd forgotten about that, until u mentioned it here, i swear! and i dunno if i ever mentioned the real life incident which had inspired it on the newton's thread or not, but it had in fact been my brother who got the dare back in high school!!! There's no forgetting the siht of his face, and even more the faces of people around who were fairly baffled! 😆

and in between all the fun of maan breaking into her house unannounced at that hour, u very well managed bringing out sum nice catchy moments too.. high on drama, like u say..

i always thought geet's eyes resembled that of a doe, timid n innocent kinds.. but the mention of baby bambi brought back a flood of memories down onto me.. ranging from my favourite colourbox that had bambi's li'l pic onto it and going ahead to all the things n ppl i could associate it with.. well, u wr so so right with that simile! - ah!!! i'm glad you agree, yeh the doe sure works, but that's what every wide eyed person looks like at one point or the other, yeh?!!! i always think geet looks like bambi 😆 and trust you to notice, and comment on this particular thing... see why, you just had to be coerced into making an appearance here?!!! 😃

u r a wonderful writer nj, do keep writing all right!! the maaneet effect is growin on me these days.. then you're just caught up with an epidemic dahlin'! its all over the place!!! 😆

luv,

anu.🤗

love to you too anu!! i just told simi how much your and her comment took me back to old IF days, and the very first gang... to people and times who have come all the way along from perfect imperfection - or at least newtons! .... there's a different kind of knowing i can boast of with you people, you'd just know, and why too! 🤗

glad u made time anu!
cheers,
nj

Originally posted by: simran1285

I've been meaning to come back and update my comment for this, but a recent accident has had me going in circles, funny how life can sneak up on you. Khair, I am here now at last... sent you a pm simi - take good care please!

First and foremost I am HUGE Austen fan so *hugs* for writing something that compliments her style. haha! so, very frankly, enid blyton and austen have been a kind of cult i've grown up with... blyton upto the age of 9 and austen from then to, say the early teens... the best part of my literature evoked fantasies of those many years are devoted to them, and so whatever else may or may not be, they stand high!!! Secondly, I can't help but notice how different this work was from your previous works, your writing style was just so fresh for the lack of better terms I would so it was different, but a nice different 😆 pardon me, my brain cells are fried at the moment. ... aww simi, one more time you need to take care 😕
i dunno if you imply fresh in terms of theme or writing style, but i reckon it has at least something to do with the theme - it sort of makes a difference i suppose, but i've had fun write it, and if readers receive it well - i've got no reason to complain! 😆

Story was an absolute pleasurable read, I didn't know you were watching Geet..hmm looks like our tastes run similar. Haha - so i sort of got coerced into watching it, from various ends, and because there is near extinction of quality stuff on television, I'm sticking to what's at least overtly engaging (read: decent actors) The CVs are beginning to annoy me though, I hope i can stick around long enough! The rugged Maan and the romantic Geet playing matchmaker a la Emma was a delight to read. The foreshadowing was also visible i.e. Adi crushing Geet which honestly was refreshing since it is usually Dev; whom I see was conviniently left out, but I am not complaining. lol! yeh i've had a hard time imagining Dev and Maan as brothers on the show... i decided they could share a more plausible bond for once 😆 Plus, no negative characters thank you! the show has enough of them, there's enough villainous consequence that can come about with mere lack of communication, unspoken words, and silly misconstruing of feelings - Austen's rule 😆

I am a romantic buff hence this was throughly enjoyable and I really hope you will give us the pleasure of reading more of these subtle love stories. - yayyyy once more, for you enjoying! whenever i'm writing, you're on the pm list - i never knew you were into maaneet, or you'd have goten this one first time too =)

*hint* ahem, I hope you understand that I am actually begging for another story in my last line😆