Just Another East Side Story...**Complete-09/10**

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flowers.forever

@flowers.forever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

nice one.....thnks for the pm...par plz write an AR or ARSH story...

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

mind blowing...............a beautiful creation of art....u r a great writer.............extremely flowing emotions and imaginations turning reality............

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

absolutely breath taking..

i dont have words to express what i feel...and believe..me i can write...

i am all shaken up inside... my cup runneth over..with emotion...

i am crying...really..it was moving..

fantastic work...do let me know..if there is more..of your work i can read..

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

"dear old caring Daar ji"

This line just made my day!🤣 I haven't finished reading yet but thought I'd let you know before it slipped my mind confronted with, what I assume, will be much Maneetness.😆

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Wow! Wow! Wow! That was just splendid.....awesome......wonderful.....magnificent! Loved it to the hilt! I am short of words after reading it. What an amazing SS! Everything was so perfectly penned......their characters retained its essence till the very end.....the fun part in between....the subtlety.....it was just outstanding! The way they saw a different person in each other....arousing new feelings......their confession......mind-blowing! Ah, am dazzled. Do write more and if you do then please PM me about it.

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: revav
ur writing is exceptional......simply awesome.............⭐️ -
you have a way with words that just shows that u r a master wen it comes to writing...............👏
ur choice of words,narration, imagination, backdrop,theme of the story, dialogues, presention, everything about ur story has a unique and endearing charm................so good to see such a brilliant talent amidst us...................😛 thanks you so much! your words humble and flatter me at once! 😊😊

just fabulous................amazing.....⭐️

love u and ur mini FF😛😛

thnxxxxxxxx for this lovely update

reva😳

i'm super glad you enjoyed the short story so far reva, hopefully, the finale will be to your liking to! will definitely keep you posted on my future maan-geet writings... =) once again, thanks for your wonderful words!

cheers,
nj

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Tomiko

I have to admit, it's not something I thought I'd be saying to you - I've had too much experience with your length!🤣 no kidding right?! well anyways, part3 should give you 'enough' solace! (quantitatively speaking at least! 😆)

And considering I'm here, I might as well deamnd for part 3 to go up NOW!😃 sorry for the delay nabby but i really hope the part makes up! 😃

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver
nice to and he know you atleast remember avout ff's...

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver
loved it! ❤️

AN?????🤓

geeee thanks! btw, you keep making me watch my back, in significant fear!

and yes, AN AN AN! (i might do AoL, followed by AN, but either way, i don't think you should complain much 😆)

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: ansah
gawd that was soo good

loved it.....really awesome.....

the confession was superb.....

you rocked it......👏

maan and geet as always adorable

Thanks ansah!!! I'm delighted you liked it so 😃😳

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: -afsha-
It was fab
Instead of confession their talk was going sumwhr other

Maan took her silence in a wrong way

Thank God Geet spoke up warna it wuld hav lead to Maan's heartbreak

Liked tehw ay u described all thier feelings emotions expressions n all

Its over strt sum new FF or SS

thanks afsha 🤗 i'm glad you enjoyed the story, and appreciate your constant comments!

i'll try to do something more on maaneet soon enough, and you can be sure to get a pm! 😳